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英语作文复习

2015年6月Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandcommentonparents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth.Youshouldwriteatleast120butnomorethan180words。

破题思路：

　　第一段：

漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。

　　第二段：

可以分析此现象产生的原因。

　　第三段：

采取措施解决此现象。

　　Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingthemostwidespreadsocialphenomenonconcerningtheindependenceofthechildren.Let’stakeacloserlookatthedrawing,thegirltoldhermothershewasacceptedbytheuniversityofhermother’schoicewithpride.Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustosecurewhathidesbehindthepicture。

　　Whatarethereasonsforit?

Inthefollowingsentences,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,theonly-onechildpolicyinChinahasmademoreandmoreparentspaymuchattentiontotheirchildrenthattheywouldliketoreplacetheirchildrentodoeverything.Inaddition,parentsdon’tbelievethattheirchildrenhaveenoughabilitytodealwiththeirpersonalmattersandmakeanydecisions.Therearesomesuggestionsgiventoourparents。

　　Foronething,itisquiteimportantforourparentstorealizethattheirchildrenwillgrowupandhavetheirownideasastimegoesby.Foranother,childrenshouldbeencouragedtomakesomedecisionsalonesothattheyareabletopursuewhattheyreallywant.Icontendthatourparentsshouldgivetheirchildrenafreehandinsomematterstohelpthemtobeindependent。

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二

　　Inthepicture,thereisastudenttalkingtohisfatherwiththewordsthat“WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?

”Howvividisthepicturetoshowtheyounggenerations’dependenceonhightechnologiessuchasthephone.Butinmyopinion,hightechnologiescannotreplacegoingtoschoolatall.

　　Threepointscanaccountformyview.Firstly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearnbasicknowledgeandethicsthatphonesareunabletoteachus.Secondly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearnskillstomakegooduseofhightechnologies.Thirdly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearndisciplinesandunitywithpeoplearoundus.Inschool,notonlydoweacquireknowledgebutwelearnhowtocommunicatewithpeople.

　　Inaword,nomatterhowhightechnologiesarepowerful,theytotallycannotreplacegoingtoschool.

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　　Asisillustratedinthepicture,apupilisaskinghisfatherwhyheisgoingtoschoolifhisphonealreadyknowseverything.Itcanbeknownthatthepupillacksathoroughunderstandingofgoingtoschool.

　　Comparedwiththephone,therearecertainthingsthatcanbeonlyachievedbygoingtoschool.Inthefirstplace,goingtoschoolendowsuswiththeexperiencesofgettingalongwithothers.Onlybycontactingpeoplecanourinterpersonalskillsbedeveloped.Thephoneonlyprovidesinformationinanenvironmentwherethereisjustthephoneandyou.Secondly,youcanconsultyourteacherfacetofaceaboutanydetailofyourquestion,whichcannotbedoneonyourphone.Lastbutnotleast,schoolisaplacewhereyoucanlearntobeindependent.Ifyoustaywithyourparentsallthetime,youwillnevertrulygrowup.

Toconclude,it’sanecessityforkidstogotoschool.Itisatruthwhichshouldbewellacknowledgedthatschoolcanneverbereplacedbythephone.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescrptionofthepictureandcommenonthiskindofmodernlife.Youshouldweiteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

破题思路：

　　第一段：

描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：

电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。

　　第二段：

分析该现象的原因。

　　第三段：

提出措施解决。

或得出自己的结论。

　　Thispicturevividlydescribesthatthepersonusesacomputerinthewholedayevenwhenhefallsasleepatnight.Whatthecartoonconveysistheimpactofcomputersonpeople.Newproductsarebeinginventedeveryminuteofeveryday,allofwhichwillholdswayoverpeopleinsomerespects.However,inallthesetechnologiesandproducts,computershaveexertedthemostimportantinfluenceonpeople.Somepeopleassertthatcomputershavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,whilesomepeoplebelievethatcomputershavemadelifeeasierandmoreconvenient.NowmanyofmyclassmatesliketosurftheInternetintheirfreetime.IthinkInternetcanbringusbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Forexample,ifIhavesometroublestudying，Icansurftheinternettofindmorehelpfulinformation.However,Internetcanmakesomeproblemsatthesametime.Inaword,inspiteofthefactthecomputerappearstohavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,Ifeelthattheadvantagesaremoreobvious,whichhavebecomeanintegralpartofeverydaylife。

参考范文：

二

Thismodernlife

 Asisshownintheabovepicture,peoplesitinfrontofthecomputeralldayandnight,evenintheirdreamsthey’restillplayingcomputergames.Suchthought-provokingphenomenonis,especiallyamongyoungpeople,prevailinourmodernlife.

 It’struethatthecomputerhasbroughtgreatconveniencetoourmodernlife.However,asisillustratedinthepicture,theoveruseofitmayleadtoseveralbadconsequences.Tobeginwith,thereisevidencethatlong-termexposuretoelectromagneticradiationemittedfromcomputersmaycausemanyhealthproblems,likeinsomnia,headaches,andevencancer.Inaddition,whenpeopleimmersehimselfintheworldofcomputer,theytendtopaylessattentiontothesurroundings,andexcessiveuseofthecomputermeansmuchlesschanceofface-to-faceinteractionswithpeoplewhopopulatetheirreallives. 

Inconclusion,whilecomputershavecontributealottomakingourlifemoreconvenient,weshouldusethemappropriately.

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三

首段：

Asisclearlydepictedfromaseriesofcartoonsthatamanisexcessivelydependentonthecomputerwhetherinworkingandplayingorathomeandsleeping.Theimpactofthecomputerondailylifeissuchseriousnessthatitishightimewepaidattentiontoit.

展开段：

Inthefirstplace,duetothewideapplicationofthecomputer,somepeoplecallednetfriendsalwaystakepriorityoverourfamilyandfriendsinreallife.ThebulkofeachdayincludingourtimeandenergyisspentontheInternet.What’smore,theInternetdeprivesusofthedelightincommunicationwithothers.Whentakingtosomeonebyus,wecanheartheirvoices,seetheirexpressions,andevenholdtheirhandsifwewouldliketo.Lastbutnotleast,thecomputerwillleadtoadeclineofourskillsofface-to-facecommunication.Thuswemayfeelembarrassedandfindithardertocommunicatewithpeoplearoundus.

结论段：

Tosumup,weshouldn’tbedependentonthecomputerexcessively.Nomatterhowconvenientandspeedyitis,weshouldremembertheadvantageofface-to-facecommunication.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandcommentonparents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan180words.

“Goodnewsmom!

Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice.”

参考范文：

　　Parents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth

　　Asisprescribedinthepicture,thegirltoldhermother,“Goodnewsmom!

Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice.”Wecaninferthatthemomchoosescollegeforherchild,butshouldtheparentsmakesuchdecisionfortheirchildren?

AsfarasIconcerned,parentscangiveadvicefortheirchildreninsteadofmakingdecisionsforthem.

　　Firstly,parentsalwayswanttogivetheirchildrenthebest,however,theycannotcompletelyunderstandtheirchildren’sinterestandcan’tsurewhatthemostsuitableistotheirchildren.Theyjustgivetheirchildrenwhattheyconsiderthebest,regardlessofwhattheirchildrenwantandwhattheylike.Sothebestwaytoshowyourloveistorespectchildren’schoice.Secondly,thechildrenshouldresponsiblefortheirownlife.Parentscancompanytheirchildrendecadesofyears,buttheycannotcompanytheirchildren’swholelife.Parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,butteachtheirchildrentobeindependentismoreimportantintheirgrowth.

　　Tosumup,parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,buttheyshouldrespecttheirchildren’schoice.Afterall,childrenwillgrowuponeday,andtheymustlearnhowtoliveindependentandberesponsiblefortheirownlife.

2014年6月SupposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourChina,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?

假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国，你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?

为什么?

【范文一】

IfoneofmyforeignfriendsiscomingtoChina,nodoubt,IwilltakehimtoBeijingfirst.Thereasonsareasfollowing:

First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,anenergeticcitywithalonghistory.Beijingisasuperlargedistributioncenter,high-qualitygoodsacrossthecountrywillappearhere,soyoucaneasilyfindwhateveryoulike.Second,thereareagreatnumberoftouristattractionsandhistoricsitesinBeijing,suchasForbiddenCity,TiananmenSquareandSummerPalace.Whatismore,someoftheseinterestingplacesarewithinwalkingdistance,soyoucanvisitseveralscenicspotsbyspendingarelativelylesstime.Third,thetrafficinBeijingisveryconvenientandinexpensive.Youcantakebusorsubwaytraintoanywhereyouwanttogo.

【重点句型及短语】

nodoubt毋庸置疑

distributioncenter物流中心，配送中心

agreatnumberof许多

Whatismore而且

【范文二】

InChina,there’sasayingthat"ThelandscapeofGuilintopsthatofanyotherplaceunderheaven."Inlightofthis,IwillrecommendGuilinasthefirstdestinationofmyforeignfriend’striptoChina. 

OverlookingtheLiJiangRiver,Guilinislocatedinthe