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全国卷英语作文句子模板
书面表达思维拓展:
一句多译练习
例一.情景:
我生病了||,明天不能上学。
1.I’mill.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.(太简单!
句子松散)
2.Whycan’tIgotoschooltomorrow?
BecauseI’mill!
(疑问句)
3.I’millandIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(并列句)
4.I’llbeabsentfromschooltomorrowjustbecauseI’mill.
5.I’msoseriouslyillthatIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(so….that句型)
6.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowbecauseI’mill.(表原因的复合句)
7.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowbecauseofillness.(用Owingto或者dueto)
8.Owingtoillness||,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.
9.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowduetoillness||,
10.Myabsencefromschooltomorrowisduetomyillness.
11.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowonaccountofillness.(用介词短语)
12.I’millsoIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(用so、thus或者therefore等)
13.I’mill||,asaresult||,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.
14.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowasaresultofmyillness.
15.Beingill||,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.(用分词作原因状语)
16.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.That’sbecauseI’mill.(用表语从句)
17.I’mill.That’swhyIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(用表语从句)
18.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.ThereasonisthatI’mill.(用表语从句)
19.I’mseriouslyill||,whichmakesmeunabletogotoschool.(用定语从句)
20.I’mseriouslyill||,whichmakesitimpossibleformetogotoschool.
21.I’mseriouslyill||,thusmakingitformegotoschool.(用分词作结果状语)
22.HowIwishIcouldgotoschooltomorrow!
ButIcan’tbecauseI’mseriouslyill.(用虚拟语气)
23.I’mill.That’sthereasonwhyIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(用定语从句)
24.ItisbecauseI’millthatIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.(强调句型)
25.ThereasonformyabsencefromschooltomorrowisthatI’mill.(用表语从句)
26.WhatIwanttotellyouisthatI’millandIcan’tgoschooltomorrow.(用主语从句、表语从句、并列句)
27.Myillnesspreventsmefromgoingtoschooltomorrow.
28.Ihavedisease||,whichpreventsmefromgoingtoschooltomorrow.
例二.他说英语太快了!
让我大吃一惊!
1.HespeaksEnglishsofast||,andIamsurprised.
2.HespeaksEnglishsofastanditissurprisingtome.
3.HespeaksEnglishsofastanditisasurprisetome.
4.HespeaksEnglishsofast||,atwhichIamsurprised.
5.HespeaksEnglishsofast||,whichisasurprisetome.
6.HespeaksEnglishsofast||,whichissurprisingtome.
7.HespeaksEnglishsofast||,whichmakesmesurprised.
8.HespeaksEnglishsofastthatIamsurprised.
9.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatIamsurprised.
10.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatitsurprisesme.
11.HisfastEnglishspeakingissurprisingtome.
12.HisfastEnglishspeakingisasurprisetome.
13.HisfastEnglishspeakingmakesmesurprised.
14.HisfastEnglishspeakingsurprisesme.
15.HowfasthespeaksEnglish||,whichissurprisingtome.
16.HowfasthespeaksEnglish||,whichisasurprisetome.
17.HowfasthespeaksEnglish||,anditisasurprisetome.
18.HowfasthespeaksEnglish||,anditissurprisingtome.
19.WhatafastEnglishspeakerheis!
Itdoessurpriseme.
20.ItishewhospeaksEnglishsofast||,whichsurprisesme.
21.ItishisfastEnglishspeakingthatsurprisesme.
22.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastissurprisingtome.
23.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastsurprisesme.
24.ThathespeaksEnglishsofastisasurprisetome.
25.IamsurprisedthathespeaksEnglishsofast.
26.IamsurprisedthathespeakssuchfastEnglish.
27.IamsurprisedthathespeaksEnglishwithfastspeed.
28.IamsurprisedbyhisfastEnglishspeaking.
29.IamsurprisedbyhisEnglishspeakingwithfastspeed.
30.Itissurprisingtomethathe(should)speakEnglishsofast.
31.Itissurprisingtomethathe(should)speaksuchfastEnglish.
32.Itissurprisingtomethathe(should)speakEnglishwithfastspeed.
33.ItissurprisingtomethathisspokenEnglishissofast.
34.Itisasurprisetomethathe(should)speakEnglishsofast.
35.Tomysurprise||,hespeaksEnglishsofast.
36.Tomysurprise||,hespeakssuchfastEnglish.
37.Tomysurprise||,hespeaksEnglishwithfastspeed.
38.Tomysurprise||,hisspokenEnglishissofast.
39.WhenhespeaksfastEnglish||,Iamsurprised.
40.WhenhespeaksEnglishfast||,Iamsurprised.
例三.
最近||,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。
讨论的主题是:
公园要不要收门票?
请你根据下表提供的信息||,给报社写一封信||,客观地介绍讨论情况。
60%的同学认为
1、不应收门票
2、公园是公众休闲的地方
3、如收票||,需建大门、围墙||,会影响城市形象
40%的同学认为
1、应收门票||,但票价不宜高
2、支付园林工人工资
3、购新花木
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。
2、词数:
100左右。
3、参考词汇:
门票:
entrancefee
请至少写出三个句子替换
1.60%的同学认为公园不应该收费。
2.公园是公众休闲的地方。
3.如收门票||,需建大门﹑围墙||,会影响城市形象。
4.40%的同学认为应收门票||,但票价不宜高。
5.门票收入支付园林工人工资﹑购买新花木。
整合后参考范文:
DearEditor||,
I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.
Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore||,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls||,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.
Ontheotherhand||,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest||,however||,feesshouldbechargedlow.
Yourstruly||,
LiHua
你能用多少种方式把下面这两句话串联成一句话?
写出你可能写出的所有句子:
Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
Hefeltveryuneasy.
(一)句子开头“去人化”
(1)用形式主语it开头
1.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.
2.Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccessaccordingtoarecentreport.
◆拓展:
形式主语it开头的常见句型:
(2)以状语开头||,具体来说可用形容词、副词、分词短语、介词短语、不定式、从句等做开头。
1.Manypeoplehaveambitiousplansbutnoability||,sotheyaccomplishlittle.
2.Schoolworkexertspressureonteenagers||,andtheirpeersalsoencouragethem.Undersuchcircumstances||,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
3.Themanwasindespairandturnedtohisfriendsforhelp.
4.Wehavetocontinuallyupdateourknowledgetoacclimatize(适应新气候或环境)totheever-changingworld.
5.WeneedtouseEnglishtocommunicatewithmoreandmoreforeignerswhocometoChina||,solearningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourlife.
(3)表示某人拥有的“sb.have……”句型变成therebe句型
Moreandmoreyoungstudentsgoabroadbecausetheywanttogetbettereducationandfindabetterjobinthefuture.Ithinkthattheymayhaveproblemsinstudyandalsoinlife.
(4)以“某人”作主语使用情态动词(can||,may||,should等)时||,建议前两个改成Itislikely/possibletodo/that….||;后一个改成Itisnecessary/imperative/highlyexpected/suggestedthatsth.bedone.的句式:
Wecangoanywherewelikewithourbicycle.
Tocurbglobalwarming||,ourgovernmentshouldpromulgatenewlawstogovernthefellingoftrees.
(5)使用被动句式
在比较正式的新闻、商务、法律等英语文体中||,被动句式因为其更突出客观性的宾语或者事实被广为使用。
图表分析和议论文都是比较正式的文体||,所以我们也应该注意多用被动句式。
尤其是在以下两个方面:
1.主语不确定
Someonemurderedthemillionairelastnight.
2.主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人
Toimprovetheairquality||,weshouldreducetheuseofprivatecars.
Mostpeoplethinkthatwecangetalargeshareofbenefitinthesalescampaign.
◆被动句的用法不仅体现在主句中||,在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到||,如:
Itisimportantfornationsallovertheworldtojoinhandstocontrolthesoftwarepiracy.
Idon’texpectthatshereturned.
Iamnotsurewhetherthecollegegraduateswillfindjobsinthefinanciallydifficultyear.
(二)名词化
写作中把原本用动词或者形容词表达的地方换成名词叫做名词化(nominalization)。
名词化是为了避免太多动词造成的句法处理上的困难||,同时也可以把某些陈述型的句式转化成更客观的评价句||,更符合议论文的文体要求。
如:
Ourmonitordidn’tcometoday.Hehasgotaflu.
常见的名词化用法:
ifthereisno…lackof||,
don’tknow…ignoranceof||,
can’tread…/can’tuse…illiteracyin||,
didn’tdo…failure
Lackoftheknowledgewouldmakeitimpossibleforyoutogetthatjob
Myignoranceofitsimportanceatlastputmeintotrouble
Myilliteracyofcomputerpreventedmefromgettingabetterjob
在具体的使用过程中可以结合介词with使用||,使得句法更加凝练。
此外个别单词也可以利用动词的名词性后缀如:
-tion||,-ment||,-isation||,-ness||,-ity等或者变成动名词形式-ing。
如:
Moreyoungergenerationscelebratethewesternfestivals.
Thecelebrationofthewesternfestivalswasenjoyedbymoreyoungergenerations
35%ofthestudentsdidhomeworkathomeintheSpringFestival.
DoinghomeworkathomeintheSpringFestivalaccountsfor35%amongthestudents.
(三)长短句交插
(1)Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.
(2)Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.(3)Thereisacleanriverinthecity.(4)Therearemanyfishesintheriver.(5)Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.(6)Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.(7)Therearemanyflowersonthem.
文中七个句子都是简单句||,句型结构单一||,而且句子长短同一||,都在七、八词左右||,十分单调。
下面是修改后的段落:
(1)Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.
(2)Greentreeslinethestreets.(3)Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity||,inwhichalotoffishesabound.(4)Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.(5)Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.
句式多样化手段
(1)将陈述句改为感叹句。
1.Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant.
2.Sheisaclevergirl.
(2)将陈述句改为倒装句
1.Peoplehaveneverimaginedtotravelaroundtheworldwithoutwalkingoutofhouse.
2.Suchsteeppriceriseneverhappenednomatterintheindustrialageoranyothertimeofhistory.
◆倒装的几种情况:
1.only放在句首后接副词||,介词短语或状语从句时||,句子半倒装。
OnlythendidIrealizethatIwaswrong.只有到那个时候我在意识到我错了。
Onlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourpronunciation.只有用这种方法你才能改善你的发音。
Onlywhenhishometownwasliberatedin1949washeabletogotoschool.
只有在1949年他家乡解放时||,他才能上学。
2.含有否定意义的副词或连词(如hardly||,never||,not||,notonly||,little等)放在句首时||,句子半倒装。
HardlyhadIarrivedwhenIhadanewproblemtocopewith.我一到就有新的问题需要处理。
Scarcelyhadwestartedlunchwhenthedoorbellrang.我们刚开始吃午饭||,门铃就响