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全国高考英语写作模板0418
模板一、直陈观点,以例佐证
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Morehaste,lessspeed.Beforemoving
tothenextstep,oneneedsapractical
considerationonwhathehasalreadyachieved..
(欲速则不达)
语言结构
点睛
表明观点
例证观点
得出结论
Frommypointofview,weshoulddo
everythingstepbystep.Oneoftenfailswithout
goodpreparation.
TakeEnglishstudyforexample.Justas
Romewasnotbuiltinoneday,ittakesone
year’spracticetohaveagoodcommandofthe
language.Ifwedonotlearnfromsellingcorrect
wordsandwritingacceptablesentences,weare
neverabletowriteagoodcomposition.And
withoutpracticingoralEnglishalot,wecan
neverspeakEnglishfluently.Ifwedon’tread
andlistenalotanddoalotofefficientexercises,
wecannotpassEnglishtests.
Inshort,weshouldhaveagoodfoundation
ifwewanttomakegreatachievementsinour
studiesandworkorinotherthingsaswell.
开门见山,直接表明观点。
以英语学
习为例来
佐证“欲
速则不达”。
前呼后应
观点
范例1范例2
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Parentscanbeexamplesfortheirchildren.
(有其父必有其子)
语言结构
点睛
表明观点
例证观点
得出结论
Manypeopleholdtheopinionthatparents
canbeexamplesfortheirchildren.AsfarasIam
concerned,Iquiteagreewiththis.
Hereisastory.Onedayalittleboy
watchedhisparentsplantingflowersinthe
garden,andhethenlearnttowaterandlook
afterthelittleplants.Whenhesawthatthe
flowersweregrowingwell,hesharedthe
happinesswithhisparents.Theirhardwork
resultedinbeautifulflowersinfullbloom,and
theboy’sfatherproudlypickedaflowerandgave
ittohiswifetoshowhislove.Buttotheirgreat
surprise,theboypickedalltheflowersand
presentedthemtohisparents.Onlyatthis
momentdidtheparentsrealizehowgreateffect
theirbehaviorhadontheirchildren.
Thus,Ithinkparentsshouldtrytobegood
teachersinfrontoftheirchildren.
开门见山,直接表明观点。
以“种花与养花”的故事来证明父母的言行举止对子女的影响。
倒装句加强表达效果
经典句式回味
Frommypointofview,weshoulddo….
Take…forexample.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Iquiteagreewiththis.
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Nothingistoosmall.(防微杜渐)
语言结构
点睛
表明观点
例证观点
得出结论
Somegreatdisastersfrequentlyhappened
notbecauseofsomethingbigbutsomething
small.
Therearesomeexamplesinourdailylife.
Wemayhearthatatrainisturnedoverbecausea
railspike(道钉)isloosewithoutbeing
fastenedtimely,agreatforestfirebreaksout
becauseofalightedbuttthrownwithoutbeingput
out,agreatdamisdestroyedasaresultofatube
fountaininadamwithoutbeingfoundout,which
haveallcausedagreatlosstobothpeopleand
society.
Wecanlearnfromtheaboveexamplesthat
nothingissmallinourworkandlifeandthatany
behaviorofcarelessnessornoresponsibilityofa
smallfaultwillresultingreatdamageordisaster.
Soweshouldbeverystrictwithourselvesand
learntoberesponsibleandcarefulinourlifeand
work.
直截了当表明观点。
防微杜渐
对人民和
社会的必
要性及重要性。
用“大小
因果关系“(Resultin;so)得出结论。
范例3模板二、呈现观点,分说原由
范例1
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Honestyisthebestpolicy.(诚实为上)
语言结构点睛
呈现看法
分说原因
得出结论
Itistruethatmostofusvaluehonesty
highly.PersonallyIagreethathonestyisthebest
policy.
Asweknow,ifoneishonest,otherpeople
willdeeplyrespecthimorher,andarewillingto
makefriendswithhimorher.Inaddition,being
honestcanmakepeople’slifeeasierandmore
harmonious(和谐的).Therearealotof
examplestosupporttheargument.Forexample,
consumerswillnotbeafraidofbeingovercharged
ifdealersarehonest.Foranotherexample,
Singaporeisatrustworthysocietyandhasavery
Lowcriminalrate.
Thereisnodoubtthatbeinghonestisof
benefittoboththestateandtheindividual.We
shouldhavethespiritofhonesty.
以明理提出看法
理由1:
诚实的人受人尊重。
理由2:
诚实使生活轻松和谐。
总结全文,提出倡导。
经典句式回味经典句式回味
Therearesomeexamplesinourdailylife.Itistruethat…
Inshort,weshould…PersonallyIagreethat
Wecanlearnfromtheaboveexamplesthat…
范例2范例3
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
StudentsorTutors?
(做学生还是做家庭
教师?
)
语言结构点睛
描述现象
阐述原因
表明观点
Nowadays,therearemoreandmoreprivate
teachersinuniversities.Peoplehavedifferent
opinionsaboutthis.Ithinkastudentshouldfocus
onhisstudiesinsteadofworkingasatutor.
Tobeginwith,acollegestudent’smaintask
istolearnknowledge.Ifhespendstoomuch
timeteaching,thenhewillnothaveenoughtime
tostudy.Then,astudentshouldnotthinktoo
muchaboutmoneysincetheirparentswillprovide
thedailynecessitiesforhim.Furthermore,ifhe
failstohelphisstudentsimprovetheirstudies,
thatwillcauseworryandanxietytohim,andit
mightevenaffecthisself-confidence.Hemight
questionhiswonability.
Allinall,Ithinkacollegestudentshould
payattentiontohisstudiesandworkhardathis
studies.
以现象引出观点
主题句
理由1:
学生主要是学习。
理由2:
有家长提供日常费用。
理由3:
当不好的影响。
总结全文,首尾呼应。
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Don’thesitatetosay“no”.(该说“不”时
就说“不”)
语言结构点睛
呈现看法
分说原因
得出结论
Helpingothersisourtraditionalvirtue.It
goeswithoutsayingthatweshouldgiveahand
wheneveritisreallyneeded.Butweshouldalso
daretosay“no”tosomeunreasonablerequests.
Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows:
Firstly,ifyoucannotkeepyourpromise
becausetherequestisbeyondyourability,you
willbeconsidereddishonest.Secondly,ifyou
agreetounreasonablerequests,itwillspoilyour
principlesofdoingthingsanditmayalsodoharm
tootherpeople.Thirdly,ifyougivehelptoa
criminal,youmayalsoresultincommittinga
crime.
Inconclusion,weshouldsay“no”firmly
tounreasonablerequests.
以常理引出看法。
主题句
Firstly,Secondly,
Thirdly陈述原因,层次分明。
回应全文
归纳看法。
经典句式回味经典句式回味
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Tobeginwith,…Then,…Furthermore,…Finally,…
Firstly,…Secondly,….Thirdly,…Thereisnodoubtthat…
Inconclusion,weshould…
Allinall,Ithink…
模板五、确定主题、分步解说
范例1范例2
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Reducewasteoncampus..(减少校园浪费)
语言结构点睛
提出主题
分步解说
得出结论
Itiscertainthattheproblemofwasteis
becomingmoreandmoreseriousoncampusanditistimeforustoreduceit.Foronereason,wehavealreadywastedagreatdealofprecious
resourcessuchaswaterandelectricity.For
another,ourwasteaddsourparentsandthe
societyaburden..However,somearestillpuzzledhowtoreducewasteoncampus.Herearesomesuggestions.
Tobeginwith,weshouldturnoffthelightwhenweleavedormsorclassroomssoastosaveelectricityasmuchaspossible.Secondly,weshouldnotspendtoomuchmoney.Thirdly,weshouldstopwastingwaterwhenwebath,orcleanfaces,orwashclothesanddishes.
Actually,therearedifferentsolutionsaccordingtodifferentsituations.Therefore,Ifirmlybelievethatwecanreducethewasteoncampuswithourefforts.
主题:
必须减少校园浪费。
分说必要性。
从三方面列举方法。
总结全文,呼吁减少校园浪费。
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Theimportanceofafter-classactivities.
(课外活动的重要性)
语言结构点睛
提出主题
分步解说
得出结论
After-classactivitiesplayanimportantpartin
schoollife.Theyaregoodforstudents’development
inallaspects.
Thefirstthingthatafter-classactivitiesdoto
helpusisdoingalotofgoodtoourhealth.For
example,playingbasketballcanhelpusimprove
ourspeedandstrength,thusimprovingourhealth.
Obviously,wehavealotofpressurefromour
studiesandweneedarelaxationafterheavywork,
assometimesweneedtorefreshourselvesand
renewourenergy.Furthermore,buryingourselvesall
dayunderpilesofbooks,searchinginformation
weneedinclassorpreparingforexaminationis
nottheonlywaytolearn.Bydoingsomeafter-class
activities,wecanlearntolookatthingson
abroaderscaleorinalongterm.
Inconclusion,after-classactivitiesareuseful
andhelpfulinmanyaspects.Wecannotonly
enjoyandrefreshourselves,butalsoimprove
ourselvesmentally,physically,intellectually
andsocially.
直接提出主题。
解说:
1.说明有益健康;能减轻学业负担。
2.课外活动也是一种学习
结论:
不仅能愉悦自我,而且心理、生理、智力和社交的能力均能提高
模板六、名谚开篇,烘托观点
范例3范例1
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Themeaningoflife.(生活的意义)
语言结构点睛
提出主题
分步解说
得出结论
Peopleholdvariousopinionsonthepurpose
oflife.Somethinkthattheyliveformoney,some
forfame,someforfun.Astomyopinion,livingforexperiencesenablesmetounderstandthetrue
meaningoflife.
Thefirstreasonofmybeliefisthatmoney
andfamearenotenoughforleadingahappylife.I
seethatmanypeoplegoingaftermoneyandfame
havenointerestortimetoenjoyfamilylife,
friendship,sightseeingandthingslikethat.Money
isimportantinlife,buttheideaonlyformoney
leadstoanuninterestinglife.Secondly,living
justforfunisalsounacceptabletome.Humans
aredifferentfromanimalsinthattheyhavefeelingsandemotions.Theycannotavoidsadnessandanger.
NowIwillcomebacktomaypoint,livingforvariousexperiences,whethertheyarefailuresorsuccesses,happinessorsadness.
陈述不同观点,亮出主题
解说理由:
理由1:
有钱和名声还不能过上幸福生活。
理由2:
生活不仅仅为了娱乐消遣。
总结全文,前后呼应
谋篇构思
三步曲
观点:
Thetreasureoftime.(珍惜时间)
语言结构点睛
表明观点
例证观点
得出结论
Asthesayinggoes,“Timeismoney.”Yes,
it’sindeedthecase.Butinmyopinion,timeis
morevaluablethanmoney.
Thereasonisthatwhenmoneyisspent,we
canearnitback.However,whentimeisgone,
itwillnevercomeback.Inourlife,frombirth
todeath,timeislimitedforallofus.Sowe
shouldmakegooduseofit.Asstudents,what
weshoulddofirstistostudywellandobtain
knowledgesothatwecanserveourcountryinthe
future.
Somepeople,howeverdon’tknowthevalue
oftime.Theyspendtimedoingmeaningless
things,suchassmoking,drinkingandeven
gambling.Theydon’trealizethatwas