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6缺陷:
Disadvantage,demerit,drawback,downside,weakness
7使迷惑:
Puzzle,bewilder,perplex,baffle
8重要的:
Key,crucial,critical,important,significant,vital,substantial,indispensable,imperative
9认为:
Think,believe,insist,maintain,assert,conclude,deem,hold,argue,beconvinced,befirmlyconvinced,befullyconvinced
10保护:
Protect,conserve,preserve
11确保:
Assure,ensure,guarantee,pledge
12有害的:
Bad,banefulevil,harmful,detrimental
13要求:
Request,demand,needs,requisition
14消除:
Eliminate,clear,remove,clearup,takeaway,smoothaway
15导致:
Leadto,bringabout,resultin,cause,sparkoff,conduceto,procure,induce,generate
16因此:
So,therefore,thus,hence,consequently,asaconsequence,accordingly,asaresult,becauseofthis,asaresultofthis
17增长至:
Growto,riseto,increaseto,goupto,climbto,ascendto,jumpto,shootto
18降低至:
Dipto,fallto,declineto,decreaseto,dropto,godownto,reduceto,slumpto,descendto,sinkto,slideto
19保持稳定:
Levelout,donotchange,remainstable,remainstill,remainsteady,bestable,maintainthesamelevel,remainunchanged,bestill,remainthesamelevel,stayconstant,keepatthesamelevel,leveloff,stabilize,keepitsstability,evenout
20急剧地:
Dramatically,drastically,sharply,hugely,enormously,steeply,substantially,considerably,significantly,markedly,surprisingly,strikingly,radically,remarkably,vastly,noticeably
21平稳地:
Steadily,smoothly,slightly,slowly,marginally,gradually,moderately,mildly
22宣称:
Allege,assert,declare,claim
23发生:
Happen,occur,takeplace
24原因:
Reason,factor,cause
25发展:
Development,advance,progress
26有益的:
Useful,helpful,beneficial,profitable,rewarding,advantageous
27影响:
Influence,impact,effect
28明显的:
Clear,obvious,evident,self-evident,manifest,apparent,crystal-clear
29占:
Comprise,takeup,accountfor,constitute,consistof,makeup,occupy,hold,compose
30与…相比:
Comparedwith,comparedto,incomparisonwith,incomparisonto,bycomparisonwith,bycomparisonto
31对比而言:
Bycontrast,incontrast,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary=,conversely
32展示:
Show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,present,represent,describe
33大约:
Approximately,almost,about,around,nearly,roughly
34波动:
Fluctuate,goupsanddowns,displayafluctuation,demonstrateafluctuation
35事实上:
Practically,inpractice,essentially,inessence,inreality,ineffect,infact,asamatteroffact,itisafactthat
36换言之:
Namely,thatistosay,inotherwords,toputitlikethis,toputitdifferently,toputitfromanotherway,toputitfromanotherangle.
37人:
individuals,characters,folks
38积极的:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding
39许多anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof
40一些asliceof,quiteafew,several
41认为harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat,itiswell-establishedthat
42事情affair,business,matter,stuff
43共同的shared,common。
44收获reaphugefruits/profits
45我认为formypart,frommyperspective
47逐渐,越来越increasing(ly),growing,gradually,stepbystep
48客人shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,customer。
49非常exceedingly,extremely,intensely,extraordinarily
50吸引注意力captureone'
sattention
51角度facet,dimension,sphere,respect,aspect。
52欲望desire,lust,craving,longing,hunger,thirst
53关注pourattentioninto
54铭记bearinmindthat
55互动interaction,communication
56反对beagainst,disapproveof,disagreewith
B黄金句型建议
1插入语
2改变主语类型
3丰富修饰语类型
4倒装句,强调句,名词性从句量力而行
5多写有效的长句,不要为了长而长,少写废话
C六级作文种需要使用的逻辑连接词
首先,其次,然后,最后:
firstly,secondly,thirdly;
inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthefinalplace;
firstandforemost,moreover,additionally,furthermore,eventually,lastbutbynomeansleast;
tostartwith,toendwith,ontopofthat,inadditiontothat,addedtothat,besides,finally,lastly.
Initially,plus/also,ultimately.
转折类
However,otherwise,nevertheless,instead,notwithstanding
Incontrast,bycontrast,onthecontrary,despitethefactthat,inspiteof
But,yet,although,eventhough,though
Admittedly,concededly.
Albeit+形容词/介词词组/分词,常位于句中
Yourcourage,albeitfrailandfaint,canstillpushmeforward,continuously.
强调类
Ofcourse,indeed,mostimportant,certainly,infact,obviously,clearly,surely,inparticular,inthiscase,actually.
对比类
Incomparison,likewise,similarly,equally,inthesameway,identically
递进类
Furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,additionally,also.
因果类
原因becauseof,owingto,dueto,thanksto
Becauseofyou,Ifailed.
Becauseofyoulovedme,Iremainsingletilltoday.
Becauseofthefactthatyoulovedme,Iremainsingletilltoday.
Becauseyoulovedme,Iremainsingletilltoday.
because,since,for,as,inthat,simply/merely/mainlybecause
ManyChinesestudentsgotoUSAtofurthertheirstudiesinthattheybelievetheycanhavemoreopportunitiestolivehappilyandfreely.
结果therefore,thus,hence,consequently,accordingly
asaresult,asaconsequence
so
二:
六级考试的题目特点
A话题特点
教育(高校排名,中文学习,艺术班学习,电子图书,阅读经典著作,校园浪费,英语口语考试,上学费用,读书的必要性)
科技(数字化产品,盗版,科学技术发展,博客/微博)
社会问题(西方节目,出境旅游,房产权,伪劣商品,不良商业广告,燃放鞭炮)neighborhood
永恒性话题/精神类/品质类(大学生心理健康,做好事,诚实,关于拒绝,机会,幸福,成功,奉献,勇气)
莫名其妙话题(名字的重要性)
B话题规律
1和学生相关的话题考的频率最高
2社会话题一定避开热点或过于政治性的命题
3永恒性话题需要注意备考
4莫名其妙的话题就听天由命,词汇用好就好
三:
六级考试的得分要点
A看上去像一篇标准的六级写作——-字数满足要求150/180/240,作文有身材,字迹清晰整齐(第一印象不差,不至于跌破底线)
三段式——小大小结构
一段见关键词
二段见逻辑(firstly,secondly…)
三段见语言,点题/呼应
B可以利用模板,但不要照搬模板,因为给分是globalscoring(改卷老师认识什么是模板什么是你自己的语言,用模板不会得0分,不用也不一定会得高分,理性使用模板)
C六级写作和四级写作的区别——语言!
!
只有语言!
还是语言!
——什么是语言?
用词准确,句式多变,逻辑衔接清晰自然就是好的语言!
无视内容的高深和观点的犀利,不需要!
真心不需要,只要合理即可!
四六级写作攻略
1.逻辑衔接用法
2.破题的方法和思路的建立
破题——先破形式,再确定论证的思路——转化思路,避重就轻——避论证和语言难点,讲通识/普适道理
首段:
谈现象(模板,句式的替换,关键词,思路)
中间段落:
析原因/利/弊(万能句式,逻辑,思路和素材,词汇的选择)
结尾段落:
给结果/建议(常用的建议和结果类以及支持反对类的词汇,漂亮的句型,观点/总结)
2开头段的写法
谈现象,不给观点
hook+phenomenon
方法:
a重要性,严重性,普遍性(essential,critical,deeply-rooted,deeply-ingrained,widely-accepted,
严重:
aggravateitsseriousness,…issoseriousthat…hasdrawnmuchattentionandevendisputefrom…)
----教育,精神/品质
“三性模板”----Itisdeeply-ingrainedthat….isexceedinglyessentialin…’slife,especiallyin…’s.
Everyone,meincluded,hasnoway/outlettoavoidorignoreit.Ifrequiredtovoicemyownopiniononthereason/result/suggestion/influence/effectof…,Ifirmly/clearlywillelaborateonmyargumentasfollows.Iwillputforwardmyelaborateargumentasfollows.
写观点的句子:
Toputitmoresimply,Iwouldliketostatemyopinionas…..
Tobespecific,Iwouldratherstatemyviewas…
Demoofissuetopicin2008
Itisdeeplyingrainedthatthementalhealthisexceedinglyessentialinaperson’slife,especiallyinuniversitystudents’.Everyone,meincluded,hasnowaytoavoidorignoreitsimportance/theimportanceofmentalhygiene.Ifaskedtovoicemyownopinion/putforward/setforthonthesuggestionsforuniversitystudentskeepingmentallyhealthy,Iclearlywillelaboratemyargumentasfollows.
词汇补充
重要的:
earthshaking,eventful,momentous,weighty,tectonic,historic,monumental,
不重要的:
insignificant,negligible,trifling,trivial,unimportant;
严重的:
serious,severe,grave,sedate,staid,rock-ribbed;
普遍的:
pervasive,universal,prevailing,prevalent,customary,conventional
b争论性(争论内容,争论态度,争论方法,attitudeandapproach,controversial,divergent,disputable)—社会话题/socialissues,科技话题
Undoubtedly,…hasentered/penetrated/influencedpeople’slives/allwalksoflifeandarousedmuchattentionamongthegeneralpublicaswellasthegovernmentdivisions.Actually/unfortunately,itisdisputabletoreachanagreement/concordontheissueof/whether….,becausethisissueinvolvesmanydifferent/complicatedfactors./becausethisissueisamatterofopinions./becausepeopleatdifferentstandsholddifferently.Asforme,theargumentonthisissuewillbeelaboratedasfollows.
ShouldChinasupportmoreownershipofprivatecars?
Undoubtedly,privatecarshaveenteredcommonpeople’slivesandarousedmuchdiscussionamongthegeneralpublicandgovernmentdivision.Unfortunately,itisfairlydisputabletoreachanagreementonwhetherpeople/consumersshouldbeencouragedorrestrainedtobuyprivatecars,becausethisissueinvolvesmanycomplicatedfactors.
利弊
c衔接第一段和第二段(probeintothereasons/involvingfactors/benefits/drawbacks/effects/consequence)
Whenprobinginto/scrutinizing/analyzingthereasons/result/benefits/drawbacks/merits/demeritsfor/oftheissueof/phenomenonthat….,people,especiallystudents,mayhavetheirown/personalviewpoint,attitude,andwayofbehavior.Formyownpart/Frommypersonalperspective,thisissue,(whichisbeingdiscussed/disputed/argued/debatedinapublicforum/insomepopularpublicmedialikesocialnetworking,)canbeperceivedasfollows/inthefollowingfacets..
Whenprobingintothereasonsforthepopularityofminiblogs,….
Whenprobingintothereasonswhydisposableplasticbagsarelimitedtouse,
Whenprobingintotheresultsofthephenomenonthat
Demo:
Whenprobingintothereasonsforstudents’preferenceofgoingtograduateschoolortoworkdirectly,people,meincluded,willhavetheirownattitude,viewpoint,andwayofbehavior.Formyownpart,thisissueshouldbeperceivedinthefollowingfacets.
d对比法(while,admittedly,concededly,whereas)
Admittedly,itisadeeply-rootedopinio