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6.1.2表示练习1中Issue二选一的topic2的6分范文
5.2.1表示练习2中Issue二选一的topic1的5分范文
4.2.0表示练习2中Argue(0表示)的4分范文
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6.1.1
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Wisdomisrightfullyattributednottopeoplewhoknowwhattolookforinlifebuttopeoplewhoknowwhattooverlook."
Thequotationiscertainlycorrect,insofarasitdescribesatleastanelementofwisdom.Inotherwords,Idoagreewiththeproposition,subjecttotheprovisothattheachievementofwisdommaywellalsoinvolveothertraitsorattributes.
Havingqualifiedmyanswersomewhat,Imustendorsetheprinciplesputforthinthequotation.Overlooking--or,perhaps,forgetting--isacrucialskilloneneedstomasterinordertonavigatetheoften-treacherouspathsoflifewithoutunduetorment.Frommyownexperience,andfromobservationsoffriends,familymembersandbusinessassociates,Iamwellawareofthepitfallswhichawaitthosewhofailtooverlookthepetty,theunnecessaryandtheirrelevant.
InmodernAmerica,asithappens,theimportanceofoverlookingisprobablygreaterthaneverbefore.Evenapersontryingtoleadaquiet,simplelifeencountersanendlessstreamofannoyances,errorsandpettydemandssuchaspaperwork,filingnumbersandtaxes;
longlinesatthebank;
exponentiallyaggravatingtrafficjamsandsullen,uncooperativecoworkersandneighbors.Thoseofuswhocannotoverlooksuchannoyanceswillinvariablysuccumbtoself-defeatingdismay.
Theabilitytooverlookalsoreflectsahealthysenseofproportionandpriorities.Thewise"
overlooker"
willignorehisorherspouse'
sfailingsaftermakingaconsideredjudgmentthattheseareoutweighed,inthelongrun,bygreaterandmoresignificantstrengths.forexample,whatwiseorreasonablepersonwoulddestroyamarriagesolelybecauseanotherwisefaithful,kind,generous,intelligentandprosperouspartneroccasionallytossessocksonthefloor?
Anelderlyauntofminemakesastrikingexample.Longwidowed,shenowspendsherdayssittinginherapartment,carpingendlesslyaboutthemanyrelativeswhohaveslightedher.Nobodycallsenough.Nobodypaysheranyatention.Nobodycares,shesays.
And,indeed,whyshouldthey?
Whowantstovisitwithsomeone,elderlyorotherwise,whodoesnothingbutcomplain,findfaultandscourforslights?
Wereshewiser,perhapsshewouldignoreorevensuppressherinterminablegrievancesandtakemoreinterestintheworldatlarge,includingtheveryindividualswhoseattentionshepurportedlycraves.
Theparadigmofoverlookingapplieswithequalforceintheworldsofbusinessandpolitics.LookatRichardNixon:
abrilliant,oftenoriginalthinker,hewasnonethelesscontinuallyobsessedwithminutiaeandtheunimportant.Onsomelevel,I'
msure,hehimselfrealizedthedramaticimpactofsuchaglaringcharacterflaw;
whenthesituationwaslongpastsalvaging,heexhortedhisstaffandfriendsto"
Neverbepetty,"
adictumhehonoredfarmoreinthebreachthanintheobservance.
Moreprosaically,inbusinessandeverydaylife,itisindeedthewisepersonwhooverlooksorignoresavastamount.Whycomehomeeverydaynurturingagrudge?
Whyspendtimegrapplingwithactivities,peopleorattitudeswhichbringnothingbutpainandtorment?
Still,mostofusdo,atleastsomewhat,andfindourselvesfardiminishedforit.
Insum,Ithinkit'
ssafetosaythatmuchinthisworldmeritsnotevenacursoryexamination,andthoseamongusarewiserandhappierwhocansuccessfullybudgettheirtimeandenergyinordertoavoidnegativity.
Comments:
Thisisathoughtful,well-articulatedanalysisoftheissue.
Theresponseopenswithaclearendorsementofthestatedclaim,alongwithanacknowledgementthatwisdominvolvesadditionaltraits.Thewriterthenbeginsbuildinganargumentthatmodernlifeissofullof"
pettyannoyances"
thatitwouldbe"
self-defeating"
topaymuchattentiontothem.Using,first,examplesthatillustratethetrivialdemandsencounteredeveryday(e.g.,paperwork,trafficjams),theanalysismovesontopersonaltypesofexperiences(apartner抯annoyinghabits;
anaunt抯self-pity)andthentopolitics,where,thewriterimplies,Nixonmethispoliticaldemiseatleastpartlybecauseofhisobsessionwith"
minutiaeandtheunimportant."
Theexamplesclearlysupportthewriter抯positionandleadeffectivelytotheconcludingobservationaboutlearningto"
budget"
ourtimeandenergytoavoidthenegativeaspectsoflife.
Inseveralplaces,theskillfuluseofquestionshelpsmovetheanalysisalong.Andthroughout,theskillfuluseofsentencevarietyandprecisevocabularycombinetoconveymeaningeffectively,asinthisexcerpt:
"
whenthesituationwaslongpastsalvaging,he[Nixon]exhortedhisstaffandfriendsto慛everbepetty,?
adictumhehonoredfarmoreinthebreachthanintheobservance."
Thiskindofinsightful,articulateanalysismeritsascoreof6.
5.1.1
Neverbeforeinhistoryhavepeoplebeensobesetwiththeoverflowofideasandimagesthatthemodernhumanmustendure.Weareconstantlybombardedwithnews,advertising,andentertainment,somuchsothatweareoftenatalossastowhereweshouldfocusourattention.Thishasleadtowhatmanymediacriticshavecalled"
informationanxiety,"
atermusedtodiscribetheparalysistheordinaryhumanexperienceswhenattemptingtoorganizeandsynthesizethevastamountsofdatathatmovepasthereveryday.Now,morethaneverbefore,itcanbeseenthatwisdomtrulyisattributabletothose"
whoknowwhattooverlook."
TheInternetisagoodexampleoftheeffectsofinformationoverloadonpeople.Manypeoplerecievehundredsofemailmessagesaday,yetthereisnopossiblewayforthemtorespond,letaloneread,allofthesemessages.Throughpracticetheylearntopickoutwhatwillbeofinterestandtoignoretherest.Asimilarphenomenaoccurswhenapersonis"
browisingtheweb."
Information,bothtrivialandprofound,floatbyinadisorganizedway.Apersonlearnstoignorewhatisnotrelevanttotheirsearch.ThisiseasilydemonstratedbywatchingapersonnewtotheInternetnexttosomeonewhoisaveteranofthenet.Thenewpersonwillstumbleonloadsofirrelevantinformationwhiletheveteranwillmostlikelyproceedtotheinformationsheseeks.Thisabilitytooverlookuselessinformationisnotonlyapplicabletothenet;
considertheolderbutmoreestablishedformofinformationknownasthebook.
EversinceGuttenbergrolledouthisfirstfewpagesfromhispresshumanshavebeenwonderinghowtosynthesizeallthisknowledge.Eachyearmoreandmorebooksarewrittenandpublished,moreandmoreinformationisavailabletothepublicthroughbookstoresandlibraries,andeachyeartheaveragepersonmuststrugglehardertofindwhatsheneedstoknow..Thisisoneoftheprimaryreasonspeoplearesenttocollege:
theyaretaughthowtoaccessandresearchinformationtheyneed.
Itisonlythroughexperiencethatoneunderstandshowtooverlookuselessdata.Thisismostlikelywhattheauthoroftheabovequotemeant.
Thisresponsepresentsawell-developedanalysisoftheissue.
Beginningwithastrongdescriptionofthecurrentstateofinformationoverload,thefirstparagraphprovidesacontextfortheissueandtakesaclearpositionagreeingwiththestatedclaim.TheInternetexampleiswellchosenandwelldeveloped,clearlysupportingthepointthatwisdominvolveslearningtoignorewhatisnotrelevant.Thereferencetobooksreinforcesthispositionbutdoeslittletoadvancetheargumentoraddinsightfulanalysis.Theconclusionrestatesanearlierpoint,addinglittletotheanalysis.
Despiteafewinstancesofimprecisereference(e.g.,"
thishas"
and"
allthisknowledge"
),theargumentispresentedclearlyandcoherently,meritingascoreof5.Toearnahigherscore,theresponsewouldneedtodevelopamorethoughtfulanalysisoftheissue.
4.1.1
Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressedabove,inthatIfeelthatthestatementisomittingaverybigpartofwhatlearningisallabout.Ifirmlybelievethatwisdomisgainedbycarefulobservationofallthatisaroundusinourlives.Wegainagreatdealbywatchingthosearoundus,orbyobservingoursurroundings,aswellaswatchingtheassemblyofanobject.Allmylife,Ihavelearnedagreatdealbybeingveryobservantofpeopleandtheirreactionstocertainsituations,ortoproceduresthataretobefollowed.Beingobservanthashelpedtremendouslyintravellingaswell,sinceithashelpedmerecallcertainlandmarkstoknowifIamgoinginthecorrectdirection.Itistruethatifwepaytoomuchattentiontoinsignificantdetail,weclutterourmindswithtoomuchthatisunnecesssary.Instead,weshouldhavemoretimetodevoteourattentiontothatwhichismeaningful.Inthefieldofscience,weteachourstudentstobeobservant,andtolookforspecificreactions.Iftheydon'
tlearntowatchcloselyandrecordtheirdataprecisely,theirresultswillbelessthanadequate,andtheirdatawillmostlikelynotbeveryaccurateordependable.Thestatementabovehasmerit,butitdoesn