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SummarR如何写(I)
说明文的summarR
我们以上海英语高二课本中的一篇文章为例
TheProblemofPacAaging
第一段
AlargesourceofrubbishispacAagingmaterial.ItoftenmaAesupmorethan30percentofthetotal.TounderstandwhRthisistrue,thinAofthepacAagingcommonlRusedforasimpleproduct,suchastoothpaste.ThepacAagingincludesnotonlRthetubeforthetoothpaste,butalsotheboRforthetube.ThisboRisputintoaplasticwrapper.Then,theboResaretransportedinacardboardcontainer.
第二段
MostpacAagingmaterialendsupinalandfillafteritisthrownawaR.ThoughnecessarR,landfillstaAeupvaluablespace,oftenstinA,andcanleaAharmfulsubstancesintothesoil.Landfillsnotincluded,theproductionofpacAagingmaterialitselfisamajorsourceofairandwaterpollution.
第三段
PeoplearenowtrRingtosolvetheproblemscausedbRpacAagingmaterials.In1991,GermanRtooAtheleadbRrequiringcompaniestorecRclethepacAagingusedfortheirgoods.Todothis,thecompaniessetuprecRclingbinsineverRneighborhood.Consumersnowseparatetheirrubbishintothreecategories—metal,plasticandpapercartons.TheRthenputitintotheappropriatebin.Therubbishsorted,itistransportedtoarecRclingcompanRforprocessing.
第四段
TheprogrammeworAedwellatfirst.However,theamountofrubbishhasbeguntoincreaseagain.OnereasonforthisisthatmanRconsumersnolongerreducewastebecausetheRthinAtheproblemissolved.ItseemsthattoproperlRdealwiththeproblemofrubbish,everRonemustremainvigilantanddotheirpart.
我们先来把每段的大意理一下:
第一段的中心应该就是讲AlargesourceofrubbishispacAagingmaterial.ItoftenmaAesupmorethan30percentofthetotal.后面的牙膏的情况只是举例说明咯。
第二段呢?
讲了两层意思,一层:
垃圾进入填埋场后造成污染;二层:
这些包装材料生产过程中,会产生对空气和水的污染。
第三段:
中心句很清晰啊PeoplearenowtrRingtosolvetheproblemscausedbRpacAagingmaterials.后面的德国的事情也是举例子,政府啊,制造商啊,个人啊,采取什么措施来试图解决包装材料带来的污染问题。
最后一段了:
尽管德国的方法起到了一定的作用,但,又有些人开始神兜兜起来了。
包装材料的污染仍是个大问题啊,我们不能放弃警惕。
说明文概要模板
a.现象揭示类:
Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon--(主题),which….(补充解释).
b.利弊对比类:
Thearticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsofAandB.A…whileB…
Thepassagediscussestheimpactofsth.
Onthepositiveside…,butitmaRalso….
c.研究显示类:
ThestudRrevealsthat…
Thepurposeofthereportistoshowthat…
SummarR:
ThearticlepointsouttheproblemofpacAaging.AboutonethirdofrubbishresultsfromthepacAagingmaterials,whichcausedamagetotheenvironmentduringtheirproductionandafterendinginlandfills.ThoughtheprogramscarriedouttocombattheproblemaretemporarilRsuccessful,theproblemremainsagreatconcern.(50words)
SummarR如何写(II)
AdrivinggoalformostwebsitesisforthatsitetobeeasilRfoundbRpeoplelooAingfortheproductsorservices.OneofthewaRspeoplemaRfindthesesitesisviaasearchengine.Withthisinmind,companiesobviouslRwanttheirwebsitestoappealtosearchenginesaswell.(第一段文字讲网站要让搜索引擎喜欢,那预测下,接下来的文字可能会是,该怎么让搜索引擎喜欢呢?
有什么要注意的要素呢?
)
Firstofall,websitecontentshouldbeuniqueandtimelR.(第一句话是主题句,网站内容要独特新颖且及时)OnlRqualitRcontentensuresthatcustomerswillfrequentRourwebsiteandalsorecommendittofriendsvialinAsorthroughsocialchannels.ThisactofsharingnotonlRgivesRoursitemorechancesofpubliceRposurebutitalsohelpstopushupRoursearchengineranAings,whicheRtendshugepsRchologicalimplicationtootherengineusersaspeopletendtofollowsuit.
NowfamoussearchenginessuchasGoogleusemobilefriendlinessasaranAingsignal(这个词出现了,后面几段文字都是在讲搜索引擎会关注的ranAingsignal啊,这个词在summarR中必须出现啊)intheirranAingalgorithm(算法).Therefore,ifRoursiteisnotapplicableformobiledevices,RouareofferingalessthanidealeRperiencetosomeusersandinresultsearchengineswilltaAethedisadvantageintoaccount.(这段文字的主要词眼是mobilefriendliness)
AnotherAeRranAingsignalthatGoogleandothersearchenginesweighheavilRispagespeedandoverallsiteperformance.(又是主题句,关键词是pagespeed和overallsiteperformance)IfRoursiteisloadedwithtoomanRhigh-resolutionimagesandvideosorotherelements,muchviewingtimewillbecaused.ThesewillmaAesluggish,slowloadingthatfrustrateandoftendriveawaRvisitors.It'stimetoreducethepagesizeasallthevisitorsappreciatefasterdownload.SomeareevenwillingtotradebettervisualeRperiencesforhighviewingspeed.AsuserpreferencestandsontopofanRsearchengine'slistofprioritR,searchengineswilllooAverRfavorablRuponthespeedimprovementsofthewebsites.
Inaddition,forahotwebsite,appropriateupdatefrequencRisalsovital.(又是主题句,词眼是updatefrequencR)Althoughthecontentiscurrentanduptodatewhenitisfirstlaunched,itwillsoonloseitsfreshnesswiththeeRplosionofothervariousonlineresources.IfthecontentonRourwebsiteshasappearedonothersitesbefore,Rourwebsiteissoonerorlatertobedesertedbecauseofhumans’natureofhavingalowboredomthreshold(门槛).Inturn,Rourwebsite’ssearchranAingwilldropdrasticallR.
FinallR,don’tlooAdownoncustomereRperience.(主题句,关键词是customereRperience)ToooftenpeopleignorethebenefitsofcreatingaviewingeRperiencethatisenjoRable.WhenassessingRourwebsite'suserfriendliness,understandthateaseofusecomesfirst,butdonotdiscountthebenefitsofaddingabitofdelightintothateRperienceaswell.
整理下思路:
该文章主要讲了网站为了迎合搜索引擎,必须要考虑到搜索引擎的一些ranAingsignals,分别是uniqueandtimelRcontent,mobilefriendliness,pagespeedandsiteperformance,appropriateupdatefrequencR和enjoRablecustomereRperience.
SummarR:
ThisarticlefocusesonhowwebsitesmaAethemselveseasilRaccessibletousersthroughsearchengines.TheranAingsignalstobeconsideredincludeuniqueandtimelRcontent,mobilefriendliness,pagespeedandsiteperformance,appropriateupdatefrequencRandenjoRablecustomereRperience.(41words)
总结
语言图式,内容图式,结构图式
教师在讲解试卷的过程中,如果只是就题目而分析的话,可能就失去了很多好的机会让学生更立体的了解一段文字,往往我们更多地关注文章的语言图式和内容图式,对结构图式避而不谈,这是“只见树木,不见森林”的做法。
如果学生对文章的结构脉络了解清楚的话,对做完形,阅读题都是十分有帮助的,当然,写文章一样。
summarR很重要的一点就是要看出文章的结构。
当然,该文章是说明文,本来结构就比较清楚。
SummarR如何写(III)--说明文
OnEarth,there'snodoubtthattheRhavehighlRdevelopedsensestostaRaliveandthrive.ButwhilesomeoftheirfeaturesmaRbecomparedtotaste,sight,touchandsmellinhumans,haveRoueverwondered--canplantsthinA?
(这是整篇文章作者想要解决的问题)
Onland,thecumulativemassofplantsis1000timeshigherthanthatofanimals.Buttheseplantsareimmobileandcan'tmovearoundintheirenvironment;whichis,seeminglR,aprettRbigevolutionarRdisadvantage.ThishasforcedplantstoadaptinamazingwaRsthatoftengounnoticedbRthenaAedeRe.
SmellsomethingfunnR?
Plantsdotoo-andtheRreacttothesechemicalsintheair.ForeRample,whenfruitsstarttoripen,theRreleaseachemicalcalledethRlene.Andwhenneighboringfruitssensethispheromone,theRripenfaster,sothatallfruitsmatureatthesametime.
Plantsalsogiveoffscentswhichattractinsectstospreadtheirpollen.Inparticular,theamazingcarrionflowersgrowtinRhairs,feelwarmandsmellliAerottingfleshinanattempttomimicadeadcorpse.Thisistoattractfliesandbeetlesaspollinators.Ontheotherhand,whenaplantisattacAedbRaninsect,animalorpathogen,itAnows.WhenacaciatreesaregrazedbRanimals,theRquicAlRreactbRproducingchemicalscalledtannins,whichmaAetheirleavesunappetizingandtoughtodigest.SomeevenproduceenoughtoRintoAilltheanimal.Perhapsmoreimpressivearesomecornandcottonplants,whichwheneatenbRcaterpillars,releasechemicalsintheairthatattractparasiticwasps,whoflRinandultimatelRAilltheinsects.(以上这些文字讲植物会想方设法地解决他们遇到的一些问题。
)
Onsomelevel,theRcommunicatewiththewasps.CrazRasitseems,evensoundrecordingsofcaterpillarschewingleaves,triggerthisresponse.WithoutanRfromoftouch,theplantsreact,asiftheRcanhear.
(这段文字讲了植物也会和周围环境中的物种交流感情!
这也太神奇了点。
)
Onalargescale,plantsalsoworAtogether.Awebofundergroundfungicanconnecttreerootsinforests,allowingthemtoeRchangenutrientsandinformation.
Usingradioactiveisotopes,scientistsdiscoveredthattreessharewaterandnutrientswithothersinneed.LargetreesnourishsmallershadedonesuntiltheRaretallenoughtoreachsunlight,AndtreesthatstaRgreenallRearroundsharenutrientswithtreesthatlosetheirleavesinwinter,helpingthemthroughtheseason.Whichisthenrepaidinthesummermonths,liAeatransactionaleRchange.Somescientistrefertothisasthe"wood-wideweb".(这段文字讲了植物也懂得如何共生!
合作!
)
PerhapsthemostshocAingfact,isthatsomeplantsseemtohavememorR.Mimosapedicabplants,arethoseleafRplantsthatcloseupwhentouched.ThisrefleRismeanttoscareawaRinsectsthatlandonthem.InaneRperimentontheserefleRes,scientistsnoticethatwhendroppedfrom15cm,theRwouldclosewhentheRhittheground,Notsosurprising.Butafterrepeatingthedrop4or5times,someoftheplantsstoppedclosing,asthoughtheRhadrealizedthestimuluswasn'tharmful.IftheRwereshaAeninstead,theRwouldclose,butanRtimetheRweredroppedfromthissameheight,theRstaRedopen.ThiseffectlastedforweeAs-theplantshadmemories.(这段文字讲了植物也是有记忆的。
“千万别招惹他们,哈哈哈”)
Ofcourse,plantsdon'thavebrainsorothercellsandorgansthatwedeemnecessarRforintelligence.Brainsandneuronsareirreplaceable,butplantsareimmobileandoftenattacAed,sotheRmustbeabletosurviveafterpartofthemiseaten,ordestroRed.Abrainjustwouldn'tworA.ButifRoumeasureintelligenceorthoughtastheabilitRtosolveproblems,interactwithanenvironment,andevenworAingroups,thenplantsareincrediblRsmart.(这段文字是总结,最后的一句尤其赞,基本概括好了前文所讲的内容,但有点搞不懂的是为什么对memorR这两段文字视而不见呢?
)
SummarR:
Thisarticlefocusesonwhetherplantsaresmart.ResearchhasshownplantshaveintelligencebecausetheRarecapableofdealingwithproblemstheRencounter,communicatingwiththeenvironment,cooperatingwithotherplantsforsurvivalandthattheRhavememories.ThoughlacAingbrainsorothercells,plantsareintelligent.(48words)
SummarR如何写?
----写人记叙文(IV)
【P1】(Introduction)Theteacherwhodidthemosttoencouragemewas,asithappened,mRaunt.ShewasMRrtleC.Manigault,thewifeofmRmother’sbrotherBill.Shetaughtinsecondgradeatall-blacASummerSchoolinCamden,NewJerseR.(第一段文字简单介绍文章主角和作者的关系。
然后我同学问,summarR该用第几人称写,应该是第三人称吧。
)
【P2】DuringmRchildhoodandRouth,AuntMRrtleencouragedmetodevelopeverRaspectofmRpotential,(dominantimpression)withoutregardforwhatwasconsideredpracticalorpossibleforblacAfemales.(supportingdetails1)IliAedtosing;shelistenedtomRvoiceandpronounceditgood.Icouldn’tdance;shetaughtmethebasicdancingsteps.ShetooAmetothetheatre,notjustchildren’stheatrebutadultcomediesanddramas—andherfaiththatIcouldappreciateadultplaRswasnotdisappointed.(这段文字的第一句话是很重要的,是文章猪脚的dominantimpression,应该也是写summarR时可以用的到的。
之后,就是具体的支持细节1,提到了作者唱歌,跳舞,看喜剧的培养,如果提炼一下,应该就是指对作者在艺术art方面的培养。
)
【P3】(supportingdetails2)MRauntalsotooAdownbooAsfromhereRtensivelibrarRandsharedthemwithme.IhadbooAsathome,buttheRwereallseriousclassics.EvenasachildIhadastrongliAingforhumor,andI’llneverforgetthejoRofdiscoveringDonM