名师整理最新英语中考写作《观点之辩》专题精讲精练文档格式.docx

名师整理最新英语中考写作《观点之辩》专题精讲精练文档格式.docx

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【常用句型】

1.Theycanalsoteachusthewaytosolvedifferentkindsofproblems.

2.Whydon'

twestudybyourselvesinsteadofhavingprivatetutors?

3.Youcanimproveyourstudybytakingnotesregularly^

4.Forsomestudents...,andfortheothers...

5.Toimproveourstudy,studentsshoulddosomerevision,practisemore,listentotheirteachersmorecarefullyanddotheirhomeworkbythemselves.

6.IthinkthesearethebasicwaysofImprovingstudy.

7.Onewayofimprovingstudyis…

8.Somyconclusionisthat…

9.It’sgoodforusto.

10.Ifwehavelessonsatweekends,wewon’thavethechancetotakepartinactivities.

11.Itisbecause...we...

12....isagoodchancetosolvemanyproblemsandwecanalsolearnextraknowledgethatwecan’tlearnatschool.

【模拟试题】

Privatetutorsinmyeyes

a,isitnecessaryorunnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors?

b,Whydoyouthinkso?

（Giveatleasttworeasons.）

c,What’syoursuggestionofimprovingstudy?

:

【要点分价】

1.学生先审题，确定你自己的观点（切记：

正反两个观点都可以）。

2.陈述至少两条理由来证明你的观点，论据要充分，不要走过场。

3.不要忘了写结尾，且结尾与开头相呼应。

【思路写作】

Ⅰ提出对“请家教”的观点

1.Nowadays,moreandmoreprivatetutorscallmeandletmeattendtheirextraclass,

2.Inmyopinion，itisreallyunnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Why?

Becauseitisnotverydifficultforustostudybyourselves,Wecandealwiththeproblemsonstudybyourselves,

3.Nowadays，mostoftheparentslettheirchildrenhaveprivatetutors,butithinkit’sunnecessary,

4.Itisusualthatsomeofthestudentshaveprivatetutors.

Ⅱ正方观点

It’snecessaryforustohaveprivatetutors

1.Wecangetmuchfurtherknowledgeonsubjectsthatwecan’tlearnfromschool

2.Mecanhavemoretimetocheckwhetherourownstudymethodisgoodornot,andwecanexercisemoreanddealwithproblemsonstudywiththetutors’help

3.Theycanhelpuswithourhomework.Theycanteachushowtoworkoutdifficultquestions.Andtheycanhelpusimproveourscores,too.

4.Itisagoodwaytogooverourlessons.

5.Theycanteachstudentstolearnstudymethods.

6.Thus,mysuggestionofimprovingstudyistohavemorerevision.

Ⅲ反方观点

Itisunnecessaryfornstohaveprivate1tutors

1,Itisjustawasteoftimeandmoney.

2,Itmustbeveryexpensive,itoftencostsusseveralthousandyuanandevenmore.

3.Ifwealwaysdependonprivatestutors,wewon’tbecomeindependentpeople.

4.Ontheotherhand,itisn’tcheapenoughtohaveprivatetutorsandtheymaynotbeashelpfulastheteachersatschool.

5.Havingprivatetutorsisn’tashelpfulashavingclassesinschoolandcostsmuch.What’smore,somestudentsthinkit'

sunnecessarytolistentoteacherscarefullyinschoolbecauseofprivatetutors.

6.Listeningcarefullyinclassisthebestwaytoimproveourstudyandwecanalsodosomepractice.

7.roushouldtryyourbestlomemorizewhattheteacherssaidinclass.Moreimportantly,doasmanyexercisesasyoucan.

8.Ishouldhavemoretimeformyinterestsatweekends.

9.Ifwewenttoimproveourstudy.Weshouldtrytofindsomefituswell.Althoughstudyplaysamajorroleinourlives,itdependsonourselves.

10,Wecanwritedownallthemistakesonanotebookandoftenreadit.

11.Ifwehoveprivatetutors,wewilldependonthemdeeply,andwecan’tsolvetheproblemsbyourselves.

Ⅳ总结

1.Rememberthatprivatetutorsaren’ttheonlywaytoimproveourstudy.

2.Inmyopinion,studyinghard,sleepingmoreandlisteningtoteacherscarefullyarerealwaystoimprovestudy.

3.Sowhydon’twestudybyourselvesinsteadofhavingprivatetutors?

4.Thereisnothingdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.

5.Tosumup.tohaveprivatetutorsisunnecessary.Weshouldstudybyourselves.

6.SoIbelievethathavingaprivatetutorisneveragoodidea..

【范文评讲】

原文稿

Haveprivatetutorsseemtobecomeatrendamongstudentsnowadays.Isupposeit’sunnecessarytohovetutors.Firstofall.It’sreallydifficulttofindatutorbecausemanyofthemarejustcollegestudentsandtheymaybelockofexperience.Secondly,studentswillrelyontheirtutorssothattheywon'

tbeindependentenoughtoworkouthomeworkproblemsthemselves.Inmyopinion,studentsconasktheirownteachers.Theycanalsodiscussproblemstogether.Iftheyfollowsuchkindsofsuggestions,theycanimprovetheirstudy.

【点评与评分】

作者对这篇文章的整体布局合理，并恰当地运用了一些有用的词组和从句，使文更具有文采，按中考作文20分计算，虜于第一档的文章，可得16〜18分。

需改进之处：

1.应用.动词不定式Tohaveprivatetutors..作主语作为文章开头，开门见山地拉开文章的序幕。

2.1supposeit’sunnecessarytohavetutors.在这句话前用上转折词however,起到承上启下的作用。

3.在findatutor中加上professional,突显是更为专业的家教。

4,inmyopinion,studentscanasktheirownteachers.这句话的目的是学生向自己的老师请求帮助，所以加上forhelp。

5.iftheyfollowsuchkindsofsuggestions,theycanimprovetheirstudy,结束句中，把can改成may，表示有提高学习的可能性，而不是强迫性地去提高学习。

修改稿

Tohaveprivatetutorsseemstobecameatrendamongstudentsnowadays.However,Isupposeit’sunnecessarytohavetutors.Firstofallit’sreallydifficulttofindaprofessionaltutorbecausemanyofthemarejustcollegestudentsandtheymaybelackofexperience.Secondly,studentswillrelyontheirtutorssothattheywon’tbeindependentenoughtoworkouthomeworkproblemsthemselves.Inmyopinion，studentscanasktheirownteachersforhelp.Theycanalsodiscussproblemstogether.Iftheyfollowsuchkindsofsuggestions,theymayimprovetheirstudy.

【范文选登】

1.Ithinkitisnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Theprivatetutorscanhelpuswhenweareintrouble,Theycanalsoteachusthewaytosolvedifferentkindsofproblems,Besides,1thinkIwilllearnmysubjectsmuchmoreeasilyifIhaveaprivatetutor.Privatetutorsinmyeyesarehelpfulandnecessary.

2.Ithinkitisnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Forsomestudentswhichhavepoormarks,theyneedprivatetutorstoreviewtheknowledgewhichtheycan’tunderstandForsomeothers,theyneedprivatetutorstogivethemmorepracticeandinformationtostudybetterandfaster.Toimproveourstudy,studentsshoulddosomerevision,practisemore,listentotheirteachersmorecarefullyanddotheirhomeworkbythemselves.1thinkthesearethebasicwaysofimprovingstudy.

3.Nowadays,manyofmyclassmateshaveprivatetutors.Inmyopinion.itisunnecessaryforstudentstohaveprivatetutors.Therearetworeasonsforthis.First,theprivatetutorshelpyousolvedifficultproblemssothatyoudon’tsolvethembyyourself.Gradually,youwillbepooratthinking.Youprobablydoyourhomeworkwellbutdobodyinyourlest.Secondly,lohaveprivatetutorscostsmuch.IIisdifficultforyourparentstoearnmoney.Ifyoucanstudywellbyworkingharder,whynotsavethemoney?

Aneasywaytoimprovestudyistoconcentrationinclass.Thethingsteacherssayarealwaysveryimportant.Atnight,youshouldgooverwhatyouhavelearnt.Ifyoutakemyadvice,youwillgetgoodmarks.

4.Istronglyopposeprivatetutors.Theyareunnecessaryatall.Iadmithavingaprivatetutorcanbeofsomehelp,butit’seasytogotheoppositewaywhenparentschooseabadprivatetutor.Iheardthataprivatetutorofonestudenttaughthimhowtosolveaprobleminextremelydifficultways.Ofcourseitwastoodifficultforthestudentstounderstand.Thereforehisscoreonlywentfrombadtoworse.Apartfromthatsomeprivatetutorsaskforahugeamountofmoneyforolesson.Privatetutorsareexpensiveandcanmisleadthestudents.That’swhytheyareunnecessary.

Inmypointofview,improvingstudylargelydependsonstudents’interestinthelessonandtheirdesireofbeinggood.Sotryingtostayinterestedandworkinghardarethekeystosuccess.

【范文链接】

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Myviewsonbringingmobilephonesloschool

a.Withthedevelopmentofmodernscience,moreandmerepeoplehovetheirownmobilephones.Ialsohaveamobilephone.Frommypointofview,it’snecessaryforstudentstobringmobilephonestoschool.Foronething,mobilephonescanhelpustocommunicatewithourparentssoeasilythattheywon’tworryaboutus.Foranotheraspect,mobilephonesarecapableofconnectingtotheInternet.Wecangainagreatdealofinformationfromit.

Tosumup.theadvantagesofusingmobilephonesaremorethanthedisadvantages.Thus,Ithinkit’snecessarytobringmobilephonestoschool.

b.Nowadaysyoucanseealmosteverystudentbringingamobilephonetoschool.Butlthinkitisreallyunnecessary.

Firstly,itmightgetstolen.Therefore,studentshavetospendalotoftimetakingcoreofit.Secondly,manystudentsplaygamesonitaftereachlessonandTheyusemobilephonestocheatduringexams.What'

sworse,studentswon'

tbeabletoconcentrateontheirstudieswithamobilephonearound.

Althoughmobilephonescanbringalotofconvenienceintoourlives,weneedtohaveself-controltomakebetteruseofit.Ifstudentsreallyneedtobringomobilephoneloschool,theycangiveittotheirteachersduringschooltime,liwedon’tuseiiwell,itwillhavebadeffectsonourstudies.

c.Asweallknow,mobilephoneshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinourlives.Withthehelpofthem,wecancommunicatewitheachothermoreeasily.SoIthinkstudentsshouldbringmobilephonestoschool.Firstofall,itcanhelpusalot.Wecanuseitasa