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Goodafternoon,ladiesandgentlemen,I’mJackie.Ideasworthspreading,soI’mgoingtosharemybrilliantideastowardsthebookIrecommendedafewdaysago.First,abriefintroduction.ThebooknamedTheOrdinaryWorldwasarivernovelwrittenbyafamousChinesewriter,LuYao.AndthisnovelwonthethirdMaoDunliteratureaward,oneofthehighesthonorsinChineseliterary.Thisbookisaboutordinarypeasantswithextraordinarypersonalities.Itdescribedhowtheystruggledforfate,howtheystruggledforabetterlifeinthe1970sto1980s.Next,I’mgoingtosharemyimpressiononthisbook.Infact,I’vereadthisnoveltwice.Thefirsttimewasonlastsummerholiday.Atthattime,Iwasaloser,aloseronemotionandafailure,a...（onlyfirst800charsshown）

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