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外研版英语短文改错知识讲解
外研版英语短文改错
(一)
DearElli,
I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’mfat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine?
Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?
Anddoyouknowanyotherway?
Pleasegivemesomeadvices.
Yours,
Mary
(二)
DearSir,
IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
(三)
Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:
AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?
Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.
(四)
DearTracy,
AlthoughI'm16yearsold,butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays:
“DoingasIsay,notasIdo.”Evenworse,hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests,makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.
(五)
EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!
”,heshouted.
(六)
Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.
(七)
In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’shandbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.
(八)
OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.
(九)
Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade.
(十)
Thankyouforyoure-mail!
Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?
Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!
Lisa
(十一)
HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?
Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?
Thehousewhichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem.
(十二)
Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesawthatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.RespecttheoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingthisincidentandyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.
(十三)
Hello!
I’mHannah,isformerEditorofKiwibox’sLife&Peoplesection.I’venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&School.Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:
Iam17-year–oldhighschooljuniorfromArizona.I’vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuaryof2004,whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesincludemusic,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.I’mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&Schoolsection.Ilovereadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I’dlovetoanswerit.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.
(十四)
HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,butin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoyce’scar,andsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworld’srecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover£2toputthecarbackintoperfectcondition.
ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebestcarintheworld”.
(十五)
Howmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparents?
Whendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmind?
Youparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildrenstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemorecloseasyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?
Findchanceanddosomethingforthemortohaveasinceretalkwiththem.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy.
(十六)
“Practicemakesperfect”wasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotanymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,we’lldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayingisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.NotonlyisthesayingusefulinEnglishstudy,itisalsohelpfulinourdaylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfect”.
(十七)
AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisv