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高考英语全国通用版优编增分二轮书面表达第一节精校解析Word版
第1节 提升作文档次的技巧
——让文章靓丽起来
一、增加细节的5大策略
在英语书面表达中,增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。
在信息提纲类写作中,考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给的条目的指定内容;在看图作文中更不能只是对图片内容轻描淡写,否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。
适当增加细节内容,能够使习作流畅、丰满,达到应有的表达效果。
1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明
(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境和拯救地球。
Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.
→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticones,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.
(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.
→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.
(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。
I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.
→I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.
(4)我是一个充满活力的健康男孩,我非常喜欢体育运动。
I’mahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch.
→I’mahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch,especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime,I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.
题组过关1 根据括号内提示完成句子
1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我们不仅仅能阅读国内外的新闻),butalsogetinformation,sendemailsandattendon-lineschools.
2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完美的美式英语),andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther.
3.However,itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如,很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流).
4.However,everycoinhastwosides,sodoestheInternet.Forexample,beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如,沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作).
2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
(1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。
Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.
→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverisveryclear.(背景渲染)
→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景)
(2)我发现了一些不良行为。
Ifoundsomebadbehavior.
→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)
(3)晚饭后,这位男士走向了卧室。
Aftersupper,themanwenttohisbedroom.
→Afterarichmeal,thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)
题组过关2 根据括号内提示完成句子
5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义),weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.
6.I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观).
7.Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth,especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们花费太多的时间在看电视上),playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.
8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain,Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意).
9.Inthesummervacation,Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼职工作).
3.增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容
(1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。
I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.
→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5∶00intheafternoon.(增加时间)
(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。
Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.
→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)
题组过关3 根据括号内提示完成句子
10.YaoMing,whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海),startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.
11.TheChineseSilkRoad,whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(开始于今天的西安,并最后达到……的东海岸)theMediterraneanSea,iswell-knowntotheworld.
12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia,BeijinginChina(在亚洲,中国的北京).
13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecitythemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.
4.适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容
(1)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。
请根据下面要点写一封回信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。
1.休息;2.读书;3.参加社会活动。
①Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.
→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse,I’lldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)
②I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.
→IfIhavefreetime,I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)
→Ifpossible,I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)
→Ifpossible,I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)
(2)Tracy来电话说咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。
Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.
→Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehassomethingimportantto