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高中英语牛津上海版高中三年级第一学期书信写作技巧讲解
书信写作技巧
一、书信作文的“套路”
但凡应试书信，逃不出三种段落：
开头段：
四大内容
1、问候；
2、自我介绍；
3、写信背景；
4、写信目的；
中间段：
具体问题+具体分析；
结尾段：
客套话；
二、书信的“套话”
（一）开头段：
灵活地去写四种内容：
1、问候；
Howareyoudoing?
Howiseverythinggoing?
Howislifetreatingyou?
2、自我介绍；
IamLiHua,a17-year-oldboycurrentlystudyinginXXXmiddleschool.
IamLiHua,who...
Asthevicemonitorofourclass,I...
3、写信背景（写信的缘由）
Iheardthat...
Myteachertoldus...
Iaminformedthat...
Ilearnedthat...我得知...
Ireadinyournewspaper/micro-blog/websitethat...
Yousaidinyourlastletterthat...
4、写信目的；
Now,Iamwritingtodosth.
Now,Iamwritingthislettertodosth.
Now,Iamwritingthesefewlinestodosth.
【最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法】
申请信：
Now,Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob/position.
建议信：
Now,Iamwritingtogiveyouahand.
（二）中间段：
具体问题（主题句）+具体分析（拓展句）
【最常见书信的“中间段”最佳写法】
申请信：
写自己的优势
写法一：
TherearefourmainreasonswhyIamfitfortheposition/job.Tobeginwith,...Moreover,...What'smore,...Finally,...
写法二：
Ihavethreemainadvantages.Firstandforemost,...Additionally,...Lastbutnotleast,...
写法三：
IhavetheconfidencethatIcanhandlethejob.Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...
建议信：
写给对方的具体建议
写法一：
Thereareseveralsimplesuggestionsforyou.Tobeginwith,...Moreover,...What'smore,...Finally,...
写法二：
Immediateandeffectivepracticemustbeputintopractice.Firstandforemost,...Additonally,...Lastbutnotleast,...
写法三：
Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...
（三）结尾段：
想写好第三段，就要背过各种客套话！
【书信“结尾段”最佳写法】
申请信：
Hopefullythechancewouldbeofferedtome.Ifchosen/elected,Iwoulddedicateallmyenergyandwisdomtothecompany/activity/club/class.Thankyouforreadingmyletter/listeningtomyspeechinsuchahotsummer.Lookingforwarddoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience./Iwon'tletyoudown.（我不会让你们失望）
注：
在这个段落模板中，我们融合了自荐信结尾段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落，两种结尾段都需要四个句子。
建议信：
Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.IfthereisanythingelseIcandoforyou,pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible.I'msureyoucansolveyourproblembeforelong.
Part1书信建议写作结构指导
开头：
称呼
第一段（Para.Ⅰ）:
开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交代事由。
第二段（Para.Ⅱ）:
交代对信中所反映的主要问题的看法和建议，不同内容可分段。
第三段（Para.Ⅲ）：
表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。
结尾：
结束语和署名。
Date
Dear,
Iamdelighted/sorrytolearnthat.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdtheviewpointthat.Franklyspeaking,thereisnodenyingthatthefollowingaspectscanaccountformysuggestions/feelings,whichmaybebeneficialtoyoutosomeextent.
Tobeginwith,oneofthemostsignificantaspectsisthat.
Inaddition，.
Lastbutnotleast,.
Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.IfthereisanythingelseIcandoforyou,pleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible.I'msureyoucansolveyourproblembeforelong.
Bestwishestoyou!
Sincerelyyours,
Signature
常用句式
①Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iamwritingwithmysuggestion/proposalabout…/Iamwritingexpressmyviewsconcerning…
②Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.
③Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposals/recommendationshelpful/practical/useful.
④Itrustyouwilltakemysuggestionintoaccount.
⑤Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.
⑥Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismattertofurtherdetails.
⑦PleaseinformmeifthereissomethingIcandoforyou.
⑧Itisquitenatural/understandableforyoutodo…,however,…
⑨Iwonderifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.
⑩Ihopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelptoyou.
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.
词数120-150
要点:
1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视；
3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
You said in your last letter that you would like to learn Chinese. Now, I am writing to give you a hand.
Several suggestions listed below may be put into practice.To begin with, attending a training course will provide you with the most widely used words and expressions. Moreover, some native books and magazines as well as some TV programs will help you learn more of our culture. What's more, it is beneficial for you to learn some pop songs, so that your pronunciation and listening skills would be improved. Finally, if I wereyou, I would make some local friends, considering that, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect.
Hopefully you would master this wonderful language before long!
If there is anything else I can do for you, please drop me a line. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
LiHua
Part2书信申请写作结构指导
开头：
称呼
第一段（Para.Ⅰ）:
表明自己对某个工作或职位感兴趣，并提出申请。
第二段（Para.Ⅱ）:
介绍相关的个人信息，主要包括你具备了什么样的素质来胜任这份工作和你为什么想得到这份工作。
第三段（Para.Ⅲ）：
提出要求，希望对方考虑你的申请。
结尾：
结束语和署名。
Date
Dear,
Iamveryhappytolearnfromthat
Therefore,Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionof.（介绍个人情况）Ideeplybelievethatmypersonalityandexperiencefitwellwithyourrequirements.
AsfarasIamconcerned,itisacceptedthatthereareseveralaspectsaccountingfortherequirements/viewpoints/choice/thought.Tobeginwith,oneofthemostsignificantaspectsisthat.
Inaddition，.
Lastbutnotleast,.
Iwouldbegratefulifyoushouldgivemethisopportunity.Pleasecontactmeifyouneedmydetailedinformation.Iamlookingforwardtoareplyatyourearliestconvenience.
Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration.
Bestwishesforyou!
Yourssincerely
Signature
常用句式
①Inanswertoyouradvertisement,Iwishtoapplyfor…
②Iamratherkeenon…
③Ihavetheeducationandtheexperiencethatfitwellwithyouradvertisedposition.
④Ihaveapersonalitythatischeerfulandoptimistic.
⑤IdidwellatschoolandIhavegotimpressivelettersofrecommendationfrommyprofessors.
⑥ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementinthepaperfor…,IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime.
⑦Iamwritingtheletterwiththepurposeofapplyingforadmissionintoyouresteemedschool.
⑧Mymajorinterestsare…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthosefields.
⑨Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandanyinstructionsyoumaybesokindastogivemeregardingmypossibleadmission.
⑩Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmethenecessaryformsandanyinformationaboutfinancialaidinyourprogram.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
实战演练
假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。
请用英文给组委会写一封信。
DearSir/Madam,
MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.
Iama14-year-oldgirlcurrentlystudyinginXXXhighschool.TherearefourmainreasonswhyIamfitfortheposition.Tobeginwith,havinglivedinSeattleforoneandahalfyearsasanexchangestudents,IamgoodatEnglishspeaking.Lastyear,IwonthesecondprizeintheCCTVnationalEnglishcompetition.Moreover,Iamcrazyaboutdifferentkindsofsports,consequently,IamknowledgeableabouttheGames.What'smore,asthevicechairmanofthestudents'union,Iamalwaysreadytohelpothersandgetalongwellwitheverypartner.Finally,growinguphere,Iamfamiliarwiththecity.
Hopefullythechancewouldbegiventome!
IfIcouldbechosen,IwouldsparenoeffortindedicatingtotheGames.Thanksforyourtimeandpatiencereadingmyletterinsuchahotsummer.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.
Bestwishes!
Yourstruly,
LiHua
练习：
一、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，父母答应你今年高三毕业后去英国作10天观光旅游。
请你给英国网友TOM写封电子邮件，咨询以下事情：
1、不随旅游团的食宿、交通等问题。
2、必看景点与时间安排。
3、邀请他到中国观光。
格式如下：
DearTom,
How'severythinggoing?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
DearTom,
（1）How'severythinggoing?
（2）I'mallowedto enjoy a10-dayvisittoEnglandaftermycollegeentranceexamination bymyparents.（3）Now,I'mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavorbytellingmesomethingofvitaluseinadvance.
（4） Hereare several key questions relatedtomyjourney. （5）Foronething,couldyou offer me, sinceI’mnotturningtoanytouristagency, someself-help accommodationandtransportationinformation inEngland?
（6）Foranother,Ican'twaitto visitsomemust-seetouristattractions.（7）Meanwhile,ifitdoesn'ttroubleyou much,couldyoupleasehelpmearrangethetimeproperlysothatIcancompletelyenjoymyselfthen?
（8）Ishallthankyouifyouwillkindly introducemeoneortwowebsitesonyourlocalcultureandcustom asI'manentirestrangerthere.
Inreturn,itwouldbemygreathonorandpleasureifyoucouldcometoChinaasmyguest.IbelieveIcouldbeadistinguishedguide!
I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
二、假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。
请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封信：
*帮他分析原因
*给他提出建议
*陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意：
词数120-150
Dear LiMing,
How are you doing?
Our teacher told me that you had some trouble in getting along well with others.
Now I am writing to give you a hand.
In my opinion, there are two main reasons accounting for your problem. For one thing,so shy are you
that you seldom chat with others. For another,you have no friends here in this
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