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雅思真题大作文范例高分范文

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文

_年4月_日雅思大作文高分范文

原题:

Peopletodaycanshop,workandcommunicatewithothersviatheInternet.

Theydonotneedtodotheseface-to-face.Isitapositiveornegative

development?

雅思写作思路解析:

A使用网络（而不是面对面）去交流和做其他事情B增加效率C给生活带来便利

A使用网络（而不是面对面）去交流和做其他事情B减少公司运营成本C利润增加

A使用网络（而不是面对面）去交流和做其他事情B人的社会技能下降C人觉得疏远,家庭和社区不再有团结的感觉

这个题目确定A.只是A有点复杂〝使用网络,而不是面对面去交流.购物和工作〞.如果你只写使用网络的好坏处（而没有不断出现面对面交流的字眼）,就是跑题.

雅思写作高分范文:

Nowadays,manydailytaskscanbeaccomplishedwithoutusmeetingotherface

toface.Generally,Itendtobelieveitleadstomanydesirableresuits.

Itisevidentthatfulfillingsometasksovermoderntechnologiessuchasthe

Internetandothercomputernetworksishighlyefficient.Inthepast,ifpeople

hadtheneedtodoshopping,theyhadtogototheshoppingmall;buttoday,all

canbedonewiththeclickofamouseandthegoodswillbedeliveredhome,even

atalowerprice.Also,weusedtoneedtogotothebankandwaitfora

desperatelylonglineifwewantedtomakeatransactionfromonebankaccount

toanother:

instead,nowwemaycomfortablymakeuseoftheself-servicebanking

athome.Actually,almostallbanksandfinancialorganizationsare

well-connectedtotheInternet,whichpromotesthedevelopmentofinternational

tradeandworldeconomydramatically.

Thus,obviously,theefficiencyoflifehasbeenimprovedsignificantlydue

tothetechnologicaladvances.

However,thatisnottosaythatlackofface-to-facecommunicationbrings

aboutnoproblems.Oneofthebiggestconcernsissafety.Withtheincreasing

virusthreatsandwell-trainedhackers,onlinedealsarewelle_posedtoall

kindsofrisksandlosses,fore_ample,thewide-spreadproblemofidentity

theft.Therefore,whenmakingthemostofthedesirablechangesbroughtaboutby

technology,weshouldbeawareofitspotentialdownsidesandfindawayto

minimizethenegativeimpacts.

Overall,therearebothfavorableandunfavorableeffectsonindividualsand

societyifeverydaytasksareperformedwithouttheneedofseeingeachother.

ButIamquiteoptimisticaboutitsfuture,andIthinkpeopleandcountries

alikewillbenefitfromitonanewlevelsoon.

雅思真题作文7分范文:

网络取代面对面交流

原题Peopletodaycanshop,workandcommunicatewithothersviatheInternet.

Theydontneedtodothesefacetoface.Isitapositiveornegative

development?

雅思写作大作文解析与审题

连续几周新题后,本周雅思作文回到了旧题模式,重现了_年7月_日的作文题目.

本周考题涉及网络的应用.关于网络对我们生活.工作和学习方方面面的影响,是雅思写作考试中的重点,〝有了互联网,我们就可以不（上班,上学,去博物馆,去商店,去旅游......）〞互联网运用的话题是比较常见的写作题,本次题目要求讨论的话题是〝现在人们都用网络来购物.工作.沟通,不再需要面对面交流了〞,因此我们需要围绕〝网络与面对面交流〞来进行讨论.那么,使用网络来取代面对面交流,这到底是好还是坏呢?

无疑,这不是一个非此即彼的问题,我们可以做双边讨论,即先讨论网络交流相对于面对面交流的好处（节约时间.节约成本.提高效率）,然后讨论网络交流的坏处（误会增多.感情变淡）,最后提出结论,在某些情况下网络交流能给我们带来好处,但在很多情况下,面对面交流是不可取代的.

雅思写作7分范文

Weliveinanageofelectroniccommunication,andtheInternetdoeshelpus

inalotofways.Yetthefactthatwehavecomputersandsmartphonesreadily

availabledoesnotmeanthatwedonotneedface-to-facecommunicationany

more.

我们生活在电子通信时代,互联网的确在很多方面帮助我们.然而,我们可以随时使用电脑和智能手机这一事实并不意味着我们不再需要面对面的交流.

Electronictechnologyhasdramaticallychangedthewaysweshop,workand

communicateandhasbroughtaboutamyriadofbenefits.Fromemailstoinstant

messagingtoSkypetosocialmedia,theInternethasmadeourcommunication

fasterandeasierthaneverbefore.Besides,thecostoftheInternet

communicationissignificantlylowerthanthetraditionalmeansofcommunication

likeface-to-facemeetings.Thetechnologyconnectsustoouronlinesuppliers,

colleaguesintheworkplace,familiesandfriendsfromallovertheglobefor

justasmallfractionofthecostrequiredofanofflinemeeting.

电子技术极大地改变了我们购物.工作和交流的方式,并带来了无数的好处.从电子邮件到即时通信到Skype到社交媒体,网络让我们的交流比以往任何时候都快速和容易.此外,与传统的面对面交流方式相比,网络通信的成本要低得多.技术将我们与世界各地的在线供应商.工作同事.家人和朋友联系在一起,其费用只是线下见面所需费用的极少一部分.

Thatbeingsaid,scientificevidenceismountingthattheadventofdigital

technologyishavingadetrimentaleffectoninterpersonalrelationships.

Everythingfrombodylanguageandfaciale_pressionstoattentivenessand

engagementcanindicatedifferentthoughtsandfeelings—eachofwhichcanonly

betrulyobservedthroughface-to-facecommunication.So,despitetheclear

upsidesofdigitalcommunication,therearecircumstancesunderwhichthereis

nosubstituteforface-to-facecommunication.Meanwhile,thecompletedependence

ontheInternetforcommunicationmayresultinthesenseofalienationand

depressionwhichwillkeepusapartfromtherestoftherealworld.

尽管如此,越来越多的科学证据表明,数字技术的出现正在对人际关系产生有害影响.从肢体语言和面部表情到关注度和投入度可以表示不同的想法和感觉,而这些只有通过面对面的交流才能真正地被观察到.所以,尽管数字交流有明显的优势,但在某些情况下,面对面的交流是无法替代的.同时,完全依赖互联网来交流交流可能导致疏远和沮丧的感觉,这将使我们远离现实世界.

Inconclusion,itisnecessarytobalancethoseInternetinteractionswith

face-to-facecommunication.ItishardtosayhowfartheInternetwouldgo,but

face-to-facecommunicationhasnotyetbeenandneverwillbereplacedby

technology.（274words）

总之,必须平衡网络互动和面对面的交流.很难说互联网能走多远,但面对面的交流还没有.也永远不会被科技所取代.

_年4月_日雅思写作大作文范文

Inmodernworld,it’spossibletoshop,workandcommunicatewithpeoplevia

theInternetandwithoutanyface-to-facecontactwithothers.Towhate_tentis

thisapositiveornegativedevelopment?

雅思写作真题解析

本题属于科技类话题.该题也是科技类话题的经典例题之一,讨论科技与人们日常生活和工作的关系.考生在思考论点时可以围绕题目中给出的〝shop〞,

〝work〞和〝communication〞这几个层面入手;此外,论点偏向好处更好写一些.

paragraph1:

结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点.

paragraph2:

论述远程办公和交流的好处.（1.节约员工的时间;2.扩大朋友圈和缓解相思之苦）

paragraph3:

论述网络购物的好处.（1.快速便捷2.更多购物选择）

paragraph4:

论述缺乏面对面接触的坏处.（1.缺乏现实交际技能）

Paragraph5:

总结上文论点,强调自己的观点.

雅思写作大作文范文

Insuchadigitalage,whichfeaturesthewideavailableofinternetto

individuals,usersareabletodealwithabunchofdailytasksonline,ranging

fromdoingshopping,arrangingandcompletingworkingprojectsaswellas

interactingwithstrangersandfriends.Inmyview,thistendencyislargely

beneficialforpeople’sworkandlife.

Tocommencewith,itisconceivablethattelecommutingsavestimefor

employees.Withoutspendingtimeonthewaytoandfromwork,officeworkers

havemoredisposabletimeandthefle_ibleschedule,inwhichcase,theycould

workthehourstheywishedandhaveabetterrest.Inaddition,online

communicationenlargesthecircleoffriends.Morespecifically,social

networkingwebsitesisdeemedasaneffectivewaytomakeconnectionswith

peoplewithsimilarinterestsandgoals.What’smore,longdistance

communicationrelievescouplesorfamiliesfromlovesicknessandhomesickness.

Eventhoughlivingthousandsofmilesawayfromhometown,theycanstareatthe

facesoftheirbelovedandlistentotheirvoice.

Intermsofonlineshopping,ithasbeenthoughtastheindispensablepartof

modernlifeduetoitsconvenience.Insteadofgoingtomalls,theonlything

consumershavetodoisviewingthehigh-definitionpicturesandclickthe

buttonofpayment,thecommoditiestheychoosewouldbedeliveredathomein

severaldaysorappointedtime.Thisisespeciallyusefulforpeopleworkingon

atightscheduleorintimesofinclementweather.Undeniably,customerscan

purchasegoodsallovertheworld;inconsequence,thereisnoneedforthemto

traveltoforeigncountriesforsomefancydressesorhandbags.

Ontheflipside,alackofface-to-facecontactdoesgenerateharmful

effects,amongwhichthemostobviousisthatthelossofinterpersonalskills

inreality.Infact,bodylanguagesuchaseyecontactandgestures,andsocial

psychologylaidemphasisoninrealwayareinvalidandignoredinvirtual

world,makingpeopleincompetentandunskilledinface-to-facesituations.

Inconclusion,althoughthedimensionofcommunicationwouldbediminished,I

stronglycontendthattheincreasingpopularityofcommunicationviainternet

benefitspeoplefromallwalksoflife.

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