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写作考前高分特训讲义朱伟

写作考前高分特训

高分结构篇--------必背范文大作文（图表漫画类）

（英语二）图表作文

1.Directions:

Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.In

yourwriting,youshould

1）Interpretthechartand

2）Giveyourcomments.

Youshouldwriteatleast160words.

WriteyouressayononANSWERSHEET2.（15points）

2010年考研专业学位统考英语二写作真题

（What）Inthischart,wecanfigureoutthatthemobilephonesubscriptionsin

developedcountrieshaveasteadyandslightincreasefrom2000to2004andthen

remainconstanttill2008.Meanwhile,themobilephonesubscriptionsindeveloping

countrieshavewitnessedaslowincreasefrom2000to2003andthenagreatsurge

from2004to2008:

thebiggesteventbeginsat2003,whenturnoversindeveloping

countriessurpassthoseindevelopedonesforthefirsttime.Fromthenon,thistrend

displaysitsirreversiblecoherence.

（Analyses）Thischartreflectsdifferentdevelopingmodesofmobilephone

industryindevelopedanddevelopingcountries.Thedevelopedcountrieshavea

limitednumberofpopulations,mostofwhomarewell-educatedand

purchasing-powerful.Therefore,thespreadingofthemobilephoneserviceisefficient

andsoonthemarketissaturated.Also,atthebeginning,thedevelopedcountrieshave

morepeoplewhocanaffordthisservice.Accompanyingtimegoingbyisthe

economicboomindevelopingentities,whichhavealargepopulationwhokeepsa

largedemandformobileservice.Asthemobilephoneservicebecomescheaperand

cheaper,theincreasingcustomerssubscribetobenefitfromthisservice.

（Conclusion）Asdiscussedabove,itisnotsurprisingtoseethischange.Inmy

opinion,thistrendthatthenumberofmobile-phonesubscriptionsdramaticallyriseup

inemergingcountrieswillcontinueforawhileintheforeseeablefuture.

2.Directions：

1）Thetwopiechartsbelowshow（a）thethreemaintypesofshopwhichsellyour

company’sproducts,and

（b）theproportionofyoursalesthateachtypeofshophandlein2004and2005.

2）Usingtheinformationfromthecharts,writeashortreport,whichdescribesthe

situationin2004andcomparesitwiththesituationin2005.

3）Writeabout160-180wordsonyouranswersheet.

Elaboratelyandluminously,thesetwopiechartsdisplaytheproportion

distributionofthethreemaintypesofshops,whichsoldourcommoditiesoverthe

periodfrom2004to2005.

Iamintendedtomakesomefurtheranalysesasfollowings.In2004,48.1%ofour

productswerepromotedbyhypermarket,46.5%bysmallfamily-runshopsand5.4%

viaotheroutlets.Thenafteronlyanother365days,theshareofhypermarketsroseup

sharplybysome11%to59.6%.Simultaneously,theturnoverscontributedbysmall

family-runshopsdecreasedsymmetricallybyjustover11%to35%.Actully,itis

hardlynecessaryforustothinktwicebeforefiguringoutthistruthofmatterthatthe

quantityofhypermarkets’upsurgeisequivalenttotheoneofsmallfamilyshops’

downturns/slides,whichpredictsawholenewbusinesstrendintheforeseeablefuture,

thatis,largeshoppingchains,duototheirmuchcheapergoodspriceaswellasample

suppliesandkaleidoscopicoptions,willsurelytakemoremarketingsharesin

competition.（原因分析句）Also,therearestillsomeotheroutletsholding/whichhold

moreorlesssteady,withaslightdropinshareofonly0.3%.

Consideringthesegeneralillustrations/resolutions,wemayreasonablyarriveata

conclusionthatthelargesupermarketsaretakingmoreofourgoodsthanother

retailers,withtheirsaleshavingrepresentedwellover50%oftotalturnoversyet.The

tendencythathypermarketswillcontinuallyplaycriticalrolesinourcustomers’daily

purchasingmaybeirreversible.

重点预测：

网上购物（电子书）与实体店购物的销售额比较

Shoppingonline（electronicreading）vs.shoppingindepartmentstore

（英语一）漫画作文：

220-280字

WhatWhyHow

虚度光阴，人生遗憾

范文一：

（Whentheissueofwastingtimegainsaseriesofconcernsfromthepublic,can

westillstandthere,hesitatingforwhatoccurs?

）Aswecanseefromthedepiction,a

singleperson,sittinginfrontofatelevisionwhichbroadcastssomekindsofsoap

operas,isappreciatingeverynutsandboltsoftheseinvariableplots.Actually,itisa

morningcalltosendusamessagethatwehumanbeingsalwaysperformsomething

wastingmuchofprecioustime,thusspoilingyouthaseverysecondelapses.

（Butmyownworrytodayislessthatoftheoverwhelmingproblemofcommon

housewivesorhousehusbandsthanitisoftheslightlymoreluxuriousagonyofthe

declineintimemanagingabilityevenoftheeducatedteenagers.）Severalfactors

couldweighheavilyforthisdegeneration,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethe

followingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith,habitishabit.Wearegoodatgivingourselves

sufficientexcusestosupportwhatwealwaysdoinourdailylife.Ifoneexampleis

needed,Icouldnotbutmentionthefollowingwell-knownscientist,whosenameis

AndrewD.C,illuminatingthatakindofhabit,representingasenseofspiritual

existence,canneverbechangedaslongascontinuingfor47days，noristhiskindof

time-wastingpractice.Furthermore,externally,oursocietyiswitnessingan

overwhelmingnumberoflow-levelTVprograms,rangingfromentertainingshow,

TVtalkshowandTVseriestosomeotherinferiorproducts,whichdifferentiatefrom

formsaswellasbroadcastingtimebutneverfromtheiressentialcontents.Then,the

consequenceisdistinct.Itgoeswithnoexaggerationtosaythatsoapoperaruinsthe

conceptofcherishingtime.

Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgment.Itis,undoubtedly,verytimethatwe

shouldtakesomeavailablemethodstoenduptheseinappropriatedoings,involving

layingdowntheeffectiveregulationstorestrictthequantitiesofentertainments,

deliveringthemoderatetimeoutlookandguaranteeingmorerationallifestyles.

（331个字）

范文二：

1.Mind-focusedlyandeyesight-straightly/Enjoyablyandconcentratedly,asingle

person,sittinginfrontofatelevisionwhichbroadcastssomekindsofsoapoperas,is

appreciatingeveryboltsandnutsoftheseinvariableplots./2.Elaboratelyand

luminously,thecartoonseriesaboveextendavividstorythatasingleperson,sittingin

frontofatelevisionwhichbroadcastssomekindsofsoapoperas,isappreciating

everyboltsandnutsoftheseinvariableplots.Actually,thesecartoonseriesappear

veryurgenttoremindusthatwehumanbeingsalwaysperformsomethingwasting

muchofprecioustime,thusspoilingyouthaseverysecondelapsed.

Thereseemtobetwoelementsinvolvedinouraccustomingtorepeatingsome

tediouspracticewhichmaydamagebadlyouroriginallygloriousplanof

living.Firstly,habitishabit,wearegoodatgivingourselvessufficientexcusesto

supportwhatwealawaysdoinourdailylife.Ifoneexampleisneeded,Icouldnot

butmentionthefollowingwell-knownscientist,whosenameisAndrewD.C,

illuminatingthatakindofhabit,meaningasenseofspiritualsubstance,canneverbe

changedaslongascontinuingfor47days，noristhiskindoftime-wastingpractice.

Futhermore,externally,oursocietyiswitnessinganoverwhelmingnumberof

low-levelTVprograms,rangingfromentertainingshow,TVtalkshow,TVseries,etc.

tosomeotherinferiorproducts,whichdifferentiatefromformsaswellas

broadcastingtimebutneverreallyfromtheiressentialcontents.Then,theconsequence

isverydistinct.

Fortunately,thatisnottheDayofJudgment.Itisimperativethatdrastic

measuresshouldbetakentoendupthesemalpractices---burningupourlimited

passionsandbelief,suchasestablishingsomeeffective-and-coherentregulationsto

refrainfromchasingfortrendyeventsandensuringmorerationalthinkingstyle

concerningtime-arrangement.

正面话题示例：

范文一：

（Whentheimportanceoflivinginahappywaygainsanoverridingfocusfrom

thepublic,canwestillstandtheredetachedlyforwhatkindofeffortsweshallmake?

）

Aswecanseefromthedepiction,afashionableMr.Fish,whoappearscontentedand

easy,isenjoyinghisholidayduetonothingifneitherarelativelysatisfactory

circumstancenorapositivemood.Actually,itisamorningcalltosendusamessage

thatapartfromaseriesofouterevents,differentattitudestothelifemaytrigger

totallydifferentoutcomes.

Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceofthecriticaleffectsof

sensationtocontent.Thereseemtobetwoelementsinvolved.Firstly,owingtolack

ofeithertheblessingfromtheGoddessofGoodFortuneorgoodopportunitiesto

attaintheirimaginedhappiness,somemayfeelhardlyeasytobidfarewelltothose

gloomybygonesfilledwiththeinequalityaswellasinjustice.Ifoneexampleis

needed,Icouldnotbutmentionafriend,whowaslaidofffromtheiroriginally

brilliantposition,then,sorrowfulfortheirfailingtomakebothendsmeet.Apartfrom

theabove-mentionedaspect,anotherfactorcontributingtothetendencytopromote

goodfeelingisself-assurance,whichenablepeopletokeeponfightingwithoutany

suspiciontotheirownvalue.Agoodcaseinpointisamovienamed―Pursuitof

Happiness‖performedbyWillSmith,whichtellsusapparently（that）optimismand

dependingonourselvesplaycriticalrolesinourself-content.

Takingintoaccountallresolutionsmentionedabove,wemaysafelyarriveata

conclusionthatitis,unquestionably,beneficialtobeself-assuredintheroadof

pursuingbrilliantlife.Yet,also,alittlebitbetteratmosphereisgood.Itisimperative

thatreliablemeasuresshouldbetakentoformulatesustainableandpositivestep-upof

satisfa