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Howtowritecollegeessays
✧StructureofanEssay
TitleoftheEssay
IntroductionOpeningremarkstocatchreader’sinterest
Thesisstatement
Planofdevelopment(optional)
Topicsentence1(supportingpoint1)
Specificevidence
BodyTopicsentence2(supportingpoint2)
Specificevidence
Topicsentence3(supportingpoint3)
Specificevidence
ConclusionSummary(optional)
Generalclosingremarks
(Orboth)
ModelEssay
TheHazardsofMoviegoing
Iamamoviefanatic.WhenfriendswanttoknowwhatpicturewontheOscarin1980orwhoplayedthepolicechiefinJaws,theyaskme.Myfriends,though,havestoppedaskingmeifIwanttogoouttothemovies.Theproblemsingettingtothetheatre,thetheateritself,andthebehaviorofsomepatronsareallreasonwhyIoftenwaitforamovietoshowuponTV.
Firstofall,justgettingtothetheatrepresentsdifficulties.LeavingahomeequippedwithaTVandavideorecorderisn’tanattractiveideaonahumid,cold,orrainynight.Eveniftheweathercooperates,thereisstillathirty-minutedrivetothetheaterdownacongestedhighway,followedbythehassleoflookingforaparkingspace.Andthentherearethelines.Afterhookingyourselftotheendofahumanchain,youworryaboutwhethertherewillbeenoughtickets,whetheryouwillgetseatstogether,andwhethermanypeoplewillsneakintothelineaheadofyou.
Onceyouhavemadeitintotheboxofficeandgottenyourtickets,youareconfrontedwiththeproblemsofthetheateritself.Ifyouareinoneoftherundownoldertheaters,youmustadjusttothemustysmellofseldom-cleanedcarpets.Escapedspringslurkinthefadedplushorcrackedleatherseats,andhalfoftheseatsyousitinseemlooseortiltedsothatyousitatastrangeangle.Thenewertwinandquadtheatersoffertheirownproblems.Sittinginanareaonlyone-quarterthesizeofaregulartheater,moviegoersoftenhavetoputupwiththesoundofthemovienextdoor.Thisisespeciallyjarringwhentheothermovieinvolvesracingcarsorakaratewarandyouaretryingtoenjoyaquietlovestory.Andwhetherthetheaterisoldornew,itwillhavefloorsthatseemtobecoatedwithrubbercement.Bytheendofamovie,shoesalmosthavetobepriedoffthefloorbecausetheyhavebecomesealedtoadeadlycompoundofspilledsoda,hardeningbubblegum,andcrushedJu-Jubes.
Someofthepatronsareevenmoreofaproblemthanthetheateritself.Littlekidsraceupanddowntheaisles,usuallyingigglingpacks.Teenagerstrytoimpresstheirfriendsbytalkingbacktothescreen,whistling,andmakingwhattheyconsidertobehilariousnoises.Adultsactasiftheywereathomeintheirownlivingroomsandcommentloudlyontheagesofthestarsorwhymoviesaren’tasgoodasanymore.Andpeopleofallagescrinkledcandywrappers,stickgumontheirseats,anddroppopcorntubsorcupsofcrushedcandyiceandsodaonthefloor.Theyalsocoughandburp,squirmendlesslyintheirseats,fileoutforrepeatedtripstotherestroomsorconcessionstand,andelbowyououtofthearmrestoneithersideofyourseat.
Afterarrivinghomefromthemoviesonenight,IdecidedthatIwasnotgoingtobeamoviegoeranymore.Iwastiredoftheproblemsinvolvedingettingtothemoviesanddealingwiththetheateritselfandsomeofthepatrons.ThenextdayIarrangedtohavecableTVserviceinstalledinmyhome.Imaynowseemoviesabitlaterthanotherpeople,butI’llbemorerelaxedwatchingboxofficehitsinthecomfortofmyownlivingroom.
✧Introductions,Conclusions,andTitles
Awell-organizedessayshouldhaveastrongintroductoryparagraph,aneffectiveconcludingparagraph,andagoodtitle.
CommonMethodsofIntroduction
1.Beginwithabroad,generalstatementofyourtopicandnarrowitdowntoyourthesisstatement.Broad,generalstatementseasethereaderintoyourthesisstatementbyprovidingabackgroundforit.
Bookstoreshelvestodayarecrammedwithdozensofdifferentdietbooks.TheAmericanpublicseemswillingtotryanysortofdiet,especiallytheonesthatpromiseinstant,miraculousresults.Andauthorsaremorethanwillingtoinventnewfaddietstocashinonthiscraze.Unfortunately,someofthesefaddietsareineffectiveorevenunsafe.Oneoftheworstisthe“PalmBeachdiet”.Itisimpractical,doesn’tachievetheresultsitclaims,andisasureroutetopoornutrition.
2.Startwithanideaorsituationthatistheoppositeoftheoneyouwilldevelop.Thisapproachworksbecauseyourreaderswillbesurprised,andthenintrigued,bythecontrastbetweentheopeningideaandthethesisthatfollowsit.
WhenIdecidedtoreturntoschoolatagethirty-five,Iwasn’tatallworriedaboutmyabilitytodothework.Afterall,Iwasagrownwomanwhohadraisedafamily,notaconfusedteenagerfreshoutofhighschool.But