高中英语读后续写素材+练习汇总.docx

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1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Onceuponatime,inasmallvillageinTurkey,therelivedamotherandherson.ThesonwasknownbyallasBaldBoybecauseeventhoughhewasstillquiteyounghehadnohaironhisheadatall.

BaldBoyandhismotherwereverypoorindeedandsoeachdayBaldBoywouldtakeuphisbasketandwentoutintothewoodsinsearchoffood.

Oneday,ashewassearchingtheforestfloorformushrooms,BaldBoywassurethathecouldhearayounggirlcrying.Whenhelookeduphenoticedalittlesquirrel（松鼠）sittingonthebranchofthetreeabovehishead.Thesquirrelwascryinginconsolably（无法安慰的）andsoBaldBoytookthelittlecreatureinhisarms.Hecomfortedherandtoldherthateverythingwasgoingtobeokay.

Whenatlastthesquirrelstoppedcrying,thetwofriendsgottotalkingandtheBaldBoyexplainedhowhelivedwithhismotherandhowtheywereverypoor.

"Ineedtocomeintothisforesteachdayinsearchoffoodbecausewehavenomoney,"hetoldthesquirrel.

Itwasthenthatthelittlesquirrelsaid,"YouhavebeenverykindtometodaysoIamgoingtohelpyouinreturn."

ThenthelittlesquirreljumpedoutofBaldBoy'shandsandsaid,"Followme."Theyoungboyfollowedthesquirrelthroughtheforestformanyhoursuntiltheyreachedacliffedge（悬崖边）thatcouldseethegreenvalleybelow.

"Youmustclimbdownthiscliff,"saidthesquirrel."WhenyoureachthebottomyouwillfindtheForestQueen.

Shewillaskyouthreequestionsandyoumustanswerthemallcorrectlytoreceivetheprize."

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhispered...

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Paragraph2:

"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"then...

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【参考答案】

Paragraph1:

ThesquirrelclimbedupontoBaldBoy'sshoulderandwhisperedtheanswerstothethreequestionsinhisear.Thenshejumpeddownandranbackintotheforest.BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.Whenshesawhimapproaching,theQueenstoppedBaldBoyanddemandedthatheanswerthreequestions.

Paragraph2:

"Ifyoudonotanswercorrectly,"shesaidinhercoldvoice,"thenyouwillloseyourhead.""Howmanycherriesaregrowingonthistree?

""Whereisthemiddleoftheearth?

""Whichistheheavierofthesetwoapples?

"Confidently,BaldBoyspokeouttheanswersthesquirrelhadalreadytoldhim.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.Hethankedthesquirrelinhisheartandhappilyreturnedhometohismotherwiththegold.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

文章主要讲述生活在一个小村庄里的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。

一天，这个秃头男孩遇到一个哭的伤心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。

【详解】

续写第一段开头为：

松鼠爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，小声说……后面应该写小松鼠怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林女王的过程。

续写第二段开头为：

“如果你答错了，”她用冰冷的声音说，“那么……后面应该写秃头男孩回答上森林女王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。

【点睛】

文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运用恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如BaldBoymadehimselfarope,thenclimbeddownthecliffedgeandmadehiswaytowherethesquirrelhadtoldhimtheForestQueenlived.TheForestQueencouldnotdenythatallthreeanswerswerecorrectandsosheunwillinglyhandedBaldBoyalargebagofgoldthatwashisprize.这里的宾语从句和定语从句相结合使用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。

2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Jennywasaprettyeight-year-oldgirl.

Onedaywhensheandhermotherwerecheckingoutatthegrocerystore,Jennysawaplasticpearlnecklace,bywhichshewastotallydefeated.Howeagerlyshewantedit!

Butwhenshesawtheprice,herheartsankalittle.Shegathereduphercourageandaskedhermotherifshewouldbuyitforher.Hermothersaid,“Well,itisaprettynecklace,butitcostsanawfullotofmoney.Icanbuyyouthenecklace,butwhenwegethome,weshouldmakeupalistofhouseworkthatyoucandotopayforthenecklace.”Jennyagreedimmediately,feelingaburstofjoy.Sohermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforher.Jennyworkedonherhouseworkdeterminedlyandearnestlyeveryday.SoonJennypaidoffthepearls.

Jennyhadaverylovingdaddy.WhenJennywenttobed,hewouldreadJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthestory,hesaid,“Jenny,doyouloveme?

”“Oh,yes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlsaiddelightedly,withabroadsmileonherface.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”Hearingthat,Jennyfrozethere,ananxiousexpressiontwistingherface.“Oh!

Daddy,notmypearls!

ButyoucanhaveRosy,myfavoritedoll.Rememberher?

Yougavehertomelastyearformybirthday.Okay?

”“Ohno,darling,that’sokay.”Herfatherbrushedhercheekwithakiss,gentlyandcalmly.“Goodnight,littleone.”

Aweeklater,herfatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory,“Doyouloveme?

”“Ohyes,Daddy,youknowIloveyou.”thelittlegirlmurmuredsoftly,tryingtoescapefromherfather’seyes.“Well,then,givemeyourpearls.”“Oh,Daddy,notmypearls!

ButyoucanhaveRibbons,mytoyhorse.Doyourememberher?

Sheismyfavorite.”Thelittlegirlbegged.“No,that’sokay,”herfathersaid,smilingbroadlyandsweetlyandbrushedhercheekagainwithakiss.“Godblessyou,littleone.Sweetdreams.”

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1：

Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.

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Paragraph2：

Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.

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【参考答案】

Paragraph1：

Severaldayslater,whenJenny’sfathercameintoreadherstory,Jennywaswaitinganxiouslyforhimonthebed.Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.Whenthestorycametoanend,unexpectedly,Jennyofferedherbelovednecklacetoherfather,withherfingerstremblingautomatically.Nooneknewwhatthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently,“Daddy,youknowIloveyoumorethanthenecklace.”Then,thenecklaceslidintoherfather’shandsdeterminedly.

Paragraph2：

Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.Jennyfrozethere,athrilledexpressiontwistingherface.BeforeJennywasabletosaysomething.herfatherbrushedawarmkissonherfaceandgatheredherintohisarms.Holdingthegenuinenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。

根据所给短文和段首句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

读后续写主要以故事类文本为主，考生在阅读时，不应该走马观花看情节，而应找出文章的六要素（who,when,where,what,how,why），然后将每个主要事件都用六要素串联成一句话。

这样一来，冗长的故事就成了两三句，文章的结构自然清晰明了。

同时，考生还应该分析已给出的两个开头句包含的主要句子结构，这样才能保证正确的写作方向。

为了写出符合故事发展的“尾巴”，必须先分析原文的情节发展方向。

除了采用上文提到过的六要素分析法，在审题时还应该着重分析三个点：

起因、转折、高潮。

只有确定了故事的起因，考生才能合理推断这个起因会导致的可能结果；只有确定了故事的转折，考生才能合理地将故事发展下去。

不过，在设计情节时，同样要考虑六要素，将它们串联成一句话，再将这句话添砖加瓦变成段落。

在语言方面，注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切，合理使用高分词汇、短语及句型；不要抄原文，情节合情合理；书写美观，保持卷面整洁。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

作者在范文中使用了高级句子Whenlisteningtothestory,Jennywastotallyabsent-minded,withherhandsholdingthenecklacetightlyandfirmly.使用了状语从句的省略，和with复合结构；Holdingtheplasticpearlhisdaughteroffered,thefatherdraggedoutabluebox.使用了非谓语动词做状语；MuchtoJenny’samazement,abeautifulrealpearlnecklacelaypeacefullyinthebox,whichsetherheartracing.使用了which引导的定语从句。

这些为文章增色不少，而且全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Wemovedonintothejungle--aforestwherelargenumbersoftalltreesandplantsgrowveryclosetogether.OldMaliwentinfrontandIfollowedclosebehindhim.Westoppedforthenightaboutanhourbeforeitbegantogetdark.

OldMalilitafire.Whenitwasbightheshowedmehowtomakeabedwithmoss（青苔，苔藓）.

Itwassoftandcomfortable.

―Mali,howdidyoulearntomakesuchabed?

Iasked.

―Ilearnedtomakebedslikethat,Malireplied,―bywatchingandlisteningtoothers.Thatistherealwaytolearnanything.

―Willyouletmewatchyoualways?

IaskedOldMali.―Iwanttolearnallthethingsyouknowaboutthejungle.

Whenwehadfinishedoursupper,OldMaligotontohisbedandlaydown.Itwasnowcompletelydark.Inthefirelight,OldMaliseemedtobefastasleeponhisbed.Isuddenlyfeltaloneandafraid.

Alldayinthejungle,whilewehadbeenwalking,Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Nowtheyseemedtobemuchnearer.Thejunglewasnowawallofblacknessinthelightofthefire.

Ifeltfrightenedandsuddenlymymouthwent