全国卷改错及答案0001.docx

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全国卷改错及答案0001

2011年（全国卷I）

OneofmyunforgettablememoryofmyschoolinXinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromourhomes.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.Sincethelunchbellfinallyrang,myfriendsandmemetunderatalltreeandhadourlunches.MybestfriendAiguliewasusedtoshareherNangwithme.NangisaspeciallykindofcakeinXinjiang.Ilikethemverymuch.NowAigulieandIstudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachotherduringthesummervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImissthefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.

2011年（全国卷II）

DearGeorge,

It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaroundyourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.Afterwesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,thatwestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayinganothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.Itwasreallyaniceexperienee.Ifyou'dliketomaketriptoourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.

Yours,Mike

2012年（全国卷I）

Everyoneofuscanmakeagreateffortstocutofftheuseofenergyinourcountry.Tobeginwith,allofuscanstartreducingtotheuseofoilbydrivingonlywhenwehavearealneed.Thatwon'teasy,Iknowbutwehavetostartanywhere.What'smore,wecangotoworkbybikeonceandtwiceaweek,andwecanalsobuysmallercarsthatburnlessoil.Otherwayistowatchoureverydayuseofwaterandelectricathome.Forexample,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere?

2012年（全国卷II）

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannotlivewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedwaterisbecominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.Todealwithaproblem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,nodrinkingwatershouldleftrunning.Third,weshouldfindwaystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybathwaterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.

Sincerely,LiHua

2013年新课标1

Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.

2013年（全国一卷）

MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.

Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.

ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.

2014年（全国一卷）

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatoncost!

2014年（全国二卷）

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:

30a.mandendsat3:

30p.m.Theyarethreelessoninthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'needtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.

Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroom,buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

（2015全国一卷）

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.

NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we'lllivetoregretit.

（2015全国二卷）

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.

Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedinto

theshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater.Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“How

seeyouagain!

DadandIwereterribleworried.edherthlabriyipiwouldneverhappenagain.

2016全国卷

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

2016全国卷二

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

2011年（全国卷I）76.把memory改为memories。

77.在lunches前面加the。

78.把hold改为held。

79.把Sinee改为When/After。

80.me改为I81.把was去掉。

82.把specially改为special。

83.把them改为it。

84.把or改为and。

85.把over改为of。

2011年（全国卷II）76.after---sinee77.them---us78.for---with79.That改为

Where80.去掉much

81.staying---stay82.day---days83.fly---flew84.trip前a85.better---more

2012年（全国卷I）1.efforts改为effort2.off改为down3.把to删掉4.won'tbe5.

anywhere---somewhere6.and——or7.Other---Another8.electric——electricity9.and改为but

10television后加on

2012年（全国卷ll）76.you后加my77.animal-animals78.or-nor79.seemed-seems

80.we-they81.a-the/this/that82.though-because/since/as83.left

改为beleft84.using-used85去掉for

2013年新课标1

1.hold改为hold2.passes改为passed3.much改为well/clearly4.shoulder改为shoulders

5.toward改为to/into6.himself改为him7.hewas改为andhewas8.去a9.during改为when10.never改为ever

2013年新课标21.去of2.Have改为Having3.that改为which4.becomes改为became5.ofday改为oftheday6.Interesting改为Interestingly7.by改为with/to8.drank改为drunk9.goodcup改为goodcups10.grow改为growth

2013年（全国一卷）1.visit改为visited2.but改为and/so3.comfortably改为comfortable

4.were改为was5.for改为with6.forwith7.takingtakentake8.dish^dishes9.such后力口asuch10.memine

2013年（全国二卷）

1.before改成ago;2.for去掉；3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately4.week改为weeks;

5.so改为but;6.will改为would;7.myself改为me8.farther改为far;9.interested改为

interesting;10.truth前面加the

2014年（全国一卷）

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