届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之五 学案12页word版.docx

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届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之五学案12页word版

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之五

【一】

Oneafternoon,Iwentoutwithouttakeanumbrella.Suddenlytheybegantorain.Igotallwet,coldandtrembling.Fortunate,akindwomanofferedmearide.Atmyarrival,Isaid“thankyou”toher.Shejustsmiledandleave.Theotherday,Ihelpedaboywhogotlosing.OnlythendidIrealizebestwaytoexpressgratitudetowhomeveroncehelpedme--therelayofkindness.Don’ttakeothers’helpsforgranted.Beinggratefulcanbringusabetterandmorebeautifullife.Whynottohaveatry?

Justbeginwiththesimple“thankyou”

答案

1.第一句take→taking

2.第二句they→it

3.第四句Fortunate→Fortunately

4.第五句At→On

5.第六句leave→left

6.第七句losing→lost

7.第八句realize^best中间加the

8.第九句whomever→whoever

9.第十句helps→help

10.第十二句删掉to

【二】

Withthedevelopmentofthetechnology,moreandmorestudentsprefertousingelectronicdictionarytoreplacepaperdictionary.Somestudentsisinfavoroftheideausingelectronicdictionary.Theythinkitconvenienttolookforthewordsinelectronicdictionarythanpaperdictionary.Thus,itcansavemanytimeforthem.Meanwhile,theythinktheelectronicdictionaryhasmanyotherfunction.However,the

Englishteachersholdtotaldifferentviews.Theyconsidertheelectronicdictionaryprovideslimitingexplanationswhenthepaperdictionarygivesthestudentsdetailedexamples.Everycoinhastwosides.Weshouldusetheiradvantages.WhenwelearnEnglish,weshouldusethepaperdictionary.Fortraveling,wemaybetakeelectronicdictionary.

答案

Withthedevelopmentofthetechnology,moreandmorestudentsprefertousing

electronicdictionarytoreplacepaperdictionary.Somestudentsisinfavoroftheidea

are

usingelectronicdictionary.Theythinkitconvenienttolookforthewordsin

moreup

electronicdictionarythanpaperdictionary.Thus,itcansavemanytimeforthem.

much

Meanwhile,theythinktheelectronicdictionaryhasmanyotherfunction.However,

functions

theEnglishteachersholdtotaldifferentviews.Theyconsidertheelectronicdictionary

totally

provideslimitingexplanationswhenthepaperdictionarygivesthestudentsdetailed

limitedwhile

examples.Everycoinhastwosides.Weshouldusetheiradvantages.Whenwelearn

English,weshouldusethepaperdictionary.Fortraveling,wemaybetakeelectronic

an

dictionary.

【三】

Mr.D,whoisanAmerica,hasbeentaughtEnglishinourschool’sinternationalclasssince2014.Asateacherwithagoodsenseofhumor,healwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Warm-heartedorreadytohelp,hespendsmostofoursparetimehelpingusimproveourEnglish.Withhishelp,allthestudentsinourclasshavemadegreatlyprogressinEnglish.IevenwinthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestheldinourcityinlastmonth.Besides,Mr.Denjoystravelingalot.Sofar,hehasbeentomanyplaceofinterestinChina.Inword,heissuchexcellentateacheraswealllike.

答案

Mr.D,whoisanAmerica,hasbeentaughtEnglishinourschool’sinternationalclasssince2014.Asa

Americanteaching

（或把an改为from）

teacherwithagoodsenseofhumor,healwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Warm-heartedor

and

readytohelp,hespendsmostofoursparetimehelpingusimproveourEnglish.Withhishelp,allthe

his

studentsinourclasshavemadegreatlyprogressinEnglish.IevenwinthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeech

greatwon

contestheldinourcityinlastmonth.Besides,Mr.Denjoystravelingalot.Sofar,hehasbeentomany

placeofinterestinChina.In＾word,heissuchexcellentateacheraswealllike.

placesaso

【四】

Iamanoverweightgirlstruggletomakemywaythroughhighschool.I'malways

tiredandmyleftkneeoften

hurtwhenIamwalking.Iamfightingtobetreatedthesamelikeothers.IhavebeenoverweightformanyyearsinceIwasaprimarystudentandthroughthetimeIhavebeenmadefunorlaughedat.However，Ihadlearnedtofindwaystomakemyselfhappily.IhavefriendsandmyfamilywhorespectmeforwhoIamandwhodon'tmindthatIlooklikeormylargebody.ThoughIstilldon'tfitinwitheveryoneandIstillgetlaughedat，butatleastIhavefriendswhocareaboutthem.Ofcourse，I'mtryingtoloseweightandbecomethin.

答案

Iamanoverweightgirl

tomakemywaythroughhighschool.I'malwaystiredandmyleftkneeoften

whenIamwalking.Iamfightingtobetreatedthesame

others.Ihavebeenoverweightformany

sinceIwasaprimarystudentandthroughthetimeIhavebeenmadefun

orlaughedat.However，I

learnedtofindwaystomakemyself

.IhavefriendsandmyfamilywhorespectmeforwhoIamandwhodon'tmind

Ilooklikeormylargebody.ThoughIstilldon'tfitinwitheveryoneandIstillgetlaughedat，

atleastIhavefriendswhocareabout

.Ofcourse，I'mtryingtoloseweightandbecomethin.

【五】

DearMary,

IreceiveyourE-mailjustnow.Don’tworryaboutme.I’mgetonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.ButtomygreatlysurpriseyousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisthatyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlybutyouhavelostinterest.I’mafraidIcan’tagreeyou.IknowitisdifficultytolearnEnglish,bu

tEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtoday.Itwillbeanimportanttoolinourfuturework.Beside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinoureverydaylife.Ifyoustudyhardly,youwillsucceed.Dorememberthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.I’mlookingforwardtohearingagoodnewsfromyou.Yours,LiHua

答案

DearMary,

IreceivedyourE-mailjustnow.Don’tworryaboutme.I’mgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.ButtomygreatsurpriseyousayyouwillgiveuplearningEnglish.Thereasonisthatyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinterest.I’mafraidIcan’tagree加withyou.IknowitisdifficulttolearnEnglish,butEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtoday.Itwillbeanimportanttoolinourfuturework.B

esides,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinoureverydaylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillsucceed.Dorememberthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.I’mlookingforwardtohearing去掉agoodnewsfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【六】

Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.

Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”

Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!

答案

1.去掉in2.anything-something3.better-best4.decide-decided

5.step-steps6.well-good7.after-when/while8.a-the

9.get前加to10.enjoy-enjoying

【七】

Ilikemusicverymuch,popsongsparticularly.EveryeveningthenIamdoinghomeworkandatweekendswhenIathome,Ialwaysplaysomeofmyfavoritesongsonmytaperecorder.Thefamiliarpatternsofnotesattractsmeintothecolourfullyworldofmusic.NowandthenIstoppedtofollowthesongs.Sometimes,mymothercomesin,askingmetofixmyattentiontomyhomework.Shedoesnotlikethepopmusic.Likemostgrown-ups,sheenjoysfolksongs,becausethepeacefulmusicremindsheroftheirbeautifullifewhenshewasyoung.Itisatruthwhichpeopleofdifferentageunderstandmusicdifferentlyandenjoydifferentkindsofmusic.

答案

Ilikemusicverymuch,popsongsparticularly.Everyeveningthen（改when）IamdoinghomeworkandatweekendswhenI（加am）athome,Ialwaysplaysomeofmyfavoritesongsonmytaperecorder..Thefamiliarpatternsofnotesattracts（改attract）meintothecolourfully（改（colourful或colorful）worldofmusic.NowandthenIstopped（改stop）tofollowthesongs.Sometimes,mymothercomesin,askingmetofixmyattentionto（改o

n）myhomework.Shedoesnotlikethe（去the）popmusic.Likemostgrown-ups,sheenjoysfolksongs,becausethepeacefulmusicremindsheroftheir（改her）beautifullifewhenshewasyoung.Itisatruthwhich（改that）peopleofdifferentage（改ages）understandmusicdifferentlyandenjoydifferentkindsofmusic.

【八】

Itisexcitedtovisitdifferentplaces.Asyoutravel,youwillseetypicalbeautifulsceneryoftheregion.Todaypeoplearesofondintravellingthattourismhasbecomeoneofthemostfastestgrowingindustriesinmanycountries.

Themainreasonwhichpeopletravelis,perhapsforpleasure.Forinstance,haveworkedhardthroughouttheweekdays,peoplewillfindaweekendtriptothenearbymountainorbeachesarealrelaxation.Foranotherexample,spendingannualholidaytravellingabroadwasanespeciallysatisfyingexperienceforthosewhodoesnothavemuchofanopportunitytobeawayfromtheirhomelands.Whenpeoplereturnfromtheirtravel,theywillgeneralfeelfreshandenergetic,readytoworkharder.

答案

Itisexcitedtovisitdifferentplaces.Asyoutravel,youwillseetypicalbeautifulsceneryoftheregion.Todaypeoplearesofondintravellingthattourismhasbecomeoneofthemostfastestgrowingindustriesinmanycountries.

Themainreasonwhichpeopletravelis,perhapsforpleasure.Forinstance,haveworkedhardthroughouttheweekdays,peoplewillfindaweekendtriptothenearbymountainorbeachesarealrelaxation.Foranotherexample,spending（an）annualholidaytravellingabroadwasanespeciallysatisfyingexperienceforthosewhodoesnothavemuchofanopportunitytobeawayfromtheirhomel