齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板.docx

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齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板

ThereareseveralaspectsoflanguageandspeakingthatIwouldliketofocusontodayforconsiderationstoallowyoutoimprovemovingforward.

　　First,theareaofpronunciationanddelivery.Someofyou,especiallywhenyouarenervous,shouldfocusmoreondictionandpronunciation.Specifically,trynottoswallowyourarticleslike"a"and"the"orlittleconnectorslike"of"Takeabreath,takeyourtime.andleteachwordbesounded.Similarly,makesureyousoundfinalconsonants,especiallythe"-ed"inyourpasttenses.ThisisoneofthethingsthatChinese,eventhegoodones,thereallygoodones,whenyoustartspeakingquicklyandpassionately,forget.So,payalotofattentionandbeconsciousthatthat'ssomethingthatyoumayknowthatthegrammars,grammaticalandstructuralrulesandnotsoundthatfinalconsonantoryoumaybealittlefuzzyonwhatthepasttenses,butthatsome-thingthatmakesabigdifferenceinacompetition,

　　Finally,intheareaofpronunciationforallyoustudents,notjustthecontestantsheretoday,please,theword"the",th-:

putyourtonguebetweenyourteeth.It'snot"da,"it's"the";it'snot"der."it's"their";it'snot"utter."it's"other."Youcandothis,youcandothis,Practiceonthewaytoclass,practiceintheshower,practicewhereverbutdon'tsay"da,"it's"the."

　　SecondcategoryoffeedbackisIwanttotalkverybrieflyaboutlexiconandvocabulary.AsImentioned,Ifeltthatyouruseoflexiconintoday'spresentationwasquitesophisticatedandshowedalotofpreparation.Mostofyoumayhavenoticedthatinthecontemporaneous,spontaneousremarksandquestions,thelevelofvocabularycamedownanotchortwo.That'sverynatural:

some-thingthatweallhavetoworkon.ButtherewereacoupleofIthink.there'sthreeexamplesthatI'dliketosharewithyoutotakehometoworkon.Numberone,sincethetopicwasecology,whenyoutalkaboutlivinginharmonywithdazaren,isit"thenature"or"nature'?

Nature!

I'snot"thenature"!

"Thenature"isshenrnashenmadongxidexingzhi,so,thatwaslikeoneofthoseerrorsthat.umm,cameupbecauseofthethemeofthespeech,butthat'ssomethingyoucanrememberrightnow,"Liveinharmonywith...nature."'Second,somesmallthingsthatInoted,someofyoumessedup"emphasized"with"emphasis"---it'sacommonmistake.Andoneofthecontestantswastalkingabouthowimportantitwastobeawareoftheenvironmentandthatweshouldgenerateawarenessofenvironmenttohelpusthinkofwaystoimproveit,andshe,Ithinkitwasshe,said"weshouldgetaconsensusoftheenvironment,"Ithinksheprobablymeant"sense.""getasenseoftheenvironment"asanawareness.So,littlethingslikethat.Becarefulsemantically.Ifyoureachtheupperlevelsoflanguage,it'sveryeasytochooseawrongwordandIguessmyadviceforyouwouldbe,"Whenindoubt,checkadictionaryfornuanceandproperusage."becausewhenyou'reinthelowerlevelsyou'renotusingthosefancywords.Butwhenyougetupintheupperlevels,liketoday,they'reveryimportant.

　　Finally,mylastcategoryoffeedbackforyouisintheareaofdiscourseandorganization.Thisisveryimportantinspeakingcontests,it'sveryimportantwhenyou'retranslatingattheupperlevels,andit'simportantinadultlifewhenyou'reworkingintheworldofworkwhereyou'renolongertalkingsimplyaboutyourselfandyourfamily,butotherthings,issues.Today'scontestantsdemonstratedawidevarietyofrhetoricalstylesintheirpreparedspeeches.Manyofthecandidatesshowedasophisticateduseoflinguisticregister,andregisteris,asyouknow.usinglanguagethatisappropriateforaspecificpurposeforaspecificsocialcontext.ThereasonlmentionregisteristhatforlearnersofEnglishasasecondlanguage,thehighertheregister,themoredifficultitistospeakaccurately,coherently,andpersuasively.Right?

So,today,oneofthecontestantsmadeaveryinsightfulremarkandsaid,Iquote,"ThehigherlevelofEnglishIspeak,themoremistakesImake."Rememberthat'?

Actually.WhatshemeantbythiswasthatshewashavingtroublecommunicatingsophisticatedideasandargumentsinEnglishwithoutmakingerrorsingrammarorusage.UniversitystudentslearningEnglishcanimprovetheirabilitytospeaknaturallyinhighregistersandhighlevelofdiscourseandcansustainahighlevelofdiscoursebydoingafewthingsandthesearethethreepiecesofadviceIwillleaveforyoubeforeIconcludemyremarks.So,thisisadviceteachersandstudentsforhowtobuildthatcompetencyandhighlevelofdiscourse.

　　Numberone:

Readtextsthatrepresentahighlevelofdiscourse.Soakupthatlanguage.But,rememberthatwrittentexthasadiscoursethatisseparatefromspokendiscourse.Someofyouwerespeakingtodayinvery.kindofwritten-proselanguage,andyoumaynotwanttodothatinthefuture.

　　Numbertwo,pieceofadvice:

Makeataperecordingofyourselftalkingaboutabstracttopicsorcomplextopicsandthengobackandlistentoitandlistentohowitsounds:

ifit'scohesiveandcoherent'?

Arethereerrors?

Thengoback,practiceagain,anddoitasecondtimelikeeditingawrittentextbut,infact,it'saspokentext.Youwillhearwhatyou'redoingthatcouldbeimproved,evenyou,andofcourseifyouhaveteachers,that'sevenbetter,butyou,yourselfwillhear.

　　Finally,mylastpieceofadviceforyouisthatyoushouldpracticebuilding.Iflanguage,ifspokenlanguage,waslikeahouseyoushouldpracticebuildingthehousebrickbybrick,storeybystorey,soyouallcandobasicsentencesnow,clearly.And,mostofyouareprettygoodatbuildingparagraphs,butsomeofyouarenotyetperfecthousebuildersintermsofdiscourseandorganization.Soyouwanttopracticewritingcompoundandcomplexsentences,andthenweavethosetogetherintoparagraphsandyou'llweavethoseparagraphsintothefullspokentext.Weavethemtogether,pushyourselftogoforthediscourseandwovennaturesothatnotonlythethoughtflows,butit'scoherent.And.Ithinkyou'llagreewithme,thatsomeofthemostcompellingspeechesthatweheardtodaydisplayedthistypecoherenceandsortofnaturalprogressionofideas,lfyoudothat,there'snodoubtinmymindthatyoucanprogressatthisarea.

　　Inconclusion,Iwouldliketoquoteoneofourquestionmasters,whosaidtodaythat,"Lifeisajourney,notthearrival."thatyoufocusonthejourneynotthearrival.Languagelearningislifelong.Lifelong.So,asyoumoveforward,languagelearningenjoythejourney.

评委总结发言（表达感谢时用）：

Goodafternoon,ladiesandgentlemen,excellentcontestants，itsreallyagreathonorandpleasuretobehereasajudgeforthisEnglishfeastofspeechcompetition.Ithinkallcontestantsdidagreatjobtoday,andI’dliketoexpressmythankstoeveryonewhohasmadeagreatcontributiontoorganizingthecompetitionandhasmadeitafantasticsuccess.Solet’sgiveabigroundofapplausetoallofthem.Ihavebeenreallyenjoyingthiscontestthoroughly,especiallybecauseallthecontestantshaveapproachedthetopicfromdifferentperspectives.Allspeecheshavebeenwellresearched,withgoodthoughtsaswellasinterestingideas.Iamverypleasedtoseethatmostofyoudeliveredyourspeechwithgoodpronunciation,cleararticulation,withgoodeyecontactandapropermanner.FinallyIwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoofferyousomelittletipsaboutpublicEnglishspeechcompetition.

First,theareaofpronunciationanddelivery.Someofyou,especiallywhenyouarenervous,shouldfocusmoreondictionandpronunciation.Specifically,trynottoswallowyourarticleslike"a"and"the"orlittleconnectorslike"of"Takeabreath,takeyourtime.andleteachwordbesounded.Similarly,makesureyousoundfinalconsonants,especiallythe"-ed"inyourpasttenses.ThisisoneofthethingsthatChinese,eventhegoodones,thereallygoodones,whenyoustartspeakingquicklyandpassionately,forget.So,whatIherewanttosuggesttothosecontestants,whenyoupreparingyourspeech,whateverthepreparedspeechandtheimpromptuspeech,donotjustfocusonthewholepictureofyourwork,insteadpayaattentiontothesmalldetails,aswellastheintonation.

Ontopofthat,Iwouldliketospeakwiththosewhoalwaysgetsomewhatalittlebitnervousoncetheystandonthestagetodeliverapublicspeech.Speakingofthis,Iwouldliketosharewithyoualittlebitaboutmyself.WhenIwasatmyhighschoolandIoftenblushedonmyfacewhenIstandeveninthefrontourclass,letalonethecitycompetitionlateron.Andoneofmyforeignteachersgivemysometips.That’swhatIwanttosharewithyourightnow.whenyoufeelnervous,especiallybeforegetonthestage,takeadeepbreathandtellyourselfinyourheartthatIamthebestinthewholeuniverse.Then,bythetimeyouspeak,whatyoushouldbearinmindisthatdon’tevergetdirectcontactwithsamepartareaofaudienceallthetime.Rememberyouareheretoservethewholelistenerswithyourpointofview,sochangeyoureyesighttodifferentaudience.

Ialwaysliketosaythat”Life

isajourney”.Languagelearningisalifelongexperienceandweneverfinishlearning,

especiallyfortheEnglishlanguagewhichissoaliveandeverchanging.Soasyou

moveforwardwithyourlanguagelearningmakesureyouenjoyeverymomentof

yourjourney.

面对标新立异选手：

Youreallyhavebeenverycreativeintryingtoclearoutyour

point.Butthistime,itwasveryclearlystatedwhatwouldberequiredofyouinthe

speech.Therefore,itisveryimportanttounderstandwhatisrequiredofyouandwhat

isdemandedofyouinacompetition.

面对跑题选手（