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六级作文

　　主题：

低碳生活

　　问题解决性作文

　　1.低碳生活受到人们的普遍欢迎

　　2.低碳生活方式非常有好处

　　3.我们应该如何去做

　　[范文]

　　Nowadays,thereareaconsiderable（相当大的）numberofindividuals（个人）whoprefertoleadalow-carbonlifestylewhichfindexpressioninthefactthatmoreandmorecommutersareusingpublictransportationsystemintheirdailylife.

　　Lowcarbonlifestylecanendowusandoursocietywithnumerousbenefits.Firstly,itgoesbeyonddoubtthatlowcarbonlifestylecontributesalottotheenvironmentalprotectionanditisafavorablewaytoslowdowntherateofclimate（气候）changeofourearth,whichalsomeansalottoourhealth.

　　Wearesupposedtoundertaketheresponsibilitytoleadalow-carbonlifestyle,whichisofgreatsignificance（意义重大）.Andthereisadiversityofmeasureswecantakesoastoleadsuchanenvironmental-friendlylife.Foronething,weareexpectedtominimizetheuseofprivatecars,whichemitalargeamountofgreenhousegases.Foranother,wearesupposedtocultivatethepublicawarenessofenergyconservationforenergyintheworldtodayisdecreasingrapidly（快的急速的）.Forinstance,wecanturnoffelectricalappliancesifnotnecessaryaswellasusingrenewablematerials.Furthermore,atourleisure,wecanseekopportunitiestoplantmoretreeswhichcanabsorb（吸收）carbon-dioxide.

　　Inbrief（短时间的）,low-carbonlifestyleisnothingbutthebestchoiceforusandonlyinthiswaycanweformaharmoniousrelationshipwiththeenvironment.

主题：

大学生使用信用卡

　　OnCreditCard

　　Atpresent,awidevareityofcreditcardsissuedbymajorbanksandshoppingmallsarethrivingincollegesanduniversitiesacrossthenation,withamultitudeofcollegestudentsmakingupagrowingpopulationofcardholders.Indeed（的确）,oneoutoffivestudentsisestimated（估计）tobeinpossessionofatleastonecreditcard,andthefigure（数字）isexpectedtobeonthesteadyincrese,thelatestdatapublishedbyYangtzeEveningPostsuggests。

　　Likeanythingpriortotheemergenceofthissmallpieceofplastic,theincreasingpopularityofcreditcardoncampushasbothbrightanddarksides.Ontheonehand,youngadultsincollege,freefromthetroubleofpocketingaconsiderablesumofcash,couldenjoytheconvenienceofcreditcardsandpurchaseexpensivegoodsbyinstallments.Ontheotherhand,however,theirresponsibleandexcessiveuseofthecardsbytheseyoungsters,themajorityofwhomarefreshoutofmiddleschoolincapableofbudgetingtheirmoney,canmakethemheavilyindebtwhichwilltakethemyearstopayoff。

　　Onmypersonallevel,whileenjoyingahostofconveniencesthecreditcardmaybring,wecouldn'taffordtoignoreaconspiciousfact:

inmostcases,parentsareoursolefinancialsources.Insteadofspendingwithoutanyrestrict,wearesupposedtoputstudiesonthetopofouragendaandmoveourselvesbeyondheavydependenceuponourparents。

主题：

环保

　　观点对比题

　　EconomicDevelopmentandEnvironmentalProtection

　　1.有人认为经济发展先于环境保护;

　　2.有人环境保护先于经济发展;

　　3.我的看法。

　　[范文]

　　Therearesomeindividualswhoarguethat,comparedtotheenvironmentprotection,thetoppriorityissupposedtogiventoeconomicdevelopment.Theydeemthatenvironmentalproblemsareinevitableandunavoidableintheprocessofeconomicdevelopment.Theyareonlythebyproductsofeconomicdevelopment,whichcanbehandledlaterwhenwehavethetimeandmoney.

　　However,otherindividualsholddifferentopinionsthat（或者：

otherholdersoftheoppositeopinionsarguethat）environmentprotectionshouldbeattachedmoreimportancethaneconomicdevelopmentinthatpresentseriousenvironmentalproblemswillthreatenthehealthoftheresidentsandhindertheadvanceoftheeconomy.

　　AsfarasIamconcerned,environmentalprotectionandeconomicdevelopmentcancoexistinparallelandcanstayinharmony.Ourultimateaimineconomicdevelopmentistoprovideacomfortableandhappylifeforourpeople.Whatisthepointofeconomicdevelopmentifweachieveitatthecostofourenvironment?

Therehasbeenmuchevidencetoprovethatabalancebetweenthetwohelpsmorerapidandcontinuousdevelopmentofthesociety.

话题：

旅游

　　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below:

　　1）有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行

　　2）两种旅行方式的好处

　　3）你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?

　　TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

　　___________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________

　　行文思路

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。

提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：

指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：

有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。

　　高分范文

　　TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

　　[1]Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.[2]Somepeopleliketotravelalone,[2]whileothersprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Ofcourse,everyonehashisconsiderationforhispreference.

　　[4]Travelingalone,onecanenjoymorefreedom.Thetravelercanarrangehistourashewisheswithoutthetroubleofhumoringothers.[3]Moreover,travelingalone[5]tendtobringthetraveler[6]unexpectedsurprise,[7]suchasmakinganewfriendandenjoyingadifferentscenery.[8]Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages.[3]Foronething,thegroupmemberscanhelpandlookaftereachotherinthejourney.[3]Foranother,[4]travelingwithotherswhohavesameinterestwith,youcansharecostsandexperienceswiththem.

　　[9]Astome,Iprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Firstly,wecandealwiththepossibleproblemsanddifficultiesinthejourney.[3]Secondly,Iliketosharethepleasureoftravelingwithothers.[3]Insum,[10]bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.

　　亮点点评

　　[1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。

　　[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。

　　[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

　　[4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。

　　[5]“倾向，趋于”。

　　[6]“意外的惊喜”。

　　[7]表示列举。

　　[8]“和…相比”。

　　[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。

　　[10]“或者…，或者”。

　　佳句临摩

　　1.佳句：

Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.

　　临摩：

当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。

　　____________________________________________.

　　2.佳句：

Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages.

　　临摩：

和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。

　　3>___________________________________________.

　　3.佳句：

Bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.

　　临摩：

网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。

　　_____________________________________.

　　KEY:

　　1.Whenitcomestowhetherweshouldcancelthe“goldenweek”holiday,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.

　　2.Comparedwiththecities,thecountrysideisrelativelybackwardineconomy.

　　3.Bothnetworkteachingandtraditionalschoolteachinghavetheiradvantages.Therefore,weshouldcombinethesetwoteachingways.

主题：

电影和电视对公众的影响力

　　【题目】

　　Howdomoviesortelevisioninfluencepeople’sbehavior?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　【范文】TheInfluenceofTelevisionandMovies

　　Thereisnodoubtthatwatchingtelevisionandmoviescaninfluencethewaythatpeoplebehave.Moreover，itseemsthatpeoplearespendingmoreandmoretimewatchingsomesortofvisualentertainment，whetheritistelevision，avideotapeoraDVD.Therefore，theeffectsofvisualmediacannotbeignored.

　　Oneobviouseffectofthesemediaisthatwatchingtheminducespeopletobuycertainproducts.Televisionadvertisingiswidespreadand，nowadays，evenmovietheaterspermitadvertisements.AnotherwayTVandthemoviesaffectpeopleisthattheygivepeopleeitherabroaderviewoftheworldoradistortedone，dependingonwhattypeofprogramtheywatch.Thosewhowatchnewsandeducationalprogramcanlearnmanynewthingswhilethosewhowatchprimarilyentertainmentshowsmaycometobelievethatmostpeopleintheworldpossessgreatwealthandgoodlooks.Itmaymakethembecomedissatisfiedwiththeirownlives.Finally，perhapsthemostsusceptibleviewersarechildren，whomaybeunabletotellfactfromfictionandmaytrytoimitateactsthattheyseeonTVorinthemovies.

　　Withtheever-increasingpopularityofvideoentertainment，societymustpayattentiontotheseeffects.Televisionandmovies，whileentertainingandinformative，cannottaketheplaceofrealexperience.

　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyOpiniononCampusLectures.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

　　1.大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩

　　2.听讲座的益处

　　3.你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论

　　【范文】

　　MyOpiniononCampusLectures

　　Inrecentyears,moreandmorelecturesarebeinggivenoncampus.Theyareorganizedeitherbythedepartmentsorbythestudentsunionswithanaimtoimprovethestudentsqualitybothmentallyandacademically.Theselecturesareusuallyinseriesandondifferenttopics,suchasarts,life,economy,psychologyandworldissues.

　　Generallyspeaking,theadvantagesofgoodlecturesarevarious.Firsttheybroadenthestudentsknowledgehorizonandcultivateinterestindifferentfields.Second,theymakethelifeofthestudentscolorfulandenjoyable.

　　Withthesemerits,lecturesarejustcomplementaryandsubordinatetoourschoolwork.Ifstudentsspendtoomuchtimeattendinglectures,theirregularstudywillbeaffectedanddisturbed.So,inmyopinion,thestudentsshould,ontheonehand,dotheirclassworkandhomeworkwellfirst,ontheotherhand,setasmoretimeaspossibletoattendgoodlectureswhicharehelpfulto