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LOGO,ChildrenofHeaven,读后续写教学案例11,Contents,ReadingforinformationReadingforlanguage,Readingforstructure,FindingcuesforwritingContinuationWriting,ChildrenofHeaven,Reading,Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Oneday,AlitookZahrasshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasntuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.Zahrasschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Reading,Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.,Readingforinformation,Whathappenedoneday?
Oneday,AlitookZahrasshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasntuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.,WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?
Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Howwasthefamilycondition?
Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.,Readingforinformation,WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?
Theylivedinapoorneighborhood.,Whathappenedoneday?
Helosthisyoungersistersonlypairofshoes.,Howwasthefamilycondition?
Thefamilywasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet.,Readingforinformation,WhywasAliexcitedaboutthelongdistancerace?
Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.,HowdidAlisolvetheproblemandkeepthesecret?
Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.Didthesolutionwork?
Zahrasschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Readingforinformation,HowdidAlisolvetheproblemandkeepthesecret?
Hebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.,WhywasAliexcitedaboutthelongdistancerace?
Thethirdprizeoftheracewasanewpairofshoes,sohepromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.,Didthesolutionwork?
Notreally.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Readingforinformation,WouldAlistillfinishthird?
HowdidAliperformintherace?
Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.However,hestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.,Didanythingspecialhappenduringtherace?
Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.,Readingforlanguage,breathedownonesneck,breathe是呼吸的意思;neck是脖子的意思。
breathedownsomeonesneck连在一起,是对某人盯得特别紧的意思。
例句:
IhaveonecustomerwhoconstantlywatchesmewhileImrepairinghiscar.Finally,Itoldhimthatifhecontinuestobreathedownmyneck,hesgoingtohavetofindanothermechanic.Icantconcentrateonmyworkwithhimaroundallthetime.,Readingforlanguage,Gettingmoreandmoreexhausted,hethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.,redandhislegsbegantoache.,Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestaye