1、精品资料历年考研英语写作范文1997历年考研英语写作范文(1997-2012)1997 世界烟草总产量 世界吸烟人口比例世界每年吸烟损失 The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of w
2、orkers. Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population
3、, and among them, three million people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 14. 364 billion pounds in 1994 to 14. 2 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly,
4、 tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds the gain in the industry. In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making
5、 our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smokingrelated illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifiable. It is high time that w
6、e fought for the total tobacco ban. 1999高分作文(1513分)From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet. Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are se
7、veral possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population, more and more people came to live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die. Second, although many people look
8、 on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Third, with the development of the industry, the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed. The deforestation has become more and more serious.
9、 So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinct. In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the governments should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love the nature and protect it. Third, as for ourse
10、lves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment. 评语内容符合要求,包括了图中说明“effect”的有关信息。语言流畅,层次分明,句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确,文章长度符合要求。但还有少数错误出现。2000高分作文(1)As is shown in the pictures, we can see clearly that with the increase of commercial fishing, the number of fishes sharply decreased. In one
11、 picture, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing-boats. The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean resources. Owing to over-fishing, the number of
12、 fishes has obviously decreased. If we let this situation go as it is, we wont know where fish is in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction. Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to make stri
13、ct laws to control commercial fishing. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also, I believe that we human beings can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a bright future. 给分14分
14、评语内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点;文章通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样;用词面较宽;虽有个别不妥之处,但该生基本功较好;表达能力较强;长度符合要求。(2)Now we can see two pictures about the history of world commercial fishing. The first picture shows us a fishing-boat and a water rich in fish in 1990. On the contrary, we learn that, according to the second picture, the fishe
15、s decrease sharply to only one with the increase of boats in 1995. The purpose of the pictures is to warn us that the sea resources are being ruined, and we need to protect our ocean now. As far as I am concerned, this kind of fishing attributes to the drive of money. To earn money, some people just
16、 want to catch fish whether it is small or big. Secondly, some people ignore fish has its growing time. Excessive fishing in a short time causes decrease of fish. In addition, the development of modem science will also accelerate the process. Nowadays, many people have gradually found the problem. T
17、hey appeal to taking measures to developing the resource of fish and control fishing for commercial aim, which is also the purpose of the drawer of the pictures. First, the government should lay counter-laws to stop the operation of commercial fishing. Second, it is a world problem, so the governmen
18、ts must decide to punish people who fish too much. To conclude, it is clear that the future for fish will be bright with the solution of the problem. 给分11分评语内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点;表达基本清楚,文字连贯,句式变化较多;结构与用词有少量一般性错误,长度符合要求。2001(1)It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about. Thi
19、s is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries, speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to. As shown i
20、n the picture, love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places. This tells us a simple truth: Love is like a lamp. It is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her
21、. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help very much. I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much because my help was needed very much. My help was like a
22、 lamp in a dark place. I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way, we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world. (2)I saw a picture recently in your newspaper. There is a small lamp in the picture and a
23、flame on the lamp, which is smiling. The lamp says, Love is a lamp, it will be brightest in the darkest place. I think it shows us a vivid picture: Where and who need live, love is the noblest feeling. So I believe that we should give our love to those who are in need. If everyone can give his love
24、to whom in need, then the world will be filled with love. For example, in the countryside. There are millions of pupils, who cant afford to attend school. Some of them never attend school. They are unfortunate, but now there are many warm-hearted people who give help to the pupils. Of course, we can
25、 also show our love in many other ways. For instance. As a friend, we should help our friends when they are in trouble. There is a saying: A friend in need is a friend in deed. As a young man, we should respect the older. When we walk on the street, we can help the blind or old people and children t
26、o cross the road. In a word, There are many ways to show our love. The people all over the world should love and respect each other. The best way to show our love is to help others when they are in difficulties. 2002An American girl in traditional Chinese costume(服装)高分作文(1)This is a very interesting
27、 picture of a lovely American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears a pearl necklace, colorful ribbon, ear rings, and other decorating things that are characteristic of the clothes of a Chinese minority nationality. It is obvious that as a result of ou
28、r open-door policy, more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our national culture, which is making it go international. There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon. With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and i
29、nternational cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries. As Chinese citizens, we should respect our own national culture and learn useful things from the cultures of different nations, which will e
30、nable us to make great progress in many ways. I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote cultural development both nationally and internationally. (2) Nowadays, national culture or international culture has become a matter of great concern for the general p
31、ublic in our society, especially for those who are confronted with this problem. Now lets take a look at the American girl in traditional Chinese costume. She looks very beautiful with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of the Chinese costume. Obviously, the picture indica
32、tes that a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all the human beings. Since China has opened its door widely to the outside world, many people from different countries want to visit China. They will accept and love the Chinese culture as a whole. In addition, Chinese culture should be well shared with foreign people who have shown their great interest in it. Meanwhile, the Chinese people are also exposed to foreign cultures when more foreign pe
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