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需要接ing形式的接了to，或相反等。

3.形容词副词：

常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反；

关系副词where，when，why等的缺失或错用。

4.介词：

主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用。

这一部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的搭配。

5.主谓一致性：

第三人称单数漏掉s，或主语为复数，谓语动词用了单数；

再就是就近原则对主语的影响。

6.冠词：

定冠词the的多余或缺失，如季节，月份，星期，球类及三餐活动，称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the，或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏税掉了the；

a，an的混用，特别注意：

hour，honest等虽然首字母不是元音字母，但其发音却是以元音素开头，故用an，而useful，university，European，one—hour等虽然首字母是元音字母，但却以辅音音素开头，故用a。

7.数词：

主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等，基数词的复数形式如几百hundredsof，几千thousandsof漏掉了s，或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数，如sevenhundred，写作sevenhundreds。

8.连词：

不合句中的逻辑关系。

如需转折连词（如but）的时候用了承接连词（so），或相反等等。

9.代词：

主要是代词的格与数的错用。

如男性用了女性代词，单数用了复数代词或相反；

应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格，主格或相反，关系代词的错用或缺失。

如只能用that引导的用了其它，或在不能用that的地方却用了that，或是在“介词+关系代词”结构中漏掉了介词等。

10.常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。

三、验证答案。

改完后，要回过头来重读一遍全文，查看改过后是否能使语气通顺，时态一致，合乎逻辑。

再次通读可以在初改时感觉不顺的地方集中精力，仔细推敲，使答案更加准确。

因为有时就一个句子来看可能在两个地方修改都说地过去，但在上下文中可能只能在一处修改才正确。

（1）

Inautumnof1935,whenIwasayoungman,IwastravelinginthenorthofIndian.Oneevening,afterhuntingintheforestallday,IwasreturningtotheplacewhichIhadputupmytent.Itwasgettingdark,butIwaswalkingalongaroad.SuddenlyIsawtwoeyeglaringatmefromamongthetrees.WhatcanIdo?

ShouldIjumpintotherivertosavemylife?

ThenIlookedattheright.Intherivertherehadabigcrocodilewaitingtowelcomemewithitsmouthwaswideopening. 

（2）

Catsareanimalsofhabit.Theyliketogotosleepyaboutsametimeeverydayandforacertainlengthoftime.Theyseemtohavenaturalclockinsidethemthattellsthemwhensleeping.Besidestheirregularsleep,catstakenaps（打盹）.Somescientiststhinkthatpeopleshouldalsotakecatnap.Thehabitwoulddogoodforpeople'

shealth.Catnapshelpedbuildupenergyinthebody.Sincecatshavemoods（情绪）liketheseofpeople,scientistsbelievethatpeoplecanimprovetheirmoodswithcat-napping.Peoplemightbecomemorehappierandmoreactive.

（3）

AmanshottwostudentsdiedandwoundedfiveotheratanAustralianuniversityinMonday,afterhewasoverpoweredbyclassmatesofthevictims（受害者）.ThetwodeadwerebothmaleofAsianappearanceinhisearly20s.Theothershavebeingtreatedforminor（未成年的）injuries.Theman,inhismid-30sandofAsianappearance,wasseizedseveralstudentsinclassroomatMonashUniversity,Melbourneandwaslatearrested. 

（4）

WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteinEnglish,Iranintomuchdifficulties.ThemainproblemwasthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedheradviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.

SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwroteastoryandshowedtomyteacher.Helikedthemverymuch 

andreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthatthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome. 

（5）

DearXiaohua,

ItisfourdayssinceMotheracceptedtheoperation.Sheisfeelingmuchmorebetter.Thedoctorstoldmetheoperationwassuccess,butbecauseheroldageshehadtostayinhospitalforothertwoweeks.Thedoctorsalsosayitwasquitenecessaryforhertodoso.Weexpecttogetafullreportintwoandthreedays.Pleasetellthegoodnewstotherestoffamilyassoonaspossible.Youneedn'

ttocomehere.I'

mabletolookafterMotherbymyself.You'

dbettersendflowerstoMother.Shewillfeelhappily.

Yours, 

Xiaohui

（6）

Tomhadretiredandlivedlonelyalongwayfromtown.Hehardlyneverlefthishome.Butonedayhewenttotownbuysomethingsinthemarket,andafterhehadboughtit,hewentintoarestaurantandsitdownatatablebyhimself.Whenhelookedaround,hesawseveraloldpeoplesputonglassesbeforereadingtheirnewspapers.Soafterthelunchhedecidetogotoastoretobuyhimselfapairofglasses,either,Hewalkedalongawidestreetandfastfoundastore. 

（7）

Myparentswereallstandingthere,shoutingateachother.Theword"

divorce（离婚）"

wasrepeatedandbrokemyhearteachtime.Ihadtrappedbetweenthemanddidn'

tknowwhattodo.Amillionthoughtsrushedintomymind,butnothingofthemcouldeasemyfeelings.Irushedbacktomyroom,seateddowninsilenceandstaredoutofthewindow.Theleaveswerefloatinginair.Theystruggledtryingtocatchthewindandfinallytheyhadtofallontheground.IknewIwasnottheonlyonehadgonethroughthis.ButImustlearntofightagainstthis.LaterinthedayItookupwithapenandwrotedown"

ItisuntilItakeastepbackandlookatmyfamilythatIcanreallyappreciatethisthinghashelpedmegrowstrongandmature（成熟）."

（8）

Deareditor,

Inthepastmyhometownwasusedtobeabeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgreengrasscouldbeseenineverywhere.Inordertobuildhouseandgrowmorecrops,peoplecutdownmoreandmoretrees.Withtimewenton,thewholeforestwasalmostdestroyed.Graduallythegreenhillshavechangedintowasteland.Asaresult,sandstormsstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferalot.However,Idohopeallthepeopleshouldrealizetheterriblyresultofnotcaringaboutourenvironment.What'

smore,theyshouldtakegoodcareoftheforestsandplanttreesinsteadcuttingthemdowntoimproveourlivingconditions. 

（9）

WhenIfoundoutthatmytrainwouldthreehourslate,Ichangedmyideaandwouldgetabusinstead.Iwasabouttorushoutofthetrainstationwhileawell-dressedoldmantookmebymyarm,"

Younglady,"

saidthegentleman,"

Shouldn'

tyoufindoutthebusschedule（时刻表）beforeyourushoutcatchthebus"

.Istaredathimwithmymouthopened.Howdidhereadmymind?

BeforeIcansayaword,headded,"

Yousee,mytrainisalsorunninglate.Asameideacametome.ButIthinkagoodconversationthatcanhelppassthetime.Beforeyouknowit,yourtrainwillbethere."

（10）

DearKangLi,

Ihaven'

theardyouforalongtime.Howareyou?

Ihadjustfinishedtheexams.NowI'

mgladIhavetimetowriteforyou.OurteachertellsusthatChinaisabigcountryhasthemostpopulationintheworld.It'

sontheothersideoftheworld.Nowthesunisshiningbrighthereandperhapsyou'

resleepinginthedarknight.IwishtoknowanythingmoreabouttheChinesewayofliving.Iwonderatifyoucantellmeaboutitinyournextletter.Pleasewritesoon. 

（11）

Ivisitedthezooyesterday,andIwasveryunhappyandangryaboutthethingswhatIsaw.Thelargeanimalswereinsmallcages.Thelion 

waswalkingbackandforth.Itwascompletelybored.Thetigerfellasleepalltheafternoon.Iseepeoplefeedingthefish.Theywerethrowingricesandmeatintothepond,whichcouldkillthefish,butnoonetriedstopthem.WhenIhadthedrinkatthezoorestaurant,thewaiterservedmerude.Outsidetherestaurant,therubbishbinswerefullandrubbishwasblowingeverywhere.Itseemsthatthezoodoesn'

tlooktheanimalsorthevisitorsverywell.

（12）

LastSundayIsawtheworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthreehours.Afterlunch,Iwentintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashotter,andallisquiet.Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewouttheopenwindow.AsIranouttocatch 

them,bigdropofrainbegantofall.WhenIcamebackintohouse,itwasrainingharderandharder.Itriedveryhardtoclosethewindow.ThenIheardaloudlycrashing（碰撞的）soundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranintofindthatabigtreehadfallendownandbrokethetopofthebackroom. 

（13）

Ihavebeenplanningtojoininourcollegebasketballteam 

nextyear,sonowIamspendingasmoretimeasIcanwithotherpeoplewholikestoplay.Theyareteachingmethemostimportantrulesandtechnologiesofthegame,andIamgettingbetterallthetime.Wehaveaneighborhoodteamthatplayagainstotherteamsinthearea.Oneofmyneighborishelpingrestofusimprovedourskills.Tonightweareplayingagainstoneofthebestteamsinthecity,andIthinkwecanbeatthemifwewon'

tmakeanymistakes.

（14）

FangTongis34yearsold,theactor,directorandteacherofBeijingOperaTheatre.MostofhisstudentsarefromotherpartofChinaandhavecometoBeijingataveryyoungageofsixteenorseventeen.Hehopescreateanenvironmentforhisstudentsthatitismuchmorerelaxingthantheoneheusedtostudyin.Hethoughtthatanactorshouldrelaxhimselfwhenperforming.Yethisstudentsdeeprespecthimandheneverneedtoraisehisvoiceinordertobehearing.Forhisopinion,actorsshouldgoonevenwhentheyfeeltheyhavemadeamistakeintheirperformancesbecausethemomentisalreadygonebutpeoplecanneverbebacktoit. 

Soartisalwayschanginganddeveloping. 

（15）

Iwasrecenttoldthatlisteningtoloudmusicisgraduallymakingpeoplehardofhearing.I'

msureithasalreadybeenhappenedtomyneighbor.Foryearssheturnedadeafeartomyrequeststoturnherradiodown.Whenshegaveapartysheisn'

thavetoinvitetherestofthestreet.Everyonecandanceinhermusicinhisownroom.Nowascientisthasdiscoveredacertainelectronicsoundshavestrangeeffectsonrats.Hedeclarestheybreakdown,almostparalyze（瘫）withlegstrembled.Thenitissimplyamatterofthrowingthemoutbytheirtail.Iwonderedifthesamethingwillhappentomyneighborsomeday.

（16）

DearRalph,

I'

maseniorstudent.Ihavebeinlovewithaboyforthreeyears.Butsheisashyboy,soIwrotehimaletterfirstlytoexpressmyfee