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八省联考读后续写11篇范文学习
2021年新高考八省首次联考读后续写
(江苏,福建,河北,辽宁,湖北,湖南,广东,重庆)
Duringthispastyear,I’vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.
Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(TJ),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.
Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.
Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:
Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.
Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billinthemanshand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.
Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.
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Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.
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原作品后续:
AfterIsaidmygoodbyesandstartedwalkingbacktotheJeep,theGirlcalledoutandaskedifIdhadlunch.WhenItoldherno,sheranupandhandedmeatamale.
Thisfamily,undoubtedlypoorerthanjustabouteveryoneelseonthatstretchofhighway,workingonaseasonalbasiswheretimeismoney,tookacoupleofhoursoutoftheirdaytohelpastrangeguyonthesideoftheroadwhilepeopleintowtruckswerejustpassinghimby.
Butweweren'tdoneyetIthankedthemagainandwalkedbacktomycarandopenedthefoilonthetamale(Iwasstarvingbythispoint,andwhatdidIfindinside?
My$20bill!
Iwhirledaroundandrantothevanandtheguyrolleddownhiswindow.Hesawthe$20inmyhandandjuststartedshakinghisheadno.AllIcouldthinktosaywas,"Porfavorporfavor,porfavor,"withmyhandsout.Theguyjustsmiledand,withwhatlookedlikegreatconcentration,saidinEnglish:
"Todayyou,tomorrowme.”
Thenherolleduphiswindowanddroveaway,withhisdaughterwavingtomefromtheback.IsatinmycareatingthebesttamaleI'veeverhad,andIjuststartedtocry.Ithadbeenaroughyear;nothingseemedtobreakmyway.ThiswassooutofleftfieldIjustcouldn'thandleit.
IntheseveralmonthssincethenI’vechangedacoupleoftires,givenafewridestogasstationsandoncedrove50milesoutofmywaytogetagirltoanairport.Iwon'tacceptmoney.ButeverytimeI'mabletohelp,IfeelasifI'mputtingsomethinginthebank.
优秀习作1
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.ItoldherIforgottobringsomewhenIlefthome,becauseIdidn'ttknowI'dbetrappedhereandwaitedsolongforhelp.Shetoldhermothertotakeouttheirlunchsothattheycouldsharewithme.Beingsohungry,Iagreed.Theirlunchwasnotbigmeals,butjustordinarysandwiches.However,thesewerethemostdelicioussandwichesI’veeverhad.Afterwefinishedourlunch,itwastimetosaygoodbye.Beforeleaving,thekindfamilyhandedmeapaperbagasagift.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Therelaysomefreshfruits,anoteanda$20bill.Thenotesaidtheyweregladtohelpapersoninneed,andtherewasnoneedtopay.Obviously,theyreturnedmymoneyandgavemesomerefreshmentsformywaybackhome.Theirboundlesskindnessangenerositymovedmedeeply.Withthesweetsmell,Iarrivedatmydestination,safeandsound.
优秀习作2
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Sincemycarhadbrokendownearlyinthemorning,theanswerwasofcourseno.However,afterthey’veofferedmesomuchhelp,Ididn'twanttobringfurtherbother.Despitemyrefusal,thegirljustpushedapaperbagtomeandtoldmethatitcontainedtheirhomemadebread,withherparentssmilingbrightly.Tearswellingupinmyeyesfortheirkindness,Ibowedandconveyedmydeepestgratitude.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Inthebottomofitlaytwopiecesofbreadwrappedinpaperand-abill.Itwasthe$20billIhadgiventhem.
Instantlyitdawnedonmethatinthiswaythegirlwastryingtoreturnmymoneythoughtheydeservedit.Overwhelmedbygratitudeanddeeplymoved,Ilookedforthefamily.Sadly,theywerenowheretofind.TodayIstillcherishthisexperience,whichlightsmybeliefinhumanity,andIpraythatthekind,noblefamilywillhaveabrightfuture.
优秀习作3
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.IrepliedIhadn’t,wonderingwhysheaskedthatinthemeantime.Tomyamazement,shegottothebackseatoftheirtruckandtookoutapaperbag.Shehandedittome,explainingthatitwasfruitsaladmadeonthefarm.Idecidedtodeclineitatfirst,butherparentsinsistedonmykeepingthelittlegift.ItwouldbeinappropriateifIturneditdown,soItookitandexpressedmygratitude.Theysaidgoodbyeandthendroveaway.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Itwasreallyafreshsalad,andIcouldn'twaittotakeitoutandenjoythemeal.However,beyondmyexpectation,a$20billwaslyingunderit.Iwastotallyshockedatthesightofit.Apparently,theMexicanfamilydidalltheseoutofkindness,insteadofthemoneyIoffered.Justatthatmoment,myfaithinhumanitywasbrightenedagain.
优秀习作4
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.AbrightsmileflashedonherfacewhenIsaidthatIhadn’t.Thefamilyinvitedmetoenjoythelunchtogether.Originally,IrefusedbutwatchingtheirenthusiasticfacesInoddedwithgratitude.Wehadawonderfulmeal,talkingandlaughing.Afterthemeal,thewomanhandedmeapaperbagandinsistedthatIopenitaftertheyleft.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Itwasthe$20billthatlayinthebag.Inaninstanttworowsoftearswererollingdownonmycheek.MyformerexperiencesofcartroubleinwhichIwasignoredinhelplessnessfloodedinmymind.Thefamily’swarmheartwassopreciousandmoving.Imadeupmymindtopassitontomaketheworldabetterplace.
优秀习作5
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Thefamilywasgoingtohavesomethingtoeatinthenearbyrestaurantandinvitedmetojointhem.SowarmweretheythatIfailedtorefusethem.Outofgratitude,IinsistedthatIpaythebill.Afterlunch,Isawthemanwhisperingwithhiswifesecretlyandaround5minuteslaterhiswifewentbackwithapaperbagandhandedittome.Thenwesaidgoodbyetoeachother.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Tomysurprise,lyinginthebagwasthemoneywhichIhadgiventhem.Atthatmoment,Ifeltreallywarmandtearsrolleddownmycheeks.IkeptthemeaningfulpaperbagandpromisedtobeahelpfulmanliketheMexicanfamilyinthefuture.
优秀习作6
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.ItsuddenlyoccurredtomethatIhadn’teatensincemyJeeppulledover.IwasabouttoturndownpolitelyasIdidn’twanttobotherthemfurtherwhenmystomachstartedtogrowlwithhunger.SoembarrassedwasIthatIacceptedherinvitationandfollowedherintothetrucktohavelunch.Duringthelunch,Iexpressedmygratitudeagainandchattedwiththemhappily.Weenjoyedagoodlunchtimeandthenseparatedunwillingly.
Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Tomygreatsurprise,IfoundthemoneythatIhadquietlygiventhewifeandaletter,reading"Wearehappytomakesuchagoodfriendlikeyouandwehelpedourfriendfreeofcharge."Tearsofgratitudewelledupinmyeyes.Iwasdeeplywarmedandsuchkindnessrestoredmyfaithinhumannature.EventuallyIdecidedtopassthewarmthandkindnessontopeoplearoundme.
优秀习作7
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.ItwasthenthatIrealizedIhadworkedforhourswithanemptystomach."No"Ireplied."Letshaveamealtocelebrateourmeeting!
"thegirlsaidhappily.Iwasabouttotakethemtothenearestrestaurantwhenthegirlstoppedme,saying"Ididn'tmeanthat.Imean..."Shehandedmeapaperbagwithacheerfulsmile.You'llfallinlovewithit!
Ibet!
"Justthenthemansaidthattheyhadtogotothefarmintimeandthatthey’dliketogetanotherchancetohavelunchwithme.Thesmalllovelytruckpulledawaywithmanywar