专题20 高考英语必背读后续写考前总复习.docx

专题20 高考英语必背读后续写考前总复习.docx

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专题20高考英语必背读后续写考前总复习

读后续写考前必背

赏析:

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.“WhyisLee’swatchonyourwrist?

”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleverybodyaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?

”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.[70words]

Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?

We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.[80words]

好句式学习：

1.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.形容词作状语，精简高级。

后文还有：

Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth.

2.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。

形容词dead修饰微妙，恰到好处。

包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语：

Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.

Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andeven...

ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.

3.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.完全倒装，高级句式。

类似的还有：

Then的完全倒装：

Thechairmancamethen=>Thencamethechairman.

Computerwasusedinteachingthen=>Thencomputerwasusedinteaching.

4.衔接词however的使用，让上下文语义衔接自然。

5.复合形容词well-prepared的使用。

6.分词作状语的使用：

7.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.

8.高级词汇和语块的使用：

madearequestinatoneofbegging，madeherwayto，witheveryconfidence，noddedwithapproval，erupted等。

9.Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。

ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.

10.读后续写细节描写到位，几种“说”的表达各不相同。

关于读后续写，除了灵活使用各种高级句式，还要注意语言组织的简练。

另外，细节描写的积累也很重要。

场景描写句子的使用,如鼓掌。

下面介绍几种鼓掌的精彩句子：

1.Athunderousapplauseburstout.

2.Peoplebrokeintoastormofapplause.

3.Mr.Smithmadeamainspeechandreceivednearly30roundsofwarmapplause.

4.Theannouncementoftheelectionwonaburstoflongandwarmapplause.

5.Theyarewinningwavesofapplause.

6.Cheersandapplausetookoverthewholeroom

7.TheexpertsreallydeserveabigroundofapplausefortheireffortstoconstantlymakeprogressintheAIfield.

8.Everyonestartedtoclappedtheirhands.SuzyKhangavethemashysmileandtheapplausewasdeafening.

9.Apoliterippleofapplauseaccompaniedthechairwomanassheapproachedthestage.

读后续写细节描写素材积累一：

身体动作描写

手的动词：

Stunned,Istoodupandgaveheranawkwardhug/huggedherinanawkwardway.

Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms. 

Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblousewildly.

Themantookthesacks,reachedintohispocketandplacedfourcoinsinReuben'shand.

Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop. 

Heparked downthestreetfromBobby’shouse,andrushedto hisfrontdoor,trembling withexcitement.

ThemangentlywrappedthegiftinbrownpaperandplacedtheparcelinReuben'shands.

Doraliftedthelid,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision. 

Seeing nootherpeoplenotice us,Iplaced theChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.

Shedidn’tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandtightly.

Asweshookhandswiththenewowners,Itoldthemhowfortunatetheywere.

Hepattedmyhead,andinquired:

“Isthereanythingparticularyouwant?

”

Hewassqueezingmywristsohardthatitached.

Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid:

“OfcoursethereisaSantaClause.”

Shehandedthenapkintome,andthree$20billsfellontomydeskwhenIopenedit.

Stevielookedatme,andthenathismother,thenpulledoutoneofthenapkins.

“I'mNancyDrew,”shesaid,holdingoutherhand. 

Theclass clapped warmlyasMr.Leepresentedmewiththereward.

Hereachedintohispocketandwithdrewanote.

Mrs.DamonpointedtothequotationfromAlbertEinsteinhangingonthewall.

Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash.

脚的动词：

ThenLisastoodupandmadeherwaythroughthecrowdtowardme.

Lisaplantedherfeetfirmlyinfrontofme.

Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedpatiently.

Reubenran/rusheddownWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.

TheshadowswerelengtheningwhenReubenarrivedat（动作）thefactory.

Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop. 

Racinghome,Reubenburstthroughthefrontdoor.

Disappointedandfrustrated,thepoormanmadehiswaybacktohisfamily.

Suddenly,thewomanstoodupandenteredthehouseintears.

Andyet,theyalljuststoodtherestaringatme,motionless.

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