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高考英语作文之建议信
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信
1.简介
建议信写作注意事项:
写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告,使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议,从而解决问题。
(常用一般现在时和一般将来时)
写作风格:
简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力,语言文雅,礼貌当先
写作内容:
写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由
2.写作方法
首段1)自我介绍/问好(不要啰嗦)一两个句子,概括性
2)复述背景,表明目的
主体1)提出具体建议
2)篇幅允许的话,可适当先肯定对方优点,再提出建议
3)适当说明原因或这样做的好处
结尾1)总结建议,注意礼貌
2)希望采纳/希望建议有用
3.范文练习
假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Steven向你咨询怎样学好中文,请根据下列要点给他写封建议信:
1)参加中文学习班
2)看中文书刊,电视
3)学唱中文歌曲
4)交中国朋友
开头:
自我介绍/问好
认识→问好(可问可不问)
最近好吗?
Howareyoudoing?
Howareyouthesedays?
Howdoyoudo?
Howisitgoing?
Howiseverythinggoing?
好久不见
Longtimenosee.
收到你的来信真好!
Hownicetohearfromyou!
不认识→自我介绍
我是李华,育才学校学生会主席。
I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool.
我来自高二一班的李华,
I'mLiHuafromclassone,seniortwo.
复述背景,表明目的
1.收到来信,得知你在中文学习上有困难,我写信来给你一些建议。
Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingyouhavedifficulty(in)learningChinesesoI'mw
offeryousomesuggestions.
2.得知你在学习中文上有困难,我写信来给你一些建议。
LearningthatyouhavetroubleinlearningChinese,I'wrmitingtoprovideyouwithsomeadvice.
3.你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情,我会尽量给你一些建议。
YouhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceonChineselearning(howtolearnChinesewell/howtohaveagoodcommandofChinese)andIwilltrytogiveyousomesuggestions.
4.读了你的信后,我知道你在中文学习上有困难.
Iknowthatyouhavetroublewith/inChineselearningafterreadingyourletter.5.听说你中文不太好,我很抱歉。
I'msorrytohearthatyourChineseisnotverywell.
I'msorryyouarehavingtroubleinimprovingyourChinese.6.很高兴收到你的来信,这是我关于你中文不太好的建议
It'snicetoreceiveyourletter.HerearemyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.7.我写信来给你分享我的建议
I'mwritingtosharemyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
I'mwritingthisletterwiththeaim/purposeofsharingmyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
8.我想和你分享我提高中文的建议/经历。
I'dliketosharemypreviousexperience/processofmyimprovementinChinese.9.在我看来,如果你能采取以下措施/接受以下建议,将非常明智。
Inmypersonalview,itiswiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions/suggestions.10.下面是我的建议
Herearemysuggestions./Belowismysomesuggestions.
Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfulforyou.
HereismyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.11.以下是总结的三条建议,希望对你的中文提高有所帮助
I'vecomplied3ofmybesttipswhichmightbehelpfulinyourimprovementofChinese.12.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.
13.Thanksfortrustingme.
14.你不必为此事担心
Youdon'thavetoworryaboutit.
主体
提建议句型
1.Itisimportant/essentialforyouto...,asyouwillbeabletol
2.Italsohelpsto...wheneverpossible.
3.Itshouldbeagoodideatobecausebydoingsoyouwill
4.Youcanalso,
5.Isuggestthat...(should)do
6.Mysuggestionisthat...(should)do...
7.Whynotdo?
8.Whydon'tyou?
9.You'dbetterdosth
10.IfIwereyou,Iwould
11.Itwouldbemorebeneficialtoyouifyoucould...
12.Youmayconsiderdoing
13.Foronething,Foranother,
14.AsfarasI'mconcerned...
15.Itisbetterto...
16.Istronglyrecommendthatyou...
17.Itdoeshelpifyou...
要点间的衔接词
首先:
Firstly,...
递进:
Then,Secondly,
Atfirst,
Also,Next,
Aboveall,
Firstofall
其他:
asfor,至于,关于
Tobeginwith,
Tostartwith,
Anothersuggestionisthat.另一个建议是...
而且:
What'smore,
总的来说:
allinall
Besides,
toconclude
Furthermore,
inconclusion
Inaddition,
inaword
Moreover,
insum
Afterthat,
tosumup
Meanwhile,
ingeneral
Atthesametime
generally
asawhole
最后:
atlast,
onthewhole
atlength,
finally,
lastly,
ultimately,
intheend
Lastbutbutleast
结尾:
1.Thesearemypersonalsuggestions.Hopeyouwillfindthemuseful.
2.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou.
3.Wishyousucceedindoingsth...祝你成功...
4.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration/seriousaccount.
5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovement.
6.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.
7.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.
8.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.
范文:
DearSteven
It'niscetohearfromyou.LearningthatyouhavemetsomeobstaclessinceyoustartedlearningChinese,IcannotwaittowritethislettertoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinese.
1Aboveall,thereisnodoubtthattakingaChinesecourseisanawesomechoiceforyou,whichwillhelpyougetprofessionaltrainingandeducationwiththeassistanceofyourteacher.
2What'smore,itwillbebeneficialtoyouifyouarewillingtosparesometimetowatchTV,readbooks、magazinesandnewspapersinChinese.
3Also,itishightimethatyoulearntsomeChinesesongs,whichwillabsolutelymakeiteasiertolearnChinesewellwithinashorttime.
4Atlast,youcouldconsidermakingsomeChinesefriends.OnlyinthiswaycanyouspeakChinesemorefluently.Afterall,itispracticethatmakesperfect.
Hopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou.
Yours
LiHua
1.
假如你是李华,你刚收到了你朋友王梅的电子邮件,他在邮件里向你咨询在高中如何学好英语,请你根据下列的内容给他写封回信:
1.上课认真听讲,做好笔记课后及时复习,
2.词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文,
3.课外都与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力,
4.每天坚持写日记,
DearWangMei,
I'mverygladtohavereceivedyour-email.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.
1Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothatyoucangooveryourlessonsassoonasyoucan.
(可用regularlyafterclass替代assoonasyoucan.)
2Asisknowtoall/Asweallknow,vocabularyisofgreatimportanceinEnglishlearning.
Youshouldspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.
3What'smore,trytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.OnlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourabilityoflisteningandspeakingEnglish.
4Lastbutnotleast,youshoulddevelopthehabitofkeepingadiary,whichhelpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandhelpsyougoover/reviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.
Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofuseofyou.Remember:
wherethereisawill,thereisaway./Themanwhomadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”.
Bestwishes!
Yours
LiHua
2.
假如你是红星中学高三的学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文
化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。
他向你咨询相关信息。
请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1表示欢迎
2推荐他上哪所大学
3建议他做哪些准备工作
DearJim,
I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyoulastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.(表示欢迎)
LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.(推荐大学)
ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoaked/absorbedin(沉浸于,专注于)Chineseprofound(深厚的,意义深远的)historyandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceisneededlikeTheStoryoftheStone(《石头记/红楼梦》)whilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.(准备工作)
Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit'smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijing
whenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.
Yourstruly,
LiHua
3.
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Ann最近因为父母工作的关系转到了新的班级,她在与朋
友相处方面遇到了一些问题,因此向你寻求交到好朋友且维持友谊的方法。
你的建议内容如下:
1.学会倾听
2.有分歧时让步
3.多陪伴
参考词汇:
compromise让步
DearAnn,
Iamdelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.Inyourlastletteryoumentionedthatyouhadsomeproblemsinmakingandmaintainingnewfriendsinanewclass.
FromwhereIamstanding,Isuggestthatoneimportantthingtorememberwhentryingtogetalongwithotheristolisten.Whensomeoneistalkingtoyou,lookatthem.Aboveall,don'tinterruptthem.AnotherthingIwanttoremindyouisthatyoushouldcompromise,whenyoudon'tagreewitheachother,oneorbothofyoushouldagreetogiveupsomethingtofindasolution.Lastbutnotleastyoushouldkeepinmindthatittakestimeandenergytobuildnewandgood
tspendtimewith
relationship.Youcannotexpecttobecomefriendswithsomeoneifyoudonthem.
IsincerelyhopethatwhatIhavesuggestedcanbehelpfulforyou.amlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Sincerelyyours,
LiHua
4.
假定你是李华,你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈,经常发照片分享生活中的所有细节,请根据以下要点提示,给Jim写一封信:
(1)对分享行为表示理解;
(2)阐述过度分享的危害;
(3)提出建议。
参考词汇:
微信朋友圈WeChatcircle;过度分享oversharing
DearJim,
I'mworriedthatyou'vebeenaddictedtosharingallsortsofphotosinWeChatcirclerecently.
Undeniably,WeChatmakescommunicationconvenientandleisuretimecolorful.However,thereexistsomepotentialrisksifweovershare.Onesevereproblemisleakingprivacy,whichmaycauseeconomiclosses.Besides,oversharingcanmakeothersuncomfortable,fortheythinkyouareshowingoff.
Thus,nevershouldwepostourpersonalinformation,norshouldwerashlyaddstrangerstothelistoffriends.It'swisertosetasidesometimetoaccompanyparentsordosomethingmoremeaningful.
Bestwishes!
Yourstruly,
LiHua
5.
(2017·北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:
“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
Jim来信希望你能给些建议。
请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
DearJim,
I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.
OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.
Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.
Yours,
LiHua
6.
假如你是黎斌老师,一个名叫李华的学生来信询问如何学好英语。
请你根据以下提示给他写一封建议信:
1.词汇对提高英语听、说、读、写的技能起到重要的作用。
2.养成学练结合的习惯。
3.培养兴趣
DearLiHua,
Iamsosorrytohearthat