英语改错文档格式.docx

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DearTracy，

AlthoughI'

m16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreats76.

measacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.77.

Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeabout78.

leavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthis79.

alltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexampletometo80.

follow.Butheoftensays：

“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”81.

Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，82.

makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’t83.

bearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimes84.

totalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.85.

Puzzled

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EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashe76.

hasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelps77.

makethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesday78.

morning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewanted79.

toseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatch80.

thenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthathe

forgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunless81.

hesawthesea.Hegotoffatthenextstation,andhadtowait82.

alongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrived83.

lateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohim84.

whyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!

”.85.

heshouted.

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Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftfor56.________

meinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computers57.________

aregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcan58.________

bestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappened59.________

intheworldontheinternet.Inthepast,peoplehadtodolotsof60.________

workwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoit61.________

instead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercises62.________

onmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetheright63.________

answers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetoprepare64.________

theexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.65.________

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In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomein76.

themorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whenthelift77.

gottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-aged78.

manenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’s79.

handbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthe80.

Lift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedfortheground81.

floor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretaker82.

atonceandtheybothfollowedthethieftoarestaurant83.

nearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemall84.

Aboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.85.

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OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.76.

Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwas77.

shining;

theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.78.

Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackclouds79.

werecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.80.

Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.81.

Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhich82.

tookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIwasshivering83.

andIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imust84.

havetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobutto85.

stayathomeandwaitforadoctor.

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Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecitylastweek.

Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplace76.

inthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.We77.

supplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityand78.

haveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’s79.

incomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronly80.

didtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoafford81.

atripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneeded82.

most,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothat83.

theycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,84.

mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelp85.

themwithoverseastrade.

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Womenareplayingamuchimportantpartinsocietythanbefore76.

Nowwomenareworkingasteachers,scientistsandevenleaders77.

Almostalljobsthatusedtobedonebymenisdoneperfectly78.

wellbywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddowninsociety79.

Asthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamily80.

hasbeenimprovedaswell.That’shardtofindthewifeisbusywhile81.

thehusbandissittinginanarmchair,watchesTV.Inspiteofall82.

thesechanges,thegreatnumberofmenstillguardtheirrights.83.

Sometimesfewwomenareallowingtoattendimportantmeetings84.

Thisistheproblemweshouldtrytosolveitnow85.

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Hi

Thankyouforyoure-mail!

Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhow76.

weliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereading77.

books,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-78.

ball.Mostofmyfriendsplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybest79.

friendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,but80.

wealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesome-81.

timesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?

Tellmesomething82.

aboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.Ihadalsoliketo83.

knowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIam84.

veryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!

85.

Lisa

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HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,the

childinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatitthatIwasverylovely?

Yes.76.

Yousee,Iwasmakingaface.Therewasahatonmyhead77.

whiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.Iaskedmymotherhow78.

oldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthat79.

Time.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?

Thehouse80.

whichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthis81.

oldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,82.

becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongvery83.

goodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveaway84.

soon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem.85.

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WhenFatherboughtmeacomputerforabirthdaypresent76.__________

inlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computers77.__________

aregettingmoreusefullynowadays.Muchinformation78.__________

canbestoredinit.Wecanlearnwhathaslatelyhappened79.__________

intheworldontheInternet.Peoplehadtodolotsofwork80.__________

whichwasverydanger.Now,computerscandoitinstead.81.__________

Whenanexamiscome,Idoexercisesonmycomputer.82.__________

Thenitwillcorrectthembuttellmetherightanswers.83.__________

Itisconvenientformetopreparefortheexamthan84.__________

before.Thecomputerhavebecomearealfriendofmine.85.__________

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Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfrom

aelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesaw76.__________

thatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoa77.__________

buswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefuse78.__________

tooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,they79.__________

evensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorry 

80.__________

forthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.Respect81.__________

theoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofour82.__________

Chinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepit83.__________

up.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingfromthisincident84.__________

andyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideor85.__________

outsidetheschool.Thankyou.

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Hello!

I’mHannah,istheformerEditorofKiwibox’sLife&

Peoplesection.76.

I’venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&

School.77.

Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:

Iam17-year–oldhighschool78.

juniorfromArizona.I’vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuaryof2004,79.

whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesinclude80.

music,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.81.

I’mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&

Schoolsection.82.

Ilovetoreadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.83.

Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I’d84.

lovetoanswerit.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.85.

Hannah

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HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyand76.

oftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,77.

andin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,78.

acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoyce’scar,andsoon79.

RollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.Oneoftheirfirst80.

modelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroke81.

theworld’srecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreaking82.

downonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover￡2toput83.

thecarbackintoperfectcondition.