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First,ourplacesofinterestshouldbebetteradvertisedthroughouttheworldtoattractmoretourists.Second,facilitiesshouldbeprovidedtoensurethattouristsenjoytheirtrip.Finally,thequalityofserviceshouldbeimproved.
Don’ttellpeopletheirideasarebadunlessyou’vegotagoodone.
「评语」
本文第一段提出问题,第二段解决问题,“first”,“second”,“finally”等词的使用,使整篇文章条理格外清晰。
题目:
你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。
现在需要写出一份简要的底稿,底稿应包含以下基本要点。
随着工作时间的缩短,空余时间越来越多了。
如何利用空余时间。
利用空余时间的益处。
题目自拟。
UseofFreeTime
Somepeoplemaybesobusythattheyneverhaveasparemoment,butitwouldbehardtofindsuchpeopleincontemporarytimes.Workinghoursareshorterandvacationslonger,andtherearemoreandmorewaystospendtheweekends.Asidefromeatingandsleeping,whatdopeopledoduringthemanyhourswhentheyarenotatworkoratschool?
Useoffreetimeoftendisclosesmuchaboutone’stastes,values,interestsandpersonality.Whatmaybeoneman’sleisure,however,mightbeanotherman’swork.Inleisurehours,somemayturntothehumanities:
literature,magic,artandherewemightalsomentionmoviesandtelevision.Othersparticipateinsports,politics,voluntaryworkorhobbiesathome.Stillotherslikeparties,travelling,orjustloafing.
Obviously,theuseoffreetimeisagoodmeansofrelaxation,butitsbenefitsgobeyondthis.Allthingspeopledoinleisurehoursenablethemtogratifytheirwishes.Thiscancontributetointellectualgrowthandpromotesocialactivitiesaswell.
Sothegooduseoffreetimewillmakeliferich,colorfulandrewarding.
这篇文章写得很有水平。
说理深入浅出,语言丰富晓畅,例证详实,句式灵活多变,使得文章生动并吸引人。
开篇用问句,引出下文;
结尾点题,总结全文。
并且很有文学性。
范文讲评:
旅行
暑假就要到了,许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。
的确,旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。
那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇旅游的文章。
Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.
Travelmayrelieveapersonofboredomandgloom.
Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Travel
Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson’sperspective.Itmakesyoucomeintocontactwithdifferentcultures,meetpeopleofdifferentcolorsandgothroughpeculiarritesandceremonies.Travellingmuch,youwillnotonlyenrichyourknowledgeandexperiences,butalsobeawareofthevastnessofnature.
Travelmayalsorelievepersonofboredomandgloom.Travelbringsyouenjoymentandattraction.Itgivesyouapleasantexperience,whichwilldisperseyourboredomandmakeyouforgetwhateverannoysyou.Travelbroadensyourmindandleavesyougoodmemories.Later,youmaygooverthesememoriesandenjoyyourpastexperiences,thuskeepingafreshandsunnymind.
Thefield’shisstudy,naturewashisbook.
Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Airplanesarethefastestbutalsothemostexpensive.Busesandtrainsarelessexpensive,buttheysoonmakeyoufeelcrampedanduncomfortable.Shipsprovideyouwithcomfortunlessyougetseasick.Mostpeoplecanaffordtravelingbybicycle,which,althoughslow,canlimberupyourmusclesandgetyouclosertonature.
本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因,接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情,最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。
本篇各段解释言简意明,主题突出。
“comeintocontactwith…”,“enrichyouknowledgeandexperiences”,“beawareofthevastnessofnature”,“disperseyourboredom”,“broadenyourmind”等词语的恰当搭配,生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。
范文:
大型企业和小型企业LargeCompaniesandSmallCompanies
Directions:
WriteacompositiononthetopicLargeCompaniesandSmallCompaniesinthirtyminutes.Youshouldwritenolessthan120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.
1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。
2.有的人则认为在小公司工作更能锻炼人。
3.我的看法。
参考范文:
LargeCompaniesandSmallCompanies
Upongraduationfromcollege,youngmenandwomenfacethefirstchoiceintheircareerlife:
togotoalargecompanyorasmallone?
Althoughmanygraduatesareattractedbytheprestigeoflargecompanies,Ibelievethesmallonewillaffordmorechancesofsuccessandmoreopportunitiestodevelopyourability.
Therearetwobasicdifferencesbetweenthelargeandsmallenterprises.
First,workinginthesmallcompanyyouoperateprimarilythroughpersonalcontacts;
youhavemorechancetodevelopyourcommunicationabilityandtheabilitytohandlevariouskindsofpersonalities.Incontrast,inthelargecompanythereareestablishedpoliciesandfairlyrigidprocedures.Eventhemanatthetopisonlyacoginabigmachine:
youneedn’tmakeanydecisionandcan’tseetheeffectofyourwork……
Second,inasmallbusinessyouarenormallyexposedtoallkindsofexperiencesandexpectedtodoagreatmanythingswithouttoomuchhelporguidance.Thus,youmayacquiremuchmoreskillsandexperience,anddeveloptheabilitytohandledifferent,complicatedthings.Butinthelargecorporation,sinceyouarenormallytaughtonethingandlimitedtooneprocedure,youmaybecomethemanwhoknowsmoreandmoreaboutlessandless.
Obviouslyifyouwanttogainmoreexperienceandabilityneededinbusinessorganizationsandtobecomeanexcellentmanagerorexecutiveinyourfuturecareer,workinginasmallcompanyisyourbestchoice.
名人隐私PrivacyofFamousPeople
youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaynolessthan120wordsonthefollowingtopic.
Newspapersandmagazineshavespecialinterestintheprivatelivesoffamouspeople.
Whatcanyouexplainit?
Whateffectitwillhaveonthepeoplebeingexposed?
Andwhatisyouropinionofit?
范文:
PrivacyofFamousPeople
Inrecentyears,manynewspapersandmagazinesfocusontheactivitiesoffilmstars,popsingersandsomeotherfamousmenandwomen.Reportersdisguisetheiridentities,infiltratethesubject’sbusinessandfamily,orevenbugandwiretapthem——togetthenewsbywhatevermeansarenecessary.
Itisnotdifficulttoexplainthereasonfortheirsurprisingamountofinterestinfamouspeople’slives.Theyareinthespotlight,renownedornotorious,theyarethetopicofordinarypeoplewholiketoknoweverythingaboutthem.Tosatisfytheircuriosity,or“thepeople’srighttoknow”,journalistsoftenfindittheirdutytoreporttheiractivities.
Moreover,whatmatterstoanewspaperoramagazineisthenumberofreaders.Alargereadershipmeanstheriseinthecirculationoftheirpublications,henceahugeprofit.Sincefilmstarsandpopsingersarenewsworthyfigures,andtheirstoriesdrawsfarmoreattentionthanthoseofotherpeople,itisnaturalthatthepresstriestoattractthemtobuytheirmagazinesbyfeaturingprivatelivesoffamouspeople.
However,thoseexposedpeoplecanbeseverelyinjuredbysuchpressattention.Sensationalstoriesabouttheirprivatelivescausegreatunhappinesstothem.Toescapereporters,theycan’tevenleadanormallife.Sometimestheirliveswillbeindanger.Forexample,PrincessDianadiedinacaraccidentassheattemptedtoescapephotographersinachasethroughParis.
Famouspeoplearealsocitizens.Theyhavetherighttokeeptheirownprivacylikeordinarypeople——thebasicrightwhichshouldberespected,protectedandguaranteedbyourlawsinwhatevercircumstances.
给校长的一封信ALettertotheUniversityPresident
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:
Alettertotheuniversitypresidentaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus,youshouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
假设你是李伟,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信,内容涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
January11th,2003
DearMr.President,
Asaregularstudentatourcollege,Ihavesomecomplainttomakeaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.
Firstly,thecanteenenvironmentisverybad.Actually,itisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandnoisywithaneverlargerpresenceofvocationalstudentseveryterm.
Secondly,thecanteenworkersarebad-mannered.Farfrombeingwarmandkind-hearted,theyalwaysseemtobecoldandrudetousstudents.
Thirdlyandmostimportantly,thedishesatourcanteenaretooexpensive,thoughtheyarebynomeansgoodqualityordelicious.ThesurveytheStudentUnioncarriedoutlastweekrevealsthatonaverageastudentwillspend10to12yuanonmealseveryday.Thisisformorethanthefoodexpensesofstudentsintheneighborhoodcolleges.
Nutritiousanddeliciousmealswellwithinthestudents’meansareveryimportantforyoungstudents.Ireallywishmeasurescouldbetakentoimproveourcanteenservice.
知识和经验KnowledgeorExperience
Youareallowed40minutestowriteanessaynolessthan150wordsonthefollowingtopic.
1.someemphasizebookknowledge
2.othersstresspracticalexperience
3.whichoneismoreimportant?
Giveyourreasonstoillustrateyouropinion.
Whichismoreimportantinlife,knowledgefromthebooksyouread,orpersonalexperienceyougaininreality?
Theanswermayvaryfrompersontoperson.Theyoung,educatedmayemphasizetheformer,andtheoldmaystressthelater.Butinmyopinion,theyareofthesameimportance.
Experienceispriceless.Howtobecomeanefficientsecretary?
Howtoprepareforyourfirstchildtocomeintotheworld?
Thereissomuchexperienceweneedincareers,inlifeandeveninacademicstudies.Ithelpsonedealwiththeproblemswitheaseandconfidence.Especiallyactivitiesandtoaccumulateexperienceofdifferentkindsismor