雅思优秀范文70以上水平.docx

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雅思优秀范文70以上水平

教育类

Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldonlystudysciencesubjects.Othersubjectsarenotimportanttothem.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree

ModelAnswer:

Somepeoplesuggestthatstudentsonlystudysciencesubjects.AlthoughIagreethatsciencesubjectsareimportant,Ithinkthatstudentsshouldalsostudyavarietyofothersubjects.

Ontheonehand,sciencesubjectsshouldbecoresubjectsontheschoolcurriculum.Inmodernhistory,scienceandtechnologyhavebeenthemostinfluentialdrivingforcesbehindproductivityandmaterialprosperity,andareparticularlyimportantinanageofglobaleconomiccompetition.Theknowledgegainedthroughsciencesubjects,suchasphysics,chemistryandbiology,prepareschildrenforfuturecareersinscience,technology,engineeringormedicine.Withoutcompulsorysciencecourses,schoolswouldfailtoproduceenoughyoungpeoplewithscientificknowledgeandtechnologicalskillsfortheircountry’seconomicdevelopment.

Ontheotherhand,people’swell-beingdoesnotonlydependonmaterialsuccess.Othersubjectsontheschoolcurriculumalsoservethecommongoodandthereforeshouldnotbeignored.Musicclasses,forexample,teachchildrentoexpresstheiremotionsbetterandappreciateothers’more.Also,artclassesstimulatechildren’simaginationandencouragethemtoapproachproblemscreatively,whichhelpstoprepareacreativeworkforceforthefuture.

Sciencesubjectscannotevenservethecommongoodwellifothersubjectsontheschoolcurriculumarenoteffectivelyorefficientlytaught.Forinstance,itishardtoimaginethatstudentscanpresenttheresultsoftheirscientificexperimentsclearlyintheirpapersiftheyhavenotgainedsystematicknowledgeofacademicwritingintheirlanguageclasses.

Inconclusion,Iwouldagreethatagoodcurriculumshouldbebalancedandconsistofawiderangeofareas,includingnaturalscience,socialstudies,artsandhumanities.

例文2：

Usingacomputereverydaycanhavemorenegativethanpositiveeffectsonchildren.Doyouagreeordisagree

ModelAnswer:

Itendtoagreethatyoungchildrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchtimespentonthecomputereveryday.Thisispartlybecausesittinginfrontofascreenfortoolongcanbedamagingtoboththeeyesandthephysicalpostureofayoungchild,regardlessofwhattheyareusingthecomputerfor.

Themainconcernisaboutthetypeofcomputeractivitiesthatattractchildren.Theseareoftenelectronicgamesthattendtobeveryintenseandratherviolent.Theplayerisusuallythe“hero”ofthegameandtoomuchexposurecanencouragechildrentobeself-centredandinsensitivetoothers.

Evenwhenchildrenuseacomputerforotherpurposes,suchasgettinginformationoremailingfriends,itisnosubstituteforhumaninteraction.Spendingtimewithotherchildrenandsharingexperiencesisanimportantpartofachild’sdevelopmentthatcannotbeprovidedbyacomputer.

Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofcomputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.TheiradultworldwillbechangingconstantlyintermsoftechnologyandtheInternetisthekeytoalltheknowledgeandinformationavailableintheworldtoday.Therefore,itisimportantthatchildrenlearnatanearlyagetousetheequipmentwithconfidenceastheywillneedtheseskillsthroughouttheirstudiesandworkinglives.

Ithinkthemainpointistomakesurethatyoungchildrendonotoverusecomputers.Parentsmustensurethattheirchildrenlearntoenjoyotherkindsofactivityandnotsimplysitathome,learningtoliveinavirtualworld.

科技类

例文

Withtheincreasinguseofmobilephonesandcomputers,fewerpeoplewriteletters.Somepeoplethinkthatthetraditionalskillofletterwritingwilldisappear.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree

ModelAnswer:

MobilephonesandtheInternetaresowidelyusedtodaythatmanypeopleareconcernedthatlettersmaycompletelydisappearfromourlives.AlthoughIthinkthisconcernisunderstandable,Idonotthinkitwillbecomeareality.

Theeaseandimmediacyofphonecalls,textmessagesande-mailsmakethemattractivetopeople,especiallytoyoungandbusyones.Ane-mailoratextmessagecanreachsomeonethousandsofkilometersawayinafewseconds.Thesamee-mailortextmessagecanevenbesenttomultipleusersatthesametime.Bycontrast,ittakesaletterseveraldaystoreachtherecipient.

E-mailsandmultimediamessagesalsoallowtheiruserstosharepicturesandvideosandmakescommunicationmoreinteractiveandentertaining.Anotheradvantageofe-mailsandtextmessagesisthattheycanbestoredelectronicallyonserversandmobilephones,whilelettersalwaysneedsomephysicalstoragespace.

Inspiteofthis,Idonotthinkthatthetraditionofletter-writingwilldisappear.Letters,especiallyhandwrittenones,haveastrongpersonaltouch.Letter-writingtakesmuchmoretimeandenergythantypingandsendingane-mailonacomputerorcallingsomeoneonamobilephone.Thishelpsalettertoexpressemotionsmoredeeplythanane-mailoraphonecall.Letter-writingworksparticularlywellwhenweneedtoexpressoursympathy,supportorromanticfeelings.Forbusinessorofficialpurposes,letterscanalsoprovidetheformalitythatiswell-suitedtoformalcorrespondence.

Inconclusion,despitetheadvantagesthate-mailsandmobilephoneshaveinspeed,easeofuseandstorage,Ibelievethatletter-writingwillcontinuetobeusefulforavarietyofpersonalandbusinesspurposes.

媒体类

Thenewsmediaplayanimportantroleinmodernsociety.WhyarethenewsmediasoimportantIstheinfluenceofthenewsmediapositiveornegative

ModelAnswer:

Thenewsmedia,suchasnewspapers,newsmagazines,newswebsitesandTVnewsshows,areaveryinfluentialpartofourlives.

Therearetwomainreasonswhythenewsmediaareimportantandpopularinthetwenty-firstcentury.Thefirstoneisthatnewsreportingprovidespeoplewithinformationabouttheeventsthatjusthappenedintheircommunities,cities,countriesorevenothercountries.Aswearelivinginamorecompetitiveandglobalisedworld,peoplewhohaveaccesstothelatestnewscanusuallymakebetter-informeddecisionsandthereforehavecompetitiveadvantages.Thesecondreasonfortheimportanceandpopularityofthenewsmediaisthatpeoplearenaturallycuriousaboutnewthings.Throughmediareportswecangetnewinformationaboutimportanteventsandcelebrities,whichnotonlysatisfiesourcuriositybutalsooffersusinterestingconversationtopics.

Ontheotherhand,nowadaysmanynewsmediacompaniesaretryingtoincreasetheirpopularityandinfluencebyaddingentertainmentvaluetotheirnewsreports.Thisoftenleadstofalsenewsstoriesandresultsinwidespreaddistrustofthenewsmedia.Anotherproblemisthatmanynewsmedianetworkstodayhavecloseconnectionswithpoliticians.Newspresentedbythesenetworksisoftenbiasedandisusedtomanipulatethepublic’sopiniontohelpthepoliticiansgainpoliticaladvantages.

Toconclusion,itisclearthattheincreasinginfluenceandpowerofthenewsmediaisaresultoftheknowledge,convenienceandbusinessvaluethattheycanprovide.However,Ibelievethatdishonestjournalistsandnewsmedianetworkswhospreadfalsenewsshouldbepunishedbythelaw.

政府类

Thegovernmentshouldpayforpeople’shealthcareandeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree

ModelAnswer:

Healthcareandeducationarebasichumanrightsandneeds.Somepeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldpayforcitizens’healthcareandeducation.Ipartlyagreewiththisview.

Therearethreemainreasonswhythegovernmentshouldpayforcitizens’medicalandeducationalcosts.Firstly,alargeproportionofgovernmentrevenuecomesfromthetaxespaidbycitizens.Thegovernmentshouldrewardtaxpayerswithhealthcareandeducation.Secondly,internationalcompetitionineconomicandtechnologicalfieldsisfiercetoday.Theeducationalandhealthlevelsofcitizensareimportantfactorsinfluencingthecompetitivenessofacountry’sworkforce.Byprovidingcitizenswitheducationandhealthcare,thegovernmenthelpstopromoteeconomicandtechnologicaldevelopmentandincreasethecompetitivenessoftheworkforceintheglobaleconomy.Thirdly,therearepeoplewhocannotaffordbasichealthcareoreducationinalmosteverycountry.Ifthegovernmentdidnotpayfortheirbasichealthcareoreducationalneeds,theywouldfeelthattheyaretreatedunfairlybythegovernment,whichwouldbeasourceofsocialunrest.

However,thegovernmentonlyhaslimitedfinancialresources.Ifitspendstoomuchmoneyonhealthcareandeducation,otherimportantfieldssuchasscientificresearch,infrastructuredevelopmentandthepensionsystemmaybeunder-fundedandunderdeveloped.Itistheresponsibilityofthegovernmenttokeepareasonablebalancebetweentheeducationalandhealthcareneedsofcitizensandotherfinancialneedsthatarealsoessentialtoeconomicgrowthandsocialdevelopment.

Overall,Ibelievethatthegovernmentshouldprovidefreehealthcareandeducationtocitizenswhocannotaffordthem.Atthesametime,itshouldencouragebusinessestoprovidehealthinsurancetotheiremployees,andfundpublicschoolswiththepropertytaxthatlocalresidentspay.Thesemeasurescanhelpthegovernmenttokeepitsbudgetbalancedandachievemoresustainableeconomicgrowth.

发展类

例文：

Itissuggestedthateveryoneintheworldwantstoownacar,aTVandafridge.Wouldtheadvantagesofsuchadevelopmenttosocietyoutweighthedisadvantages

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