MBA英语作文.docx

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MBA英语作文

MBA作文讲义

考试流程

SectionⅠ

UseofEnglish

（20题）10points

20mins

SectionⅡ

ReadingComprehension

（20题）40points

（5题）10points

80mins

SectionⅢ

Translation

15points

30mins

SectionⅣ

Writing

10+15=25points

15+35mins

2010—2014年作文回顾

写作25%分数

小作文2010—2014年99%信件10分/15mins

2010感谢信［邀请］中美文化项目刚回国①感谢②邀请来中国玩

2011恭喜信［建议］表弟考上大学①恭喜②给些建议

2012投诉信［解决方案］电子词典坏了①投诉②给出解决方案

2013邀请信我们班举行一个慈善义卖①邀请

2014询问信出国与室友居住①你的生活习惯②给出建议

大作文议论文15分/35mins（★数据图表连续5年硬币原理看图说话/坏现象）

提出问题／分析问题／总结

作文注意：

一个中心，两个基本点（以阅卷老师为中心；风险最小化，得分最大化）

卷面：

字数+20（恰当字数）小100+20大150+20

段落3段式（4段式）

格式空行，空格

字句，行距

杂项改错不改好（FudanUniversityisanoldschool;itisveryfamous.）

书写规范cannotcan’t

基本要求：

涂改拼写语法

高分作文标志：

1、是否长短句交叉；习惯使用被动weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.

　　2、是否会使用插入语；如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说：

Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…

　　3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

Theapartmentisveryclosetoyourschool.=Theapartmentiswithinastone’sthrowofyourschool.

　　4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

Internet=cyber-space/theWeb/world/community

people=individuals/citizens/netizens/residents/working-ageadults

moreandmore=growing/increasing…

　　5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

A:

HiJohn!

You’reupearly!

B:

Yes,theearlybirdcatchestheworm!

A:

HiJohn!

You’reupearly!

B:

Well,youknowwhattheysayabouttheearlybird!

有关当局要采取更好的措施

Therelevantauthoritieshavetomakebetterrulesandregulations.

Theauthoritiesconcerned

小作文

一．六种头：

1.Iamwritingthislettertotellyouthat_____________

Iamhappytolearn/hearthat____________

Iamsorrytosay/tellyouthat____________

2.Itisbelieved/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledged（bymanypeople）that____________

3.众所周知Asweallknow,___________/Asisknowntoall,____________

4.我认为：

We/Icometorealize/believethat____________

Iamfirmlyconvincedthat____________

AsfarasIamconcerned,____________

Intheeyesofmostpeople,____________

Istronglyfeel/dosuggestthat____________

Ihavereasonstobelievethat____________

5.Everyone（inbusiness/intheworld）hasbeentoldthat__________

6.Ihopethislettercanfindyouinagoodmood./Thisletterisexpectedtofindyouinagoodmood.

二．3→30

长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾

以复旦很有名为例：

FudanUniversityisfamous.如何变长句

头:

Asisknowntoall,___________________________________

身体：

FudanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularity–主句

垃圾：

allovertheworld–介词结构

尾巴so,Iamproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.---从句

推荐使用从句:

When/if----假设逻辑关系

because/so—因果

but,转折

，which_____________

，who_____________

三．静态----动态语言（be动词的转化问题）

bepopular/famous:

enjoygreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld

becheap:

enjoyalowandcompetitivepriceinthemarket.

beimportant:

playacrucialroleindoingsomething

eg.Qualityplaysacrucialroleinboostingacompany’spopularityandreputationinthemodernmarket.

四：

主体部分万能句（2句话）

1.因果关系

2.Thetoppriorityshouldbegiventodosth,whichmakesiteasierforsb.todosth.

因果关系几种表达法：

（1）Adepend（s）[inlargemeasure]onB.

Successdepends[inlargemeasure]onone’shardworkanddedication/diligence/greatefforts.

（2）Agive（s）risetoB.

Lackofcommunicationislikelytogiverisetosocialconflictsanddisputes.

can→beableto

may→belikelyto

should→besupposedto

（3）AisasignificantcauseofB.

Thelowprice,goodqualityandsuperiorservicearesignificantcausesofthepopularityofdomesticcarsinthemodernmarket.

（4）AissupposedtocontributetoB.

Lackofenvironmentalconservationawarenessissupposedtocontributetoglobalwarming.

2010年

第一步：

定位-----感谢信

第二步：

归纳要求----1.感谢2.邀请

第三步：

模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----感谢

2.过渡---夸项目，为彼此骄傲/或回顾很开心

3.主体（2个万能句）--沟通促成交流

4.结束语------------------邀请来中国玩

DearTom,

Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksforyourwarmreception,whenIjoinedtheSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram./whenIwasthememberoftheSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram./whichmademyjourney/travel/stayintheUSimpressiveandpleasant/interestingandmeaningful/colorful.

Asisknowntoall,thisprogramenjoysgreatpopularityandreputationallovertheworld,soIamproudthatwecouldbecomeapartofit./IamfirmlyconvincedthatwhenIwasthememberoftheSino-Americanexchangeprogram,IhadawonderfultimewithyouguysintheUS.

主体万能句：

沟通促成交流

ItisbelievedbymanypeoplethatcommunicationbetweenChinaandAmericaisasignificantcauseofculturaldevelopment.IstronglyfeelthatwhenIreturnhome,thetoppriorityshouldbegiventobringthebestpartofyourculturetoourland,whichmakesiteasierforChinesepeopletounderstandthewesternworld.

IholdanexpectationthatyouwillpayavisittoChinasoon.Iamlookingforwardtohearingformyou/yourreply/seeingyou.

YoursSincerely,

ZhangWei

2011年

第一步：

定位-----恭喜信

第二步：

归纳要求----1.恭喜2.建议和指导

第三步：

模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----恭喜

2.过渡---------------------夸复旦，为你骄傲40-50字

3.主体（2个万能句）--建议指导：

好好学习50-60字

4.结束语------------------祝福前程似锦10-20字

DearLiMing,

IamhappytohearthatyouwillgotoFudanUniversity.Asweallknow,FudanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld,soIamproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.

Itisbelievedthatone’ssuccessdepends[inlargemeasure]onhishardworkanddedication.Idosuggestthatyourtoppriorityshouldbegiventolearnusefulandhelpfulknowledgeincollege,whichmakesiteasierforyoutobecomeanexcellentcandidateaftergraduation.

Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillhaveabrightfuture.＝Youwillhaveagreatprospectinthefuture.

Yourssincerely,

ZhangWei

求职信：

复旦MBA院校刚刚毕业，求biz-manager工作---无经验类型

第一步：

定位-----求职信

第二步：

归纳要求----1.求工作2.原因3.面试机会

第三步：

模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----求工作

2.过渡---------------------过度句

3.主体（2个万能句）----录用原因

4.结束语------------------给面试

DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionofbusinessmanager（thatisadvertisedonthenewspaper）inyourcompany./IamwritingtotellyouthatIaminterestedinthepositionofbusinessmanager…Iamprettysurethatwhenitcomestomanagementwork,Iamyourbestcandidate.

Whenitcomesto…=whenpeopletalkaboutthe…

Asfor…

Whenthereissuchapositionopen/availableinyourcompany

Asyoucanseefrommyresume/personalinformationduringthepast3years,mytoppriorityhasbeengiventolearnusefulandhelpful/systematicandscientificmanagementknowledge/theories,whichmakesiteasierformetostepintotheworkplace/becomeanexcellentbusinessmanager/copewithmajorchallengesinworkasateamleader/workefficiently.ThereforeIhave（alotof）confidence/Iamfirmlyconvincedthatsuchoverallandsystematic/useful/practicallearningislikelytocontributetomygoodperformanceinmanagementposition.

Iholdanexpectationthatyouwilloffermeanopportunityforacominginterview.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

ZhangWei

求职信（有经验）

DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionofsalesrep/salesperson（thatisadvertisedonthenewspaper）inyourcompany./IamwritingtotellyouthatIaminterestedinthepositionofsalesrep/salesperson…Iamprettysurethatwhenitcomestosaleswork,Iamyourbestcandidate.

Asyoucanseefrommyresume/personalinformation,duringthepast10yearsmytoppriorityhasbeengiventodosaleswork,whichmakesiteasierformetobuildupagoodrelationshipwithclientsandcustomers（consumers）/run/manageapowerfulsalesteam.ThereforeIhave（alotof）confidence/Iamfirmlyconvinced/Ihavereasonstobelievethatmyrichworkingexperienceandprofessionalsalesskillsarelikelytocontributetogoodsalesresults/excellentperformanceinyourcompany.

Iholdanexpectationthatyouwilloffermeanopportunityforacominginterview.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

ZhangWei

推荐信：

DearMr.Smith,

Iamwritingthislettertorecommendaverygood/perfect/excellentcandidateforthesalespositionopen/availableinyourcompany.Iamprettysurewhenitcomestosaleswork,Tomisyourbestcandidate/choice/person.

辞职信：

为家庭，为搬家，为未来跳槽，为过去不满意，为自个儿创业

DearMr.Smith,

Iamwritingtotellyou/IamsorrytotellyouthatIwillquitthecurrentjobinourcompany.Ifirmlybelievethatwhenweworkedtogetherinthepastfewyears,Ireallyhadawonderfultime.

Asyouknow,whenIamgettingolder,myhappinessdependsinlargemeasureonmyfamily.ThereforeIstronglyfeelthatmytoppriorityshouldbegiventotakecareofmyfamily,whichmakesitmorelikelyformetobeagoodwifeandmother.

Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillapproveof/agreeonmydecision/request.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

ZhangWei

道歉信，建议信和询问信

ⅠDirections:

YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgettoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto:

1）makeanapology

2）suggestasolution

DearBob,

Iamwritingthislettertomakeanapology/apologizethatIforgottoreturnthetraditionalmusicCDtoyou.Asforthealbum,itisbelievedbymanypeoplethatitisnoteasytogetanotheroneinthemarket.

IamstronglyconvincedthatthispieceofCDislikelytocontributetothedevelopmentofyourmusiccareer.IdorealizethatwhenIcomeback,mytoppriorityshouldbegiventomailittoyou,whichmakesiteasierforyoutoenjoythebeautifulandpleasantsongsofit.

IexpectthatyoucouldtellmeyouraddressandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

ZhangWei

ⅡDirections:

Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,