雅思曲线写作.docx

1、雅思曲线写作曲 线 写 作一 审题1. 看文字信息,标题和图表找出写作对象，句型动词，纵坐标(数据) 横坐标（时间）。找出并写出备选的主语、谓语、状语。E.g.：标题 Fish and Meat consumption 对象：chicken, beef, lamb, fish-food .主语 动词：(静态) be动词或实义动词consumed/eat/used consumption 谓语（动态）变化动词 increase/decline 纵坐标：数据 Percentage/ proportion/ quantity/amount/figure/number 主语/状语横坐标：时间 状语备选

2、的主谓结构 （be） Chicken was the most popular food.(被动) Much less fish was consumed /eaten.（变化动词）The consumption of beef/ the percentage of beef declines. 2. 标题审图 标注出： 静态点： 最高点 最低点 中间类 （同类/相类似）动态变化： 上升的 下降的 持平的（同类/相类似）特殊点： 交叉点 转折点3. 改写开头段曲线类特有本质：how the amount/ percentage/proportion of sth changed = the c

3、hanges in the amount/ percentage/proportion of sth E.g.：The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. = The line chart illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European cou

4、ntry over the period from 1979 and 2004.= The line chart illustrates how the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country changed over the period from 1979 and 2004.练习：The graph below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differen

5、t countries. 二 写作顺序：方法一：（段落1） 先静态对比描写S1静，S2静，S3静，S4静，先找极端数据，即，最高点，最低点，再找中间类、同类或相类似别的。（段落2） 再动态变化描写（划分阶段写）S1动，S2动，S3动，S4动， 找出上升的，下降的，平稳不变的。 方法二：整线描写：每跟曲线的静点和变化同时写S1静，S1动; S2静，S2动; S3静，S3动; S4静，S4动三 曲线写作模板（Body段）方法一：（段落1） 先静态对比描写S1静，S2静，S3静，S4静，先找极端数据，即，最高点，最低点，再找中间类、同类或相类似别的。（段落2） 再动态变化描写（划分阶段写）S1动，S

6、2动，S3动，S4动， 找出上升的，下降的，平稳不变的。 （段落1）S1 + 动词/被动语态/serves as (is used as) the main n (+ 数据) +时间.,While S1 was the least popular + n , with + 数据+时间. Moreover, S2 and S3 + 动词/被动语态 in similar quantities + 数据.（段落2）However，the percentage /proportion of S4 increases to/by + 数据 in + 时间. On the other hand, ther

7、e was a fall in the percentage of S5, decreasing from +数据 to+数据 by +时间. What is worth mentioning is that the percentage /consumption level of S1 remain stable +时间.范文E.g.：剑7 In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken we

8、re eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less s

9、ignificantly to just below 50 gram, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250grams per p

10、erson per week. 结尾： overall, the graph shows how th consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period. 方法二：整线描写：每跟曲线的静点和变化同时写，S1静，S1动; S2静，S2动; S3静，S3动; S4静，S4动S1 + 动词/被动语态/serves as (is used as) the main n (+ 数据) +时间. And the percentag

11、e /proportion of S1 increases to/by + 数据 in + 时间. S2 was the least popular + n , with + 数据+时间. there was a fall in the percentage of S2, decreasing from +数据 to+数据 by +时间. Moreover, S3 and S4 + 动词/被动语态 in similar quantities + 数据. What is worth mentioning is that the percentage /consumption level of S

12、3 remain stable +时间.范文E.g.：剑6Through the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purpose and this increased dramatically from about 500kg to around 3000kg in the year 2000. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mi

13、d-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1000kg, while domestic use fell more slowly to only 300 kg. (分阶段写) 剑5In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Wes

14、tern countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the n

15、ext two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries. 四 曲线必备万能句型静态数据对比描写（三个必备句型） 最高点 S1 was the most popular/dominant/main + n , with + 数据+时间.

16、= S1 + 动词/被动语态/serves as (is used as) the main n (+ 数据) +时间.= The largest quantity of n +被动语态 is S1+ 数据+时间.= S1, the highest proportion of all, +被动语态 + 数据+时间.= S1 + 动词/被动语态 in the largest quantity, +数据+时间. 最低点 ,While S1 was the least popular + n , with + 数据+时间.= In contrast, the consumption of S2 wa

17、s minimal+ 数据+时间.= Conversely, the smallest quantity of n + 动词/被动语态 from S2 and S3 + 数据+时间.= The proportion of n in S1, the highest of all, + 动词 + 数据+时间.= S1 + 动词/被动语态 in the lowest quantity, +数据+时间. 中间类 (同类/相类似), while the proportion of S3 and S4 is / stood at +数据+时间 .= Furthermore, much less S2 an

18、d S3 + 动词/被动语态 + 数据.= Moreover, S2 and S3 + 动词/被动语态 in similar quantities + 数据.E.g.：1. In 1997, beef was by bar the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams per person per week.2. Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units).= Coal was used as the main electricity source in

19、 Australia (50 units).= The main electricity source used in Australia was coal, with 50 units3. The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purpose.4. Tokyo serves the greatest number of passengers per year, at 190 passengers. 5. Britain has spent most heavily on the range of the goods.6

20、. Food was the main average weekly expenditure. 7. Coal was used as the main electricity source in Australia (50 units).= Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units)8The proportion of the aged over 65 in Japan, the highest of all, kept stable at 50% in 1990.9 Australia used coal as

21、 the main electricity source (50 units). = Coal was used as the main electricity source in Australia (50 units). = The main electricity source used in Australia was coal, with 50 units. E.g.：1. Fish was the least popular food (just over 3 grams)2. German is the lowest spender.3. Lamb was eaten in th

22、e smallest quantities, with 5 grams.= The smallest quantities of lamb were eaten in 1998, at 5 grams.E.g.：1 France and Italy maintain middle position. 2 While much less fish was consumed (just over 5 grams).3 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 4 grams). 4 In 1940, the proporti

23、on of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in USA.动态描写变化 （三个必备句型） 上升类 However，the percentage /proportion of S1 increases to/by + 数据 in + 时间.= However，there was an increase in the percentage of S1, rising from +数据 to+数据 by +时间.= In contrast, the year of+

24、时间witnessed an increase in the percentage of S1, from+数据to+数据= On the other hand, the consumption of S1 shows an upward trend/ increases + 时间( 数据).= On the other hand, a dramatic increase can be found in the consumption of S1 + 时间( 数据).=Interestingly, S1 outnumbers/overtakes S2 by +数据 in+ 时间. 下降类 ,W

25、hile the percentage /proportion of S1 declined to/by + 数据+时间.= and there was a fall in the percentage of S1, decreasing from +数据 to+数据 by +时间.= In contrast, the year of+时间witnessed a decrease in the percentage of S1, from+数据to+数据.= On the other hand, the consumption of S1 shows a downward trend/decr

26、ease to/by+数据+时间.= On the other hand, a dramatic fall can be found in the consumption of S1 + 时间( 数据). 持平类 What is worth mentioning is that the percentage /consumption level of S1 remain stable +时间.= Furthermore, S1 continue/ remain the least/ main/second +n, 动词ing +数据+时间.相似类We can see a similar pat

27、tern in the proportion of S1+数据+时间= A similar pattern can be found in the proportion of S1+数据+时间= The proportion of S1 follow the same pattern as +数据+时间E.g.：1. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, shows an upward trend. 2. During the period, however, the consumption of chicken fell dramati

28、cally to approximately 4 grams. 3. London has the largest increase in the price of average house. =London has the largest increase in house price.4. In 1980, however, the percentage of Coal increased/crept up by 4%/to 51%.5. In contrast, there was an increase/creeping-up of 4% in the percentage of C

29、oal.6. The year of 1980 witnessed/reflected a rise in the percentage of Coal, increasing by 4%.7. In contrast, in 1980 Coal outnumbered its counterpart by 4 percent/10 times as the main source. 8. Coal in 1980 overtook its counterpart by 4 percent as the main source.9. While Nuclear rocketed by 10 t

30、imes.10. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased.11. While the figures for the Weston countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 25% 12. The proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades. E.g.：1. Th

31、ere was a decrease of 4% in the percentage of Hydro.2. In addition, the year of 1980 witnessed a slump of 9% in Natural Gas.3. However, during the 15-year period, the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 80 grams respectively. 4. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 30%, wile domestic use rose more slowly to only 10%，both far more below the level of consumption by agriculture. E.g.：1. What is worth mentioning is that Oil was almost stable during the decade.2. Furthermore, hydro continued to be another significant source, supplyi