高考英语短文改错集训二.docx

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高考英语短文改错集训二

2016高考英语-短文改错集训

（二）

【专项突破】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏字符号（

）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage1

Lastmonth,the18thForeignLanguageSpeechCompetitionwassuccessfullyheldinourboardingschool.Luckily,theStudents’UnionorganizeanEnglishSpeechCompetition.AtfirstIdidn’tshowsomeinterestandwasn’tverymuchconfident.ThenmyEnglishteacherMr.Smithencouragedme.Inspiringbymyteacher,Isignedupforthecompetitionandmadefullypreparationsforit.TwoweekslaterthetimeIhadbeenlookingforwardtocominganditwashisturn.Glancingatmyteacher’ssmilingface,Ibuiltupmyconfidence.Muchtomydelight,theresultwasannouncedandIwasoneofthewinner.Butmyteacher’sencouragement,Icouldn’thavewonthefirstprize.I’mproudofMr.Smithorthewonderfulexperience.

Passage2

Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingintheroadtrafficsafetyisstrictlyprohibited.Unluckily,Isawatrafficaccidentonmywayhomeonlastnight.Acarhitamotorbike.Themotorbikedriverwasbadhurtandsenttohospital.Afterawhile,thetrafficpolicecame.Underthehelpofthepeoplewhowitnessedtheaccident,thepolicefoundoutatruth.Thedriverofthecarwasdrinkingandhiscarwentoutofcontrol.Atlasthewastakentothepolicestation.Allthepeopletherethinkthecardriverwastoblameforthisaccident.

Whichisreportedinthenewsreports,drunkdrivingshouldbetreatedmoreseriously.Itoftencausesmanypeoplelosetheirlives,suchastheaccidentthathappenedinHangzhouandChengdu.Itishightimethatwepreventdrunkdriving.

Passage3

DearSir/Madam,

Iwritethislettertoyoutodrawyourattentiontomycomplaintaboutyourservice.Afewdaysago,Ijoinedathree-daystriptoE-meiMountaininyourtravelagency.Ifoundalittledifferencesbetweenyouradvertisementandaction.Asyousay,youwillprovidealargeair-conditionedbus,butweonlyrodeinashabbybuswithanyairconditioner.Yes,youserveduslunch,andthefoodtastedterriblyandsomeevenwithsand.Wedidn’tenjoyanykindofshower.Infact,weonlybatheincoldwater.Asforsightseeing,theguidetookustoseveralexpensivesouvenirshops,whatwastedusmuchtime.Astheresult,twosceneryspotswerefinallyleftunseen.Wedohopesomethingcandonetopreventsuchthingshappenagain.

Passage4

Asweallknow,playingisoneofman'sitselfcharacteristics.Notallpeopleliketoworkandeveryonelikestoplay.Allovertheworldmenandwoman,boysandgirlsenjoysports.Sincemanyyearsago,manyadultsandchildrenhavecalltheirfriendstogethertospendhours,evendaysplaygames.Oneofreasonswhypeopleliketoplayisthatsportshelpthemtomovehappily.Inotherwords,theyhelptokeeppeoplestrongandhealth.Ifpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealotof.Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.Manypeopleenjoysportsbywatchothersplay.Sothatiswhysportsaregoodactivitiesforpeople’shealth.

Passage5

LastSundayIwentshoppingwithmyfather.Wehavealotofthingstobuy.Wedrovetothecenterofthecityandstoppedourcarinthefrontoftheshop.Anhourlate,wecamebacktothecar.Butitwasstrangethatwecouldn’topenthedoor.Soweaskedthepolicemanforhelp.Itwasgladtohelpus.Afewminutelater,hegotthedooropen.Justthenamancameupandshoutedangrily.‘Howareyoudoingwithmycar?

’Weweresurprisingandwenttoseethenumberofthecar.Whatyouthinkwedidthen?

Wehadtospeaksorrytothemanagainandagain.

Passage6

Yesterday,itwasjustonthepointofbigshoppingthisseason.LiMeigoestoastoretoreturnashirtwithoutcarryingthereceipt（收据）.Whenshegotthere，sherefused.Thesalesmansaidthathewouldn’ttakeitbackifsheshowedhimthereceipt.Thinkingitwasnowayout，LiMeiputtheshirtbackinherbagandleft.Suddenlytwoshopguardstoppedherandbegantosearchforher.Theyfoundtheshirtinthebagandlookedatitcareful.Manyeyeswerestaringather,whatmadeLiMeiveryembarrassing.Luckily,asalesmancameupintimeandshewasallowedtogo.

Passage7

Changescreatehappiness.Fortunately,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinmyvillage．Tenyearsago,thesmallandlowhouses,whichlieonthenorthofthelake,producedmuchwaste．Astheresult,thelakewasseriouspolluted．Tothewestwasasandyfield,thatwasthesourceofdust．Betterstill,abrickyardonthesouthwestsideofthelakeusedupagreatdealgoodsoil．Nowpoorhousehavebeenreplacedbygreentreesandthebrickyardbytallbuildings．Thesandyfieldthatthevillagersusedtoploughinghasbeencoveredwithfruittrees．Onthelakethevillagersoftenspendhissparetimeboat