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5.-刘洪波范文

1〕Individualscandonothingtoimprovetheenvironment;onlygovernmentsandlargecompaniescanmakeadifference.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

写作提纲：

观点：

每个人都能起作用。

原因1：

环境问题是长期人类活动导致的。

原因2：

个人能影响政府和公司的决定。

E.g：

如果人人不用一次性纸杯，就不会有公司生产。

MODELANSWER

Environmentalprotectionisoneofthemostimportantchallengesalmosteverycountryisfacing.However,whetheronlygovernmentsandbigfirmshaveresourcesandpowerstopreserveourenvironmentisacontroversialissue.Myviewisthateverysinglecitizencouldalsomakeahugedifference.

First,itisclearthatitishumanactivitiesthathavethegreatestimpactonenvironmentthroughoutthehistory.Bothenvironmentcontaminationandconservationarethelong-termprocess,andnosinglegovernmentorbigcompanycanmeetthischallengealone.So,whoevercreatedtheproblemshouldsolveit;environmentprotectionneedseveryoneofustocontinuouslyparticipatein.

Moreover,thepublic’swillsandbehaviorshaveacriticalinfluenceongovernment’spoliciesandcompany’sstrategies.Forexample,ifeveryonesays“no〞toplasticshoppingbagsandpapercups,thecompaniesthatmanufacturesuchproductswillswitchtoenvironmental-friendlysubstitutesinordertosurviveinthemarket.

Thatisnottosaythatgovernmentsandlargecompaniescannotpositivelycontribute.Indeedgovernmentscanenactlawsandintroduceprogramstoraisethepublic’slowcarbonawareness;companiescanpromotegreenproductstochangethepublic’sconsuminghabits.Buttheyalsoindeedeverycitizen’sappreciationandsupporttobringgoodresults.

Insum,noeffortistoosmallwhenweareprotectingtheenvironment!

Meanwhile,localauthoritiesandorganizationsmustshouldertheirresponsibilitytodeveloplowcarboneconomyatthemacrolevel.Onlybydoingsocanweassurethatwecouldhandthisbeautifulplanettoournextgeneration,andthenextgenerationafter!

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2〕Somepeoplethinkitisacceptabletouseanimalsforthebenefitofhumans.Otherpeoplethinkitiswrongtoexploitanimalsforhumanpurposes.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

写作提纲

观点：

人类合理利用动物是正当的。

原因1：

自然法那么naturallaw/thelawofthejungle

原因2：

动物对人类文明奉献大。

KFC,McDonald’s,evenpets

转折：

当然，滥用是不对的。

打猎取乐，穿毛皮衣服。

MODELANSWER

Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutanimalprotectionandanimalrights.However,whetherweshouldutilizeanimalsforthehumanpurposeshascausedheateddebaterecently.Inmyview,itisacceptabletoreasonablyexploitanimalsforthebenefitofmankindandimpossibletocompletelycutdownthehuman’sdependenceonanimals.

First,itisclearthathumanbeingsarestandingatthetopofthefoodchainofthisplanet.Asbigfisheseatsmallones,mankindusesanimalsforitsownbenefits,whichisconsistentwiththenaturallaw.So,itishardtostatethatwearedoingwrongbyexploitinganimalsforourinterests.

Moreover,itisunrealistictobanusinganimals.Regardlessofourawareness,animalshavemadegreatcontributionstothehistoryofhumancivilization.Weraisedcattleforfood;theoutcomesofanimalexperimentssavedmanylives;peopleevenkeptpetstosatisfytheirpsychologicalneeds.Ifitiswrongtoexploitanimalsforhumaninterests,weshouldfirstclosethousandsofKFC’sandMcDonald’sfranchisesaroundtheworld,becausetheyareslaughteringlovelychickentomakemoney!

Andeveryoneinthisworldshouldbecomeavegetarian.

Thatisnottosaythatitisalwaysrightforpeopletouseanimalsforwhateverpurpose.Somepeoplehuntwildanimalsjustforfun;otherskillrareanimalsfortheirexpensivefurs.Indeed,thesebehaviorsarenotonlycruelandunnecessary,butactuallyagainstlong-terminterestsofhumanrace.Humansshouldshouldertheirresponsibilitiesofmaintainingthediversityofwildanimalsandthebalanceofecosystem.

Insum,usinganimalsrationallyforthebenefitofhumansisjustified;meanwhile,somebehaviorsthatareharmfulforbothanimalsandhumanshavetobeprohibited.Bydoingso,wecanensurethatournextgenerationcouldalsoexploittheanimalresource.

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3〕Therangeoftechnologyisincreasingthegapbetweentherichandthepoor.Towhatextentdoyouagree?

写作提纲

观点：

不是科技而是社会财富分配不均导致的。

原因1：

政府的责任。

原因2：

科技缩小贫富差距。

举例：

利用网站创业。

MODELANSWER

TheapplicationsofnewtechnologiesareoneofthemostimportantwaysofmakingmillionairessuchasBillGates.However,whetherthetechnologyhasalsowidenedthegapbetweentherichandthepoorisacontroversialissue.Myviewisthattheimproperdistributionsystemofsocialwealth,ratherthanmoderntechnology,hascausedsuchasocialproblem.

First,itisobviousthatthegovernmentistheonemostcapableandresponsibleforsolvinganysocialissueandensuringsocialequality.Thisisbecauseinordertobridgethiswealthgap,themosteffectiveanddirectmethodshouldbetaxationleverage,bywhichthegovernmentcanusetherichpeople’staxmoneytosubsidizetheunfortunate.So,thetechnologyshouldnotbecomethescapegoatoftheissue.

Moreover,moderntechnologiesindeedhaveprovidedgreatopportunitiesforthepoortogetrich.Forexample,Internethasalreadymademanypeopletobecomewealthybysettingtheirowncommercialwebsites.Comparedwithtraditionalindustries,whichrequirealargeinitialinvestmentandhigheroperationcost,Internetisamuchbetterandcheaperplatformtomakefortuneforpeoplefromallsocialbackgrounds.

Thosewhoharbortheviewthatthetechnologyhaspolarizedthedistributionofwealtharoundtheworldbelievethatthepoorcountriesnowaregettingpoorerduetolackofcreativetechnologiestoimprovethesocialproductivity.Ofcourse,thisisarealphenomenon.Butparadoxically,therightsolutionforthosenationsisjusttointroduceadvancedtechnologiesfromdevelopedcountriesandincreasetheireducationbudget.

Insum,moderntechnologyplaysakeyroleinfillingthegapbetweentherichandthepoornotonlyforindividuals,butfornationsaswell.Intheeraoftheknowledge-basedeconomy,theonewhoisdiligent,smartenoughandcancapitalizeonknowledgeandcreateknowledgewilleventuallyprevail.

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4〕Somepeoplethinkrichcountriesshouldhelpthepoorcountriesbygivingmoneydirectly.Othersbelievethatthereareothermoreeffectiveformsofinternationalaids.What’syouropinion?

写作提纲：

观点：

穷国最需要技术和人才。

原因1：

科技是第一生产力

原因2：

富国可以帮助穷国培养人才。

举例：

提供奖学金。

MODELANSWER

Povertyisoneofthemostimportantproblemsmanydevelopingcountriesface.However,whattypesofinternationalaidsaremoreeffectiveforthemisacontroversialissue.Inmyview,whatthepoorcountriesneedmostisnotfinancialaidorloans,butadvancedtechnologiesandtalentsinsomekeyareas.

Itisobviousthatadvancedtechnologiesandsciencearethedrivingforcebehindtherichnations.Hi-techproducts,innovations,andgoodmanagementcangreatlyimprovetheproductivityofwholesocietyandhencethewealthisaccumulatedatahighspeed.Therefore,tohelpthepoor,we’dbettergivingthemtoolsofmakingfortune.

Moreover,thedevelopedcountriescannotonlysendexpertteamstopoornationstobuildroads,dams,factoriesandotherinfrastructures,buttraintalentsandexpertsforthem.Therichcountriescanprovidescholarshiporfinancialhelptothestudentsfromthepoorregions,whichsomefamousWesternuniversitiesareactuallydoing.Itisawiderwaytodeliverhelp.

Thisisnottosaythat,undernocircumstances,shouldtherichcountriesprovideaidinformsofmoney.Ofcourse,moneydefinitelycanhelpthecountryourofmanyurgentproblems.Buthowcanweassurethatthemoneywillbespentinproperway?

Inconclusion,therearesomeothertypesofaidsrichcountriesmaychoosetoprovidemoreefficienthelp.meanwhile,iffinancialaidisoffered,wehavetomakesurethatthemoneyisbeingspentonwhatpeoplereallyneedandnotonfillingthepocketsofcorruptpoliticians.

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5〕Somepeoplebelievethattimespentontelevision,videoandcomputergamescanbebeneficialtochildren.Othersbelievethishasnegativeeffectsonachild.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

写作提纲

观点：

时间过长有害

原因1：

身体上。

原因2：

心理上。

举例：

CS

MODELANSWER

WatchingTVandplayingcomputergamesaretwoofthemostimportantchildren’sleisureactivities.However,whethertheybringmoreharmthangoodhascausedheateddebate.Myviewisthattoomuchtimespentonthesesurelyhasnegativeimpactsonkidsandparentshavetosortouttheappropriateprogramsforchildrenandcurbtheseactivities.

Itisobviousthatwiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,TVshowsandvideogamesaredesignedsovividandattractivethatitismucheasiernotonlyforkidsbutevenforadultstogetaddictedtothem.Whenchildrenspendmoretimesittinginfrontofascreen,theyareisolatedfromtherealworld.Theydon’thaveenoughtimetosocialize,toengageinoutdooractivitieswhicharecrucialfortheirphysicalgrowth.Also,theireyesightwillbeweakenedbystaringatthescreenfortoolong.

Moreover,questionablecontentsonTVorcomputergameswillresultinunexpectedimplicationsonchildren’slaterlife.Forexample,manyboyslikeplayingcomputershootinggamesincludingthemostfamousonecalledCS（Counter-Strike）.Whilewearecallingforworldpeace,ourkidsare,throughthisgame,learninghowtousedangerousweaponsskillfully,andgetusedtopullingthetriggerwithouthesitation.NowonderithasbeenreportedthatrecentlyonekillerofschoolshootingintheUSusedtoplaycomputershootinggamesinhischildhood.

Thisisnottosaythatparentsshouldalwayskeeptheirkidsawayfromthescre