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精品资料历年考研英语写作范文1997

历年考研英语写作范文（1997-2012）

1997

世界烟草总产量世界吸烟人口比例

世界每年吸烟损失

　　Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarettesmokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobaccocompaniesinsistthattheycontributegreatlytotheworldeconomybypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworkers.

　　Personally,Ibelievethatcigaretteproductionandconsumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstly,smokingisresponsibleformanyfataldiseasessuchaslungcancer,heartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothesurvey,tobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%oftheworldpopulation,andamongthem,threemillionpeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear.Thefactthattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom14.364billionpoundsin1994to14.2billionpoundsin1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethenegativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondly,tobaccoconsumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asisindicatedinthepictures,200billionUSdollarsislostduetosmokingeachyear.Obviously,thetotallossofmoneyaroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceedsthegainintheindustry.

　　Inconclusion,astheeconomicdevelopmentaimsatmakingourlifebetter,wecannotsacrificeourhealthforshort-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmoreandmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewhosufferfromsmokingrelatedillnesses,thenotionofpromotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnotjustifiable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotaltobaccoban.

　　1999

　　高分作文

　　（15—13分）

　　Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.

　　Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?

Ithinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewhere

　　somewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.

　　Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovethenatureandprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.

[评语]内容符合要求，包括了图中说明“effect”的有关信息。

语言流畅，层次分明，句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确，文章长度符合要求。

但还有少数错误出现。

2000

　　高分作文

（1）

　　Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.

　　Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtoover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviously

　decreased.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,wewon'tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.

　　Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.Also,Ibelievethatwehumanbeingscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.

[给分]14分

　　[评语]内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。

（2）

　　Nowwecanseetwopicturesaboutthehistoryofworldcommercialfishing.Thefirstpictureshowsusafishing-boatandawaterrichinfishin1990.Onthecontrary,welearnthat,accordingtothesecondpicture,thefishesdecreasesharplytoonlyonewiththeincreaseofboatsin1995.

　　Thepurposeofthepicturesistowarnusthatthesearesourcesarebeingruined,andweneedtoprotectouroceannow.AsfarasIamconcerned,thiskindoffishingattributestothedriveofmoney.Toearnmoney,somepeoplejustwanttocatchfishwhetheritissmallorbig.Secondly,somepeopleignorefishhasitsgrowingtime.Excessivefishinginashorttimecausesdecreaseoffish.Inaddition,thedevelopmentofmodemsciencewillalsoacceleratetheprocess.

　　Nowadays,manypeoplehavegraduallyfoundtheproblem.Theyappealtotakingmeasurestodevelopingtheresourceoffishandcontrolfishingforcommercialaim,whichisalsothepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures.First,thegovernmentshouldlaycounter-lawstostoptheoperationofcommercialfishing.Second,itisaworldproblem,sothegovernmentsmustdecidetopunishpeoplewhofishtoomuch.Toconclude,itisclearthatthefutureforfishwillbebrightwiththesolutionoftheproblem.

[给分]11分

[评语]内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达基本清楚，文字连贯，句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误，长度符合要求。

2001

（1）

　　Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountries,speakdifferentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontousall.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferentpeopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto.

　　Asshowninthepicture,loveislikealampwhichshinesbrightestindarkplaces.Thistellsusasimpletruth:

Loveislikealamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismostneeded.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostinthestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobodyseemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnotverygoodandIamashyperson,Ithoughtsheneededhelpverymuch.Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetoldmeshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherhotel.Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuchbecausemyhelpwasneededverymuch.

Myhelpwaslikealampinadarkplace.

　　Ithinkweallshouldbelikealampinadarkplace,showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,eventostrangers.Inthisway,wecanmakethisworldaharmoniousandpeacefulworld.

（2）

Isawapicturerecentlyinyournewspaper.Thereisasmalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,whichissmiling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itwillbebrightestinthedarkestplace."Ithinkitshowsusavividpicture:

Whereandwhoneedlive,loveisthenoblestfeeling.SoIbelievethatweshouldgiveourlovetothosewhoareinneed.Ifeveryonecangivehislovetowhominneed,thentheworldwillbefilledwithlove.

　　Forexample,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsofpupils,whocan'taffordtoattendschool.Someofthemneverattendschool.Theyareunfortunate,butnowtherearemanywarm-heartedpeoplewhogivehelptothepupils.Ofcourse,wecanalsoshowourloveinmanyotherways.Forinstance.Asafriend,weshouldhelpourfriendswhentheyareintrouble.Thereisasaying:

Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Asayoungman,weshouldrespecttheolder.Whenwewalkonthestreet,wecanhelptheblindoroldpeopleandchildrentocrosstheroad.

　　Inaword,Therearemanywaystoshowourlove.Thepeopleallovertheworldshouldloveandrespecteachother.Thebestwaytoshowourloveistohelpotherswhentheyareindifficulties.

2002

AnAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostume（服装）

　　高分作文

（1）

　　ThisisaveryinterestingpictureofalovelyAmericangirldressedintraditionalChinesecostumewithasweetsmileonherface.Shewearsapearlnecklace,colorfulribbon,earrings,andotherdecoratingthingsthatarecharacteristicoftheclothesofaChineseminoritynationality.Itisobviousthatasaresultofouropen-doorpolicy,moreandmoreforeignersvisitChinaandbecomeinterestedinournationalculture,whichismakingitgointernational.

　　Thereisnoreasontomakeafussaboutthisphenomenon.Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnologyandeconomy,theworldisbecomingsmallerandsmaller,andinternationalculturalexchangeshavebecomemoreandmorefrequent,whichisinevitablyimprovingourmutualunderstandingandfriendshipwithothercountries.

　　AsChinesecitizens,weshouldrespectourownnationalcultureandlearnusefulthingsfromtheculturesofdifferentnations,whichwillenableustomakegreatprogressinmanyways.Ibelieveahappyandbrightfutureisawaitingusifwemakeeveryefforttopromoteculturaldevelopmentbothnationallyandinternationally.

（2）

　　Nowadays,"nationalcultureorinternationalculture"hasbecomeamatterofgreatconcernforthegeneralpublicinoursociety,especiallyforthosewhoareconfrontedwiththisproblem.Nowlet'stakealookattheAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostume.Shelooksverybeautifulwithanicesmileonherface.ItseemsthatthegirlisveryfondoftheChinesecostume.

　　Obviously,thepictureindicatesthatacultureofonenationmaybecomeinternational,whichisbeneficialtoallthehumanbeings.SinceChinahasopeneditsdoorwidelytotheoutsideworld,manypeoplefromdifferentcountrieswanttovisitChina.TheywillacceptandlovetheChinesecultureasawhole.Inaddition,Chinesecultureshouldbewellsharedwithforeignpeoplewhohaveshowntheirgreatinterestinit.Meanwhile,theChinesepeoplearealsoexposedtoforeigncultureswhenmoreforeignpe