英语写作亮点词汇文档格式.docx

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原句：

Noonesawthebankbeingbrokeninto.

优化：

Noonewitnessedthebankbeingbrokeninto.

二、恰当的使用限定词

限定词的使用能使论述更加客观、适度，避免观点的绝对化，提高说服力和可信度。

写作中常见的限定词有：

may,maybe,perhaps,probably,mainly,generally,commonly,personally,comparativelytypically,usually,sometimes,often,most,mostly,nearly,almost,notnecessarily,ingeneral,atleast,atmost,mayaswell,ifpossible,hadbetter,tosomeextent,tosomedegree,moreoftenthannot,forthemostpart.

Idon’tagreewiththefirstargument.

Idon’tagreewiththefirstargumenttosomeextent.

Thefirstappearancewilldeterminetheapplicant’sfate.

Thefirstappearancemoreoftenthannotwilldeterminetheapplicant’sfate.

三、注意区分近义词

由于英语此意范围非常广泛，即便是近义词或同义词也只是某种程度上的近似，不可能在意义上完全对等，这就需要考生在选词时斟酌其含义的微妙差别，辨析同义词在语境中的不同用法。

Sotherearisestheproblem:

Willelectronicbooksreplacetraditionalbooks?

（指“实际存在的问题”或“需要解决得现实问题”，不符合此处语境）

优化：

Sotherearisesthequestion:

Afteragooddinnertogether,alltheguestsrelaxedandbecamequitecareless.（指“漫不经心的,粗心的”）

Afteragooddinnertogether,alltheguestsrelaxedandbecamequitefamiliar.（指“随便的,熟悉的”）

四、学会使用动态动词

动态动词往往比be,therebe,makeneed等静态动词更有活力，可以达到更好的写作效果。

Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andmakeherfinancialburdenlessandless.

Pleasetryourbesttohelpthisgirl,helphertopassthemostdifficultperiodinlife,andrelieveherfinancialburden.

Eachday,wecanseetherearealotoffoodsinthegarbagecans.

Eachday,wecanseemanystudentsdumpfoodsinthegarbagecans.

五、学会使用不同的词性

很多考生受汉语思维的影响，经常完全依据汉语的词性对译英文，导致造出来的句子十分生硬死板。

因此，考生在平时训练时一定要注意摆脱汉语思维的束缚，学会根据具体的语境活用不同的词类，这样才能写出地道生动的句子。

Afterwehaveobservedthemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillactuallycontributetosocialdevelopment.

Throughcarefulobservationandcriticalanalysis,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillactuallycontributetosocialdevelopment.

Environmentalpollutionwillmakeitimpossibleforhumanbeingstosurviveontheearth.

Environmentalpollutionwilldeprivehumanbeingsofthepossibilitiestosurviveontheearth.

六.学会使用介词短语

英语中有很多介词短语都具有动词的特征，适合表达抽象的含义。

学会使用这些介词短语不但可以丰富文章的用词，而且能够增强文章的表现力。

另外，我们经常可以用介词短语代替从句，从而使文章表达更加简洁有力。

Hisfamilyobviouslycannotaffordthebigsumofmoneyforsuchanoperation.

Thebigsumofmoneyforsuchanoperationisobviouslybeyondwhathisfamilycanafford.

Piratedproductsoftencostmuchlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantageinpricethoughtheirqualityisrelativelypoor.

Piratedproductsoftencostmuchlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantageinpricedespitetheirrelativelypoorquality.

七、亮点词语改写练习

1.I’dliketomakeeveryefforttoletmorepeopleknowtheideathatwasteisdisgraceful,andcallonallmyschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.（用更动态的动词改写）

2.I’msureyouwillfindagoodcandidateforthepositioninthatafewpeoplearemoresuitablethanI.（用更具体的词替换）

3.Peoplewhoaregoodatdealingwithsocialrelationsadmittheirmistakes,andtaketheirshareofblame.（用介词短语改写）

4.Thatcapitalpunishmentisabolishedwillbenefittheharmonyofthesociety.（用不同的词性改写）

5.Ifstudentsdevelopthehabitofwaste,itwillundoubtedlybecomeaheavyburdenontheirparents.（用更动态的动词改写）

6.Aboveall,itteachesusthatweshouldn’thaveastrongwishtogetquickresults.（用更具体的词语替换）

7.EatingDumpingontheEveofLunarNewYearisanationalhabitinChina.（用恰当的近义词替换）

8.Itisreportedthatteenagesmokingincreases.（用更动态的动词替换）

9.Ifwecombineallpeople’sknowledge,wecanbringoutabettersolutionassoonaspossible.（用介词短语改写）

10.However,thoughcelebritiesareglamorous,theyleadverystressfullives.（加上限定词，使表达更加客观）

11.Nuclearproliferationisalwaysthetopproblemstheparticipantshavetodiscussatthiskindofmeeting.（用恰当的近义词替换）

12.Foronething，celebritiesdon’thavetheprivacylikeanordinaryperson.（用更具体的词代替）

13.Collegestudentscannotstrikeabalancebetweenstudyandtheirpart-timejobs.（加上限定词，使表达更加客观）

14.Thetermcanbehelpfultomyquestionsandproblems,thusmakingmyworkefficiencybecomehigher.（用更动态的动词改写）

15.Thelinguistsspendagreatdealoftimeinlookinghowpeopletalkintheirdailycommunication.（用更具体的词替换）

16.Insteadofblindlyfollowingthem,weshouldobservethemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically.Afterwehaveobservedthemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillcontributetothesocialdevelopment.（用不同的词性改写）

17.Weshallonlyfollowthoseconceptionsthatwillcontributetothesocialdevelopment.（用不同的词性改写）

18.Weshouldtaketheresponsibilityforprotectingourenvironment.（用更动态的词替换）

19.Opponentssaycapitalpunishmentdoesnotaffectmurderrates,butonlyraisesunhealthyinterestinexecutions.（用恰当的近义词替换）

20.Theboylookedatthestrangersinanangryway.（用更动态的词替换）

I’dliketomakeeveryefforttopublicizetheideathatwasteisdisgraceful,andcallonallmyschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.

I’msureyouwillfindawell-qualifiedcandidateforthepositioninthatafewpeoplearemoresuitablethanI.

Peoplewithskillinsocialrelationsadmittheirmistakes,andtaketheirshareofblame.

Theabolitionofcapitalpunishmentwillbenefittheharmonyofthesociety.

Ifstudentsdevelopthehabitofwaste,itwillundoubtedlyburdentheirparentsheavily.

Aboveall,itteachesusthatweshouldn’tbeoveranxiousforquickresults.

7.EatingDumplingontheEveofLunarNewYearisanationalhabitinChina.（用恰当的近义词替换）

EatingDumplingontheEveofLunarNewYearisanationalcustominChina.

Itisreportedthatteenagesmokingsoars.

Withthecombinationofallpeople’sknowledge,wecanbringoutabettersolutionassoonaspossible.

However,thoughtosomeextentcelebritiesareglamorous,mostofthemleadverystressfullives.

Nuclearproliferationisalwaysthetopissuetheparticipantshavetodiscussatthiskindofmeeting.

Foronething，celebritiesdon’towntheprivacylikeanordinaryperson.

Collegestudents,forthemostpart,cannotstrikeabalancebetweenstudyandtheirpart-timejobs.

Thetermcanbehelpfultomyquestionsandproblems,thusincreasingmyworkefficiency.

Thelinguistsspendagreatdealoftimeinobservinghowpeopletalkintheirdailycommunication.

Insteadofblindlyfollowingthem,weshouldobservethemcarefullyandanalyzedthemcritically.Throughthecarefulobservationandcriticalanalysis,wemayidentifytheconceptionsthatwillcontributetothesocialdevelopment.

Weshallonlyfollowthosecontributiveconceptionstothesocialdevelopment.

Weshouldshouldertheresponsibilityforprotectingourenvironment.

Opponentssaycapitalpunishmentdoesnotaffectmurderrates,butonlyarousesunhealthyinterestinexecutions.

Theboyangrilystaredatthestrangers.

在日常生活中注意省钱的好处

最近，关于人们（包括学生）是否应该在日常生活中省钱的问题引起了人们热烈的辩论。

一些人认为这样做不好，因为这样人们就成不了聪明的消费者了。

但是，在我看来，在日常生活中省钱利大于弊。

首先，省钱是一种美德，这种美德会使我们终生受益。

省钱的好处很多，尤其是在整个世界的经济状况都不是特别好的状况下，挣钱比从前要难了。

节约花钱这种良好习惯会帮助人们度过眼前这个困难时期或他们生活中的其它资金困难时期。

有这种意识的人们在决定买东西之前会三思。

这种意识对于学生的帮助也很大，因为他们主要依靠父母的经济支援。

当他们脑海中有这种意识，他们一定会避免乱花钱的。