英语作文复习.docx

1、英语作文复习2015年6月Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents role in their childrens growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words。破题思路：第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主

2、题是有关孩子的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。第三段：采取措施解决此现象。How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Lets take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mothers choice

3、with pride. The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture。What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, Ill venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents pay muc

4、h attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. In addition, parents dont believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. There are some suggestions given to our parents。For one thing, it is qu

5、ite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I contend that our parents should give their children a f

6、ree hand in some matters to help them to be independent。参考范文:二In the picture, there is a student talking to his father with the words that “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?” How vivid is the picture to show the young generations dependence on high technologies such as t

7、he phone. But in my opinion, high technologies cannot replace going to school at all.Three points can account for my view. Firstly, without going to school, we cannot learn basic knowledge and ethics that phones are unable to teach us. Secondly, without going to school, we cannot learn skills to mak

8、e good use of high technologies. Thirdly, without going to school, we cannot learn disciplines and unity with people around us. In school, not only do we acquire knowledge but we learn how to communicate with people.In a word, no matter how high technologies are powerful, they totally cannot replace

9、 going to school.参考范文：三As is illustrated in the picture, a pupil is asking his father why he is going to school if his phone already knows everything. It can be known that the pupil lacks a thorough understanding of going to school.Compared with the phone, there are certain things that can be only a

10、chieved by going to school. In the first place, going to school endows us with the experiences of getting along with others. Only by contacting people can our interpersonal skills be developed. The phone only provides information in an environment where there is just the phone and you. Secondly, you

11、 can consult your teacher face to face about any detail of your question, which cannot be done on your phone. Last but not least, school is a place where you can learn to be independent. If you stay with your parents all the time, you will never truly grow up.To conclude, its a necessity for kids to

12、 go to school. It is a truth which should be well acknowledged that school can never be replaced by the phone.Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief descrption of the picture and commen on this kind of

13、 modern life.You should weite at least 120words but no more than 180 words.破题思路：第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。第二段：分析该现象的原因。第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night. What the cartoon conveys is the

14、 impact of computers on people. New products are being invented every minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over people in some respects. However, in all these technologies and products, computers have exerted the most important influence on people. Some people assert that computers have

15、made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble study

16、ing， I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. However, Internet can make some problems at the same time. In a word, in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful, I feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part

17、 of everyday life。参考范文：二This modern lifeAs is shown in the above picture, people sit in front of the computer all day and night, even in their dreams theyre still playing computer games. Such thought-provoking phenomenon is, especially among young people, prevail in our modern life.Its true that the

18、 computer has brought great convenience to our modern life. However, as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. To begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation emitted from computers may cause many health problems,

19、like insomnia, headaches, and even cancer. In addition, when people immerse himself in the world of computer, they tend to pay less attention to the surroundings, and excessive use of the computer means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with people who populate their real lives.In conclu

20、sion, while computers have contribute a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately.参考范文：三首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of the com

21、puter on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.展开段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy i

22、s spent on the Internet. Whats more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skil

23、ls of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.结论段：To sum up, we shouldnt be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication.Direct

24、ions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picturebelow. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture andcomment on parents role in their childrens growth. You should write at least 150words but no more than 180 words.“Good news mom! I was a

25、ccepted to the college of your choice.”参考范文：Parents role in their childrens growthAs is prescribed in the picture, the girl told her mother, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.” We can infer that the mom chooses college for her child, but should the parents make such decisi

26、on for their children? As far as I concerned, parents can give advice for their children instead of making decisions for them.Firstly, parents always want to give their children the best, however, they cannot completely understand their childrens interest and cant sure what the most suitable is to t

27、heir children. They just give their children what they consider the best, regardless of what their children want and what they like. So the best way to show your love is to respect childrens choice. Secondly, the children should responsible for their own life. Parents can company their children deca

28、des of years, but they cannot company their childrens whole life. Parents can give their children advice, but teach their children to be independent is more important in their growth.To sum up, parents can give their children advice, but they should respect their childrens choice. After all, childre

29、n will grow up one day, and they must learn how to live independent and be responsible for their own life.2014年6月Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your China , what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国，你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?为什么?【范文一

30、】If one of my foreign friends is coming to China, no doubt, I will take him to Beijing first. The reasons are as following:First, Beijing is the capital of China, an energetic city with a long history. Beijing is a super large distribution center, high-quality goods across the country will appear he

31、re, so you can easily find whatever you like. Second, there are a great number of tourist attractions and historic sites in Beijing, such as Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and Summer Palace. What is more, some of these interesting places are within walking distance, so you can visit several scenic

32、 spots by spending a relatively less time. Third, the traffic in Beijing is very convenient and inexpensive. You can take bus or subway train to anywhere you want to go.【重点句型及短语】no doubt 毋庸置疑distribution center 物流中心，配送中心a great number of 许多What is more 而且【范文二】In China, theres a saying that The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven. In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friends trip to China.Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the