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青年节英语作文范文
青年节英语作文范文
中考作文注意事项
一、石老师的忠告:
近几年中考英语作文以看图写话的形式为主,重点考察学生运用一般过去时态讲述过去
故事的书面表达能力。
因此,be动词一律使用was,were;行为动词一律用动词的过去式
形式;重点记忆不规则动词的过去式;注意故事的书写要自始至终使用过去时态;不提倡使
用直接引语;不提倡使用没见过和没把握的句子;为提高句子水平,尽量使用几个主从复合
句,像宾语从句、定语从句、时间状语从句或原因状语从句,并列句和感叹句也会为你的文
章增色,但不能因为上难度而出语法错误,得不偿失,看自己的能力而定;怕出错,就全使
用小短句子,正确无误是第一追求;注意每张图片的内容都要有专门的句子体现,要点不
能漏掉;每个单句句子都要符合简单句的五种基本类型之一:
主系表;主语谓语;主谓宾;
主谓宾宾;主谓宾宾补;注意主谓一致;注意避免标点符号、大小写、拼写错误等低级失误;
字数要足;打草稿是个拿卷面分的好办法,也避免低级失误。
将草稿上的作文抄到试卷上
之后,再对照一下,不要漏掉字或出现书写单词不完整的现象。
二、中考作文评分标准:
1)本大题共10分。
2)卷面书写潦草不工整,可酌情从总得分中扣1分。
3)拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。
同样错误不重复计算。
4)书面表达可分为四个等级:
(1)9-10分语句通顺,内容完整,书写工整,无语法错误,字数符合要求。
(2)7-8分内容较完整,书写较工整,语法错误较少(1-2处),字数基本符合要求。
(3)5-6分语句尚通顺,书写较工整,3-4处语法错误,字数在60词左右。
(4)5分以下作文内容不完整语句不够通顺,语法错误较多,书写一般,字数在50词
以下。
三、类型举例:
1.做好事
Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingothers/whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Oneday,on
hiswaytoschool/onhiswaybackhome,hefoundanoldmanwholookedworried.Hewentup
tohimandaskedhimwhatwaswrong./ifhecouldhelphim.Theoldmansaidthathedidn’tknow
howtogetbackhome.Tomhelpedhimtoaskthepolicemanforhelp.ThenTomtookhimtohis
homebybus.Hetookgoodcareoftheoldman.Atlast/Intheend,theoldmangotbackhome
andmethisfamily.TheythankedTomverymuch.Tomgottoshoollate/gothomelatebuthewas
veryhappy.Whatagood/kindboy!
Weshouldlearnfromhim./Helpingothersistohelp
ourselves.
2.节日:
Children’sDay儿童节;Teachers’Day教师节;AprilFool’sDay愚人节National
Day国庆节;NewYear’sDay元旦;SpringFestival春节;Mid-AutumDay中秋节;
MayDay五四青年节ChristmasDay圣诞节;ThanksgivingDay感恩节;Mother’sDay
母亲节;Father’sDay父亲节
Tomisagoodboywholoveshisparents.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay.Hewantedtodo
somethingforhismother.Hetoldhisfatherwhathethoughtandhisfatheragreedwithhim.They
begantowork.Tomsweptthefloorandhisfatherdidsomewashing/washedtheclothes.While
hisfatherwascooking,heputthedishesontothetable.Whenhismothercamebackhome,he
foundsomedeliciousfoodonthetable.Howhappyshewas!
ShehadawonderfulWomen’s
Day.
类似一篇:
IhaveagoodfriendnamedJim.Heisafifteen-year-oldboy.YesterdaywasWomen’s
Day,andhismotherwasbusyoutside.Hemadeuphismindtodosomethingforher.
Sohecleanedoutthehouseinordertomakehismotherhappy.Atfirst,hecleaned
thefloorandmadeitascleanaspossible.Helistenedtothemusicthatwaswritten
byXuLang,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.Thenhedidthedishesafter
listening.Ittookhimalittletimetodoit.Atlast,hecookedsomethingnice.
Afterfifteenminutes,hismothercamebackhome.Hesaid“HappyWomen’sDay!
”His
motherwasveryhappytoseesomefoodonthetable.Jimdidn'tfeeltiredinthe
slightest.Whatagoodboy!
3.做错事
Oneday,XiaoMingandhisfatherwenttoZhongShanPark.XiaoMingwas
veryhappy.Whiletheywerewalking,XiaoMing’sfatherfoundafenceanddecided
tojumpoverthefencesothattheycouldgettothezooquickly.XiaoMingdidn’t
agreewithhisfather,buthisfatherjumpedoverthefence.XiaoMingwasvery
worried.Thenapolicemancametohisfatherandtoldhimthathebrokethetraffic
law.XiaoMing’sfatherfeltveryembarrassedandbowedtothepoliceman,“Sorry,
Iwon’tdoitagain.”
It’sdangeroustobreakthetrafficlaw./rules.
另一篇:
LastSunday,myfatherandmothertookmetothezoo.Itwasaveryinteresting
zoo.Wetookawalkandenjoyedthebeautifulsights/flowersinthezoothewhole
morning.Atnoon,wehadapiiconthegrass.Finally,Icouldn’tfinishthecake
withcream.Iwantedtothrowitaway.Butmymothertoldmenottodoit.Then,I
wantedtogiveittothemonkeys.Mymothersaiditwasagoodidea.Atthattimea
workeratthezoocameuptousandtoldusnottodoit.Thenwerealizedour
mistakes.Weshouldobeytherulesandtrytoprotecttheanimals.
4.活动
Tomisagoodboywholikesplayingsoer.LastTuesday,hewasverybusy.Inthemorning,
hegotupatsixthirtyandthenhadbreakfast.Hewenttoschoolonfootbecausehishousewas
veryneartotheschool.Afterhehadfourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon,hewas
verytired.Afterschool,heplayedsoerwithhisfriends.Theyhadagoodtime.After
supper/dinner,hehadtodohishomework.Ittookhimtwohourstofinishit.HewatchedTVand
readnewspapers.Hedidn’tgotobeduntilteno’clock.Hewastiredbuthappy.Whatabusyday!
(如果是周末或假期活动,只需要改变时间和活动内容即可)
另一篇:
XiaoMing’sBusyDay
Lastweekend,XiaoMinghadaverybusyday.Inthemorning,hisfather
toldhimtogetuptoreadEnglish.Afterthat,hehadtopractiseplaying
thepiano.Hismotherstoodbehindhimandmadehimplayagainandagain.
Intheafternoon,hisfathertookhimtoanartschool.Helearnedhow
topaintthere.Thewholeday,XiaoMinghadnotimetohavearest.He
wassotiredthathefellillintheevening.Hewastakentohospital
byhisparents.Whatapoorboy!
Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren.They
expecttheirchildrentobeesuessfulinthefuture.Thechildren
aretoobusylearningallkindsofthingsallday.Ithinkit’sbadfor
them.
四、更多举例:
Lastweekend,weplannedtovisitmygrandmotherwithouther,sowegetupearlytobuyabigcakeforher.Aboutanhourlater,thebustookustothebeautifulcountryside.OuringmadehersurprisedandshesaIdshefeltlonelyrecently.
Whileweweretallkingtoeachother,myunclewascookingadeliciousmealforus,weweresoexcitedtomeeteachotherthatwedidn’tstoptalkingoreatinguntil4:
00pm.Whenweleft,shesaidthemoretimeswecame,thehappiershewouldbe.
Wethinkit’sourdutytomakeoldpeoplefeelhappy.
t
Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingotherswhentheyareintrouble.
Oneday,whenTomwokeup,hesawJack’shousewasonfire,hehurriedtogetupandcalled119,herushedtoJack’shouseandhelpedJackputoutthefire.Severalminuteslater,Somefiremencameandtriedtheirbesttofightwiththefire,atlast,withmanypeople’shelp,thefirewasputout.ThefiremenandJackwerethankfultoTom.Tomwasveryhappy.
Inmyopinion,Ifeveryonegivesahand,ourworldwillbewarm.
三)通知
1.口头通知
写作指导
①口头通知一般是由一方向另一方口头传达的
通知,叙述表达尽可能口语化,简洁明了,说清意思就行。
②口头通知不用写通知时间和发通知的单位。
③口头通知一开头可有称呼语,具体因通知对象
而异。
常用的称呼语有“Comradesandfriends”、“Boysandgirls”、“Teachersandfellowstudents”、“Ladiesandgentlemen”,也有的不用开头语,直接开始。
④口头通知的一些常用的开头语和结束语。
开头语
结束语
Anyquestions?
Doeseveryoneunderstand?
That'sall.Thankyou.
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①Pleasebequiet,everyone.There'ssomethingyouneedtoknow.Asourteacherisill,we'retohavereadingclasstogetherwiththestudentsofClassThreetoday.Pleasetakeyourbencheswithyoutotheirclassroom.Theoralclasswillbeputoffuntiltomorrow.That'sall.Thankyou.
②Attentionplease,rades.ThereisgoingtobeatalkonAmericanFamilyintheLectureHallthisafternoon.It'llbegivenbyanAmericanprofessor_____Mr.Smith.Thosewhowanttoattendpleasebethereat2∶30Anyquestion?
Ifno,that'sall.Thankyou.
③Listen,please,Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou.We'regoingtoholdaget-togetherwithsomeforeignstudentsat7∶00p.m.onFridayintheForeignStudent'sDiningHall.Anyonewhowantstotakepartinit,pleasebethereontime.Thankyou.
④Ladiesandgentlemen,Listen,please.Thisafternoonwe'regoingtovisittheGreatWall,thebuswillstopatthefootoftheGreatWall.Threehourslat
er,we'llgettogetherhereandbacktothehotel.WhenyougotovisittheGreatWall,pleasetakeyourvaluablethingswithyou.Andremembertoebacktothebusatfiveo'clock.Dobethereontime.
Doeseveryoneunderstand?
Sinceeveryoneunderstandsverywell.
Thankyou.
练习
①假如你是班长,利用课余时间告诉你的同班
同学,本星期六下午4∶00在本班教室召开班会,主题是:
如何保持教室干净、整洁。
请同学们准备好发言。
(字数:
60~80左右)
参考词语
将?
?
四处扔tothrow?
about
对?
?
危害todoharmto
吐痰tospit
保持?
?
干净gokeep?
clean
准备好togetreadyfor
②假如你是学生会主席,通知各班团支部书记今天下午4∶30在会议室开会,讨论本学期打算开展哪些活动等事宜。
(字数:
60左右)
参考词语
讨论?
?
活动todiscusse?
activities
团支书thesecretariesofLeagueBranch
出席tobepresent
③假如你是班上的体育委员,你班下星期一准备和(6)班进行一场篮球赛。
请非队员的同学到时到学校篮球场观看,为本班球队喝彩助威。
(字数:
60左右)
参考词语
参加比赛totakepartinthematch
应邀tobeinvitedto
喝彩助威tocheerup
篮球场basketballcourt
④假如你是语文课代表,通知全班同学,因语文老师生病,请假2天,这两天的语文课改上自习,完成练习册第52页上的练习,另外预习好第16课课文。
(字数:
60~80左右)参考词语
请两天假toaskfortwodaysleave
自学tostudybyourselves
⑤假如你是生活委员,通知学生今天下午第七节课进行大扫除。
分工情况:
男同学桌凳,打扫墙壁,女同学擦门窗、桌凳等。
同学们按照自己的分工情况带好工具。
(字数:
60~80左右)
参考词语
进行大扫除tohaveageneralclean-up
分成tobedividedinto
扫把broom
抹布mop
⑥假如你是英语课代表,通知你班同学今天上午第三节课到学校语音室上英语口语课,请同学们带好口语课本,另外在语言实验室要遵守规则,不得损坏设备,否则是要被罚款的。
(字数:
60左右)
参考词语
语言实验室languagelab
遵守规则tokeeptherulesof?
损坏设备todamagetheequipment
罚款tofine
⑦假如你是班长,请通知学生听一个访美报告,时间是12月20日下午3点,地点为205会议室,主讲人是刚访美归国的李明华教授。
内容:
美国中学教育。
每个同学各带一至二名外校学生参加,要求不要迟到,本年级同学会后留下来讨论。
(字数:
60~80左右)参考词语
美国中学教育Americanhighschooleducation
允许tobeallowedtodosomething
期望beexpectedto
进行讨论toha