读后续写各种精彩收尾段落整理.docx

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读后续写各种精彩收尾段落整理

一、画面定格 

1.人物动作的画面定格 

如：

（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingforthe rushing holidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedher mother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.

如：

Hishardworkpaidoff!

Holdingthe sodatin firmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift. Speechlessand happy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.

如：

 Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface，“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid，“Tomorrowyoucan become humanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedto enjoy thesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（1）Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome. 

   天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。

黎明已经来临。

（黎明到来的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（2） Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.

   黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。

 （黎明到来的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（3） ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.

当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。

 （美好日落时的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（4） Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。

（日落时的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（5）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.

   被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。

无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。

（描写夜空的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud. 

   抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。

我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。

我的意识随着热度而衰退。

我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。

（特殊寓意） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（7） Dottedwithglittering stars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。

（神话般美丽的夜空画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（8）Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。

一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。

（雨后清新的画面） 

   Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。

（雨水来临的画面） 

2.特殊寓意的写景画面 

（9）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。

偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。

（描写落叶的画面） 

二、对话收尾 

（1） Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe’sbeenlookingforuseversincewelost contact，”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthe reunion withhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid，“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”

（2） WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina’s familyhadmovedtoabigger apartment.“I’veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs’loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus，” saidNina，“Iwouldnevergivethiskindof friend awayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandloving creatures.They need ourloveandcare.”

（3） HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth. Soonsheofferedhima job workingforthecompany.Shesaid，“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitudeandisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.Iwastold,‘Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehis jobs ifhewasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteyoungmanandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”

（4）…Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme？

”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuff onthemsatisfactorily, saying，“Yes!

Forme，itisnotasufferingtolive.” 

三、主题升华

（1） Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel. Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehas beauty, brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbe a_famous_dancer.Someday, when_I_am_older andhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.（母爱的深远影响） 

（2）….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn’tequalhappiness.Andfreelife stylealsodoesn’tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything. Inmyopinion,moneycan’ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.（表达自己的价值观） 

（4）“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon，”theteacheranswered.“First,you’vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.’Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”（借用名言警句来升华主题） 

四、结尾留白

（1）Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans?

” IexplainedthatI’dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothe hospital –gaveGraceandherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby.“Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat?

”Iasked.“I’dloveto,”shereplied,hereyessparklinglike diamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy’sdeath.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间） 

（2）Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“Whocares?

Hewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.”Withthat,heunwrappedthewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise, therewasnohardrock candy inside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.

五、首尾呼应

（1） 2017年浙江高考题

 开头：

 Ihadaninteresting childhood.Itwasfilledwithsuprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefaimlytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

结尾：

Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,

shewasstillakindandnicemom. 

（2）2018年浙江高考题 

开头：

Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.

结尾：

NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.

（3）2016年浙江高考题 

开头：

AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.

结尾：

Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious 搞笑的experience.