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连贯性的处理
结论或结果
accordingly;asaresult;consequently;
therefore;hence;eventually;intheend;
inshort;inaword;allinall;onthewhole;
tosumup;insummary;inconclusion;
inbrief/general;briefly/generallyspeaking
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连贯性的处理
转折或让步
afterall;although;though;
inspiteof;despite;
nevertheless;however;still;
exceptfor;onthecontrary;otherwise;
Itistruethat…,but…;
连贯性的处理
对比或对照
bycontrast;incontrast;bycomparison;
onthecontrary;ontheotherhand;
otherwise;instead;unlike;
notonly…,butalso…;
whereas;while;meanwhile;atthesametime;
similarly;likewise;inthesameway
连贯性的处理
递进及补充
besides;inaddition;furthermore;what’smore;
moreover;additionally;
inotherwords;likewise;toputitanotherway;
similarly;equallyimportant;
连贯性的处理
强调
aboveall;undoubtedly;obviously;
asamatteroffact;actually;practically;
particularly;inparticular;
连贯性的处理
原因
for;as;since;nowthat;giventhat;inthat…;
consideringthat…;seeingthat…;because;
owingto;dueto;thanksto;becauseof;
onaccountof
连贯性的处理
次序
1）First，Firstly，Inthefirstplace，Firstof
all，Tobeginwith,Firstandforemost;
2）Second，Secondly，IntheSecondplace，
Next，Then，Also
3）Third，Thirdly，Besides，Inaddition，
Moreover,Furthermore，What’smore
4）Last，Lastbutnottheleast，Inthelastplace
连贯性的处理
举例
asanillustration;namely;asaproof;
forinstance;forexample;suchas;
toillustrate;agoodcaseinpointisthat…
遣词
w利：
strengthen（加强）enhance（夯实）
promote（促进）improve（改善）
playapivotalrolein/laythefoundationfor
w弊：
destroy（破坏）diminish（减少）
decline（下降，衰退）weaken（削弱）
poseathreattosth.（=threaten对…构成威胁）
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遣词
巨大的immense;enormous;tremendous;giant;vast
好的positive;useful;effective;outstanding;remarkable;
excellent;beneficial;helpful
不好的negative;inefficient,harmful;fruitless;destructive,
threatening,frustrating,undesirable
重要的significant;vital;key;essential;critical;fundamental
著名的well-known;prominent;distinguished;renowned
认为argue;consider;insist;harbortheideathat…;holdthe
belief/viewthat…;taketheattitudethat…
造成giveriseto;resultin;contributeto
得到obtain;acquire;attain
增加；扩大add;enlarge;magnify;expand;extend
遣词
因为onaccountof;owingto;giventhat;seeingthat…
关于concerning;surrounding;regarding…
经常frequently;commonly;normally…
很;非常exceptionally;significantly;extremely…
越来越…increasingly;anincreasingnumberof…
应该besupposed/expected/obliged/todo…
当前;现在currently;presently;atpresent…
许许多多agreatmany;manya…;alargenumberof…
大部分Avast/Anoverwhelmingmajorityof…
一些Anumberof…;quiteafew…;
经典句型
w7）被动句
wSomemeasuresshouldbetakentodeal
withtheproblem.
wManyinstancescouldbefoundtosupport
thistypeofopinion.
wItisbelievedthat…
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经典句型
w6）分词短语做定语或状语
wThosewishingtojointhisclubshouldsign
here.
wAbundantrecreationalactivitiesare
availableforpeopletoreleasetheirstrain
andstress,rangingfromsportstoonline
activities.
经典句型
w5）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让
步，转折等）
wAslongaswecanarrangethetime
reasonably,theywilldefinitelyprovidemore
benefitsforus.
wWhateverthereasonis,therearestillsome
problemswithstudentuseofcomputers.
经典句型
w4）定语从句
wAsisshown/demonstrated/illustrated/
depicted/described…inthecartoon/
picture/graph/table…,
wStudentscanchoosetheteacheraccording
totheirinterests,whichwillbehelpfulfor
theirfuturecareers.
经典句型
w3）虚拟语气
w①Itisadvisable/critical/crucial/desirable
/essential/imperative/inevitable/necessary
/urgent+that…shoulddosth.
w②…suggest/advise/assume/demand
/insist/propose/recommend/require
/suggest+that…shoulddosth.
经典句型
w2）倒装句
wOnlythroughthesemeasurescanwehope
tosolvetheproblem.
wNotonlyshouldweenhanceourawareness,
（but）weshouldalsoappealtothe
authoritiestomakestrictlaws.
经典句型
w1）强调句
①Theabovemeasuresdobringbenefitsto
humanbeings.
②Itisobvious/apparentthat…
③Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…
④Itistheresponsibilityofeverycitizenin
oursocietytodohisutmosttoprotectthe
environment.
5C法则
1、字迹清楚，段落明朗（clear）
2、内容完整，紧扣提纲（complete）
3、首保正确，再求闪光（correct）
4、先总后分，连词用上（coherent）
5、语言简练，论据得当（concise）
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高分策略
w一、5C法则
w二、经典句型
w三、遣词
w四、连贯性的处理
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问题解决型模板
w
1Atpresent,theproblemarousingwidestconcern
is现象.2Actually,citizensinmountingnumbers
areinclinedto
描述现象.3Thispointcanbe
illustratedbythefactthat举例说明.
w
4Nevertheless,theprevalenceof此现象,directly
orindirectly,causesahostofdilemma.5Forone
thing,描述危害一.6Foranother,描述危害二.
w
7Inmyperspective,theremedyforproblemslies
in措施一.8Also,governmentsandauthorities
concernedshould措施二.9Inaword,though
thesesolutionsmaynotbeonce-for-allones,we
haveeveryreasontohopetheseobstaclescouldbe
overcomeinthenearfuture.
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图表型模板
w
1Itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/
amountof
hasundergonedramaticchanges.2Ithas
goneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears
（as…varies）.3Atthepointof
reachesitspeak
valueof数字.
w
4Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthechangeinthe
chart,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.5Firstof
all,列举原因一.6Moreimportantly,列举原因二.7Most
importantofall,列举原因三.
w
8Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasonto
predictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.9Itis
reasonableforustobelievethat描述趋势（ifnecessary
measuresarenottaken）.
利弊分析型模板
w
1Recentlytheissueofwhetherornot讨论现象has
beeninthespotlightandhasarousedwideconcerninthe
public.
w
2Therearetwomajorargumentsthatcanbemadeforthe
meritsof现象.3Foronething,描述优点一.4Foranother,
itiswidelyholdthat描述优点二.5Despitethese
advantages,somepeopleclaim,weshouldnotlosesightof
itsadverseeffectson缺点一.6Forinstance,举例说明缺
点一.7Inaddition,描述缺点二.
w
8Personallyspeaking,theadvantagesof此现象far
outweighthepotentialdisadvantages.9Aslongas提出措
施,wecanmaximizethebenefitsandminimizetheharmful
influence.
w
1Atpresent/Inrecentyears/Nowadays,great
importancehasbeenattachedto现象.2Itmay
somedaybecomethemaintrendwhen详述现状.
w
3Threemajorelements/factorswouldbetaken
intoconsiderationwhenanalyzingthisphenomenon.
4Firstofall,解释原因一.5Moreover,解释原因二.
6Last,解释原因三.7Forinstance,举例说明.
w
8Everythinghasbothpositiveandnegative
aspects,and此现象isofnoexception.9Ontheone
hand,描述此现象的优点.10However,描述此现
象的缺点.
原因列举型模板
观点对比型模板
w
1Viewson（Attitudestowards）现象varyfromperson
toperson.2Somepeoplethinkthat概述观点一.3They
holdthisopinionbecause（theythink）详述观点一.
w
4Others,however,takeanegative/positiveattitudeto
现象.5Fromtheirpointofview,概述观点二.
6Moreover,详述观点二.
w
7AsfarasIamconcerned,/Ifaskedmyattitude,Iam
inclinedtoagreewiththeformer/thelatterpointofview.
8Iholdthisattitude/opinion/viewbecause原因.9It’s
truethat描述观点一或二的优点,butitdoesn’tmeanthat
描述观点一或二的缺点.10Therefore/Inaword/In
short,
总结
.
万能框架—第三段
w㈡建议措施
w4.Hence,itisimperativeforustoenhance/
cultivate/raisetheawarenessof（e.g.
environmentalprotection）…
w5.Ibelievewehumanscanovercomethis
difficultyandwewillhaveabrighterfuture.
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万能框架—第三段
w㈡建议措施
w1.Itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbe
takentopreventthesituationfromgettingworse.
w2.Weshouldappealtotheauthoritiestomake
strictlawstocontrolthisproblem.
w3.Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblem.
万能框架—第三段
w㈠归纳结论（结尾）
3.Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasis
on…（虚拟）我们早就该重视这个问题了。
4.Itishightimeweputanendtotheundesirable
phenomenonof…（虚拟）
5.Thereisnodoubt/nodenyingthatfurther
attentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof…
毫无疑问，对这个问题应给予进一步的关注。
万能框架—第三段
w㈠归纳结论
（段首）
1.
Frommyperspective,Iapproveof…
Inmyopinion,Istandonthesideof…
AsfarasIamconcerned,propermeasuresshouldbe
Personallyspeaking,takento（dosth.）…
2.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafely
Takingintoaccountallthosefeatures,+drawthe
Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,conclusionthat…
万能框架—第二段
w㈣利弊说明
3.Thereisnodenyingthateverythinghasonemore
faceand某物/某现象isnoexception.Ontheone
hand,….Ontheotherhand,…
4.Admittedly,they（it）mightbenefitusinashort
term.Unfortunately,theywilldousharminmore
thanoneway/leadtoanumberofproblems.For
onething,…;foranother,….
万能框架—第二段
w㈣利弊说明
1.某物/某现象undoubtedlyplaysanessential/
significantroleinmodernlife.
2.Themeritsof某物/某现象areobvious.Asweall
know,itbringsusbenefitsandconvenience…
Despitetheseadvantages,somepeopleclaim,we
shouldnotturnablindeyetoitsadverseeffects.
万能框架—第二段
w㈢结果分析
w1.Itmaycause/resultin/leadtoahost/numberof
problems.Acaseinpointisthat
.
w2.
hascausedsubstantialimpact/influenceon
thesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbeenshown
inthefollowingaspects.First,...Second,…Last,…
w3.Thereareanumberofdreadfulconsequence
of
.Perhapsthemostserious/disastrous
consequenceis
.
万能框架—第二段
w㈡原因列举
w3.Threemajorelements/factorswouldbetakeninto
considerationwhenanalyzing现象.Firstofall,…
w4.Thereasonsof现象briefly/roughlylieintwo
aspects.Foronething,解释原因1.Foranother,解
释原因2.
w5.Thephenomenon/changein某方面mainly
resultsfrom/arisesfromthefac
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