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Eg:

ComputerandI

Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.

exceedingly替换very

thrilling替换exciting

sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

google替换search

anarmyof替换alotof

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；

Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular

Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…

Advancement替换development

Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto

Current（currently）替换now

Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople

Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的

Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.

Forastart替换Tobeginwith

Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法

Ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides

Deliver替换send

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto

Emerging替换appearing（fading替换disappearing）

Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'

lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.

Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides

Computersdoplay，do强调

Positive替换important/good等

Asliceof替换apartof

Unfavorable替换bad

Impacts替换effects/influences

Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语

Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues）替换advantage（defects替换disadvantage）

Facet替换aspect

以下是30个最经典的替换词

1.individuals,characters,folks替换（people,persons）

2:

positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising

（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good

3:

dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad

如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换

Eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.

4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost）替换many.

注：

用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.

5:

asliceof,quietafew,several替换some

6:

harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,

holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,

itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think

（因为是书面语，所以要加that）

7:

affair,business,matter替换thing

8:

shared代common

9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits）

10:

formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion

11:

Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。

所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.

Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.

12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly

13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer

15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very

16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable

17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin

18.captureone'

sattention替换attractone'

sattention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear

21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.

22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth

23.desire替换want.

24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto

25.bearinmindthat替换remember

26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）

27.interaction替换communication

28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth

29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance

30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible

四六级作文开头句型介绍：

1-1对立法:

先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.

例如（e.g）

[1].Whenaskedabout.....,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.......ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.

[2].Whenitcomesto....,somepeoplebielivethat.......Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguements/statements,but（Itendtotheprofer/latter...）

[3].Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhether.....

1-2现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题,然后评论.

e.g

[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof/（phenomenonof）...hascause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.

[2].Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonof...

hasbeenbroughtintofocus.（hasbeenbrouthtopublicattention）

[3].Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality...isyetanotherofthenewandbittertruthwehavetolearntofacenow/constantly.

1-3观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.

e.g:

[1].Neverhistoryhasthechangeof..beenasevidentas...

Nowhereintheworld/Chinahastheissue/ideaof..bennmorevisible/popularthan...

[2].Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginnig/comingtorealize/accept/（beaware）that...

[3].Nowthereisagrowingawareness/recognationotthenecessityto......

Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof......

[4].Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.......

1-4引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法,来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

[1]."

Knowledgeispower."

suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.

"

Educationisnotcompletewithgradulation."

SuchistheopnionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopnion.

[2]."

........."

Howoftenwehearsuchstatements/wordslikethoses/this.

Inourowndaysweareusedtohearingsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis"

......"

.

1-5比较法------通过对过去,现在两种不同的倾向,观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点.

[1].Foryears,...hadbeenviewedas...Butpeoplearetakingafreshlooknow.Withthegrowing...,people........

[2].Peopleusedtothinkthat...（Inthepast,....）Butpeoplenowsharethisnew.

1-6故事法----先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣,引出文章的主题.

[1].Oncein（anewspaper）,Ireadof/learnt....Thephenemenonof...hasarousedpublicconcern.

[2].Ihaveafriendwho...Shouldhe....?

Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontwithinourdailylife.

[3].Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho...Thisstorymaybe（unbelievable）,butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.

1-8问题法-----先用讨论或解答的设问,引出自己观点,适用于有争议性的话题.

Should/What......?

Optionsof...varygreatly,some...,others...Butinmyopinion,.......

一the+est+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）

themost+形容词+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）

例句：

HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.

海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.

张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、Nothingis+erthanto+V

Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V

Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.

没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.

（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。

）

Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...（不可否认的...）

Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.

不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都知道...）

Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~（毫无疑问的...）

Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.

毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、Anadvantage