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TheResponsibilityandTheMoralResponsibility

TheResponsibilityandTheMoralResponsibility

Theadvancementofasocietydemandsthatindividualsformalinkbetweenliberty,responsibility,andself-respect. Thebeliefinresponsibilitymeanshavingadmirablequalitiesofbeingreliable,dependable,trustworthy,responsive,andaccountable. Absoluteresponsibilitywouldbehavingtherighttoprivatepropertyandconsentandcontractbetweenindividuals. Self-respectimpliesaconfidenceinone'sabilitytofulfillone'sintentions.

Howeversomestrugglesbetweentheresponsibilityasaprofessionalandthemoralresponsibilityasahuman. In1892atrialofserialkillerDr.ThomasNeillCreamputbothCreamandtheprofessionalsinvolvedinthecaseontrial. ThejudgesimultaneouslypresidedoverCream'sconvictionandtheexonerationoftheprofessionals. Controllingthetermsofprofessionalismandrepairingthedamagetotheprofessionalimagethatthisscandalouscasecausedbecameacriticalsubtexttothetrial. TheCreammurdertrialandTheAdventuresofSherlockHolmesbothgrapplewithquestionsofprofessionalconduct,status,andworthbecominginfluential（ifunrecognized）voicesintheongoingdiscoursesurroundingVictorianmaleprofessionalism. TheremarkablepopularityoftheSherlockHolmesseriesiscloselytiedtotheHolmesianperformanceofaprofessionalideal. Eachtaleincapsulatesbothamodelofexpertiseandanimplicitcritiqueofmennotfulfillingthismodel,thuscontributingtothegrowingculturalpowerofthenineteenth-centuryprofessionalmale. Byfarthemostconclusiveevidenceofferedatthetrialcamefromthem.

Whenadoctorgoeswrongheisthefirstofcriminals. Hehasverveandhehasknowledge. PalmerandPritchardwereamongtheheadsoftheirprofession.Thismanstrikesevendeeper,butIthink,Watson,thatweshallbeabletostrikedeeperstill. Butweshallhavehorrorsenoughbeforethenightisover;forgoodness'sakeletushaveaquietpipeandturnourmindsforafewhourstosomethingmorecheerful. Theyhavetakentheresponsibilitythatrelatedtoadmirablequalitiesofbeingreliable,dependable,trustworthy,responsive,andaccountable. Infightingresponsibility,insteadofanapproachonlybasedontacticalmeasuresandeffortsatclevertwistsofterminology. Butthedreamtorealizeinpracticaltermstheideologythat"allmenarecreatedequal",wehavebetterkeepagoodbalancebettweentheresponsibilityasaprofessionalandthemoralresponsibilityasahuman.

1.1

Theadvancementofasocietydemandsthatindividualsformalinkbetweenliberty,responsibility,andself-respect.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

ask,beg, demand,require,request,implore,claim,pray,entreat均有“要求，请求”之意。

∙[批改提示]注意advance与advancement区别。

1.2

Thebeliefinresponsibilitymeanshavingadmirablequalitiesofbeingreliable,dependable,trustworthy,responsive,andaccountable.

∙[低频警示] thebeliefinresponsibility 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...quality 在教材中出现过 2960 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 belief,faith,confidence,conviction,credit,trust都有“相信，信任”之意。

∙[高分词汇]建议将trustworthy改为dependable。

1.3

Absoluteresponsibilitywouldbehavingtherighttoprivatepropertyandconsentandcontractbetweenindividuals.

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...right 在教材中出现过 48 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

agreement, contract,treaty,convention,bargain,understanding,accord均含“协定，协议，契约，合同”之意。

∙[批改提示] private的近义表达有nongovernmental。

∙[批改提示]注意would和usedto的区别。

1.4

Self-respectimpliesaconfidenceinone'sabilitytofulfillone'sintentions.

∙[低频警示] imply...confidence 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 fulfill...intention 在教材中出现过 22 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 ability,capacity,capability,genius,talent,competence,faculty,gift,aptitude均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。

第2段

2.1

Howeversomestrugglesbetweentheresponsibilityasaprofessionalandthemoralresponsibilityasahuman.

∙[低频警示] theresponsibilityasaprofessional 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

duty,obligation, responsibility,function都有“义务，职责”之意。

2.2

In1892atrialofserialkillerDr.ThomasNeillCreamputbothCreamandtheprofessionalsinvolvedinthecaseontrial.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

example,instance, case,sample,illustration,specimen均有“例子，事例”之意。

∙[批改提示] involve近义表达有callfor/entail/demand/require/imply  

2.3

ThejudgesimultaneouslypresidedoverCream'sconvictionandtheexonerationoftheprofessionals.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

belief,faith,confidence, conviction,credit,trust都有“相信，信任”之意。

2.4

Controllingthetermsofprofessionalismandrepairingthedamagetotheprofessionalimagethatthisscandalouscasecausedbecameacriticalsubtexttothetrial.

∙[低频警示] thetermsofprofessionalism 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 repair...damage 在教材中出现过 1231 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

example,instance, case,sample,illustration,specimen均有“例子，事例”之意。

∙[批改提示] control近义表达有command/preside/dominate/predominate/manipulate  

∙[批改提示]注意control和check区别。

2.5

TheCreammurdertrialandTheAdventuresofSherlockHolmesbothgrapplewithquestionsofprofessionalconduct,status,andworthbecominginfluential（ifunrecognized）voicesintheongoingdiscoursesurroundingVictorianmaleprofessionalism.

∙[低频警示] victorian...professionalism 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[低频警示] cream...murder 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[低频警示] ongoing...discourse 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[低频警示] surrounding...professionalism 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[句子错误]本句语法不规范，请检查！

2.6

TheremarkablepopularityoftheSherlockHolmesseriesiscloselytiedtotheHolmesianperformanceofaprofessionalideal.

∙[低频警示] holmesian...performance 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

act,action,deed,operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

2.7

Eachtaleincapsulatesbothamodelofexpertiseandanimplicitcritiqueofmennotfulfillingthismodel,thuscontributingtothegrowingculturalpowerofthenineteenth-centuryprofessionalmale.

∙[低频警示] fulfill...model 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[拼写错误] incapsulates 拼写错误，可替换选项为：

encapsulates,encapsulated,encapsulate  

∙[低频警示] thegrowingculturalpower 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 man, mankind,humanity均有“人类”之意。

∙[批改提示]批改提示，注意male与manly，masculine的区别。

2.8

Byfarthemostconclusiveevidenceofferedatthetrialcamefromthem.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 come,arrive,reach均含“到达”之意。

第3段

3.1

Whenadoctorgoeswrongheisthefirstofcriminals.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 doctor,physician,surgeon,dentist都有“医生”之意。

3.2

Hehasverveandhehasknowledge.

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...verve 在教材中出现过 38 次  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...knowledge 在教材中出现过 3695 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 knowledge,learning,scholarship均有“知识，学问”之意。

3.3

PalmerandPritchardwereamongtheheadsoftheirprofession.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 among,between,amid, amongst均含“在……之间，在……之中”之意。

3.4

Thismanstrikesevendeeper,butIthink,Watson,thatweshallbeabletostrikedeeperstill.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 deep,profound都有表示“深的”之意。

∙[批改提示] beableto表示“能够”，注意与can区别。

详情点击  

∙[批改提示] able表示“能够……的”。

注意与capable的区别。

详情点击  

∙[批改提示]注意shall的用法。

详情点击  

3.5

Butweshallhavehorrorsenoughbeforethenightisover;forgoodness'sakeletushaveaquietpipeandturnourmindsforafewhourstosomethingmorecheerful.

∙[低频警示] quiet...pipe 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 turn...mind 在教材中出现过 74 次  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...pipe 在教材中出现过 87 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

happy,glad, cheerful,joyful,merry,delightful,gay,pleasant,nice,jolly,agreeable均含“愉快的，高兴的”之意。

∙[批改提示]注意shall的用法。

详情点击  

3.6

Theyhavetakentheresponsibilitythatrelatedtoadmirablequalitiesofbeingreliable,dependable,trustworthy,responsive,andaccountable.

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 take...responsibility 在教材中出现过 6240 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 quality,property,feature,characteristic,peculiarity,trait,attribute,character均有“特性，特点，品质”之意。

∙[高分词汇]建议将trustworthy改为dependable。

3.7

Infightingresponsibility,insteadofanapproachonlybasedontacticalmeasuresandeffortsatclevertwistsofterminology.

∙[低频警示] fight...responsibility 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[低频警示] tactical...measure 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

manner,method,way,mode,fashion,means,approach 均含“方法，方式”之意。

3.8

Butthedreamtorealizeinpracticaltermstheideologythat"allmenarecreatedequal",wehavebetterkeepagoodbalancebettweentheresponsibilityasaprofessionalandthemoralresponsibilityasahuman.

∙[低频警示] realize...ideology 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[句子错误]本句语法不规范，请检查！

∙[拼写错误] bettween 拼写错误，可替换选项为：

bettween,bet-tween,between  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 create...man 在教材中出现过 205 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

remainder,surplus,rest,remains, balance 均含“剩余部分”之意。

1.1

Theadvancementofasocietydemandsthatindividualsformalinkbetweenliberty,responsibility,andself-respect.

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

ask,beg, demand,require,request,implore,claim,pray,entreat均有“要求，请求”之意。

∙[批改提示]注意advance与advancement区别。

1.2

Thebeliefinresponsibilitymeanshavingadmirablequalitiesofbeingreliable,dependable,trustworthy,responsive,andaccountable.

∙[低频警示] thebeliefinresponsibility 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...quality 在教材中出现过 2960 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 belief,faith,confidence,conviction,credit,trust都有“相信，信任”之意。

∙[高分词汇]建议将trustworthy改为dependable。

1.3

Absoluteresponsibilitywouldbehavingtherighttoprivatepropertyandconsentandcontractbetweenindividuals.

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 have...right 在教材中出现过 48 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

agreement, contract,treaty,convention,bargain,understanding,accord均含“协定，协议，契约，合同”之意。

∙[批改提示] private的近义表达有nongovernmental。

∙[批改提示]注意would和usedto的区别。

1.4

Self-respectimpliesaconfidenceinone'sabilitytofulfillone'sintentions.

∙[低频警示] imply...confidence 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语  

∙[搭配统计]动名搭配 fulfill...intention 在教材中出现过 22 次  

∙[学习提示]易混词汇:

 ability,capacity,capability,genius,talent,competence,faculty,gi