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不见不散
Bethereorbesquare.
IfIdon’tmeetyou,Iwon’tleave.
Iwon’tleaveuntilIseeyou.
改错练习
1.Especially,youcanseethecutepandas,whichhavegoodmannersandkindtovisitors.*（改为arekindtovisitors）
2.Nanjinghasalotofplacesofinterest.SuchasXuanWuLake,…*（改为,suchas）
3.Mixtheflourwithwater,waituntilitgetsbigger,cutitintopieces.*（改为andcut）
4.Hecameon,andstoodinfrontofthegirl,saidthatitwasnicetoseeyou.*（将and置于said之前）
3.长句V.S.短句
Mr.YufailedtwiceintheNMT.
Mr.Yu,whoiscurrentlythepresidentoftheNewOrientalEducation&
TechnologyGroup,failedtwiceintheNMT,whichisthenationalmatriculationtestintendedforthoseseniorhighschoolgraduateswhowishedtostudyintheuniversitiesandcolleges.
Almostimmediatelyhebegantocomplainabouttheweather,foreventhoughitwasstillsummer,itrainedcontinuallyanditwasoftenbitterlycold.
Continually与continuously区别
Still,hecouldnothelpthinkingthatifanythingshouldhappen,thenearestpersonhecouldcontactbyradio,unlesstherewasashipnearby,wouldbeonanisland885milesaway.
练习：
翻译词句为中文
答案：
他禁不住寻思起来，要是果真有什么意外，除非附近有条船，他用无线电能联系上的最近的人远在885英里以外的岛上。
4.从句V.S.分句
CanyouansweraquestionwhichIwanttoaskandwhichispuzzlingme？
译文：
我有一个问题弄不懂，想请教你，你能回答吗？
汉语用三个分句表达原文的意思，显然效果很好，如果译成：
你能回答一个使我弄不懂而又想问你的问题吗
⏹主语从句；
Whatweseeinfrontofusseemstobeahandsomeboy.
⏹表语从句；
That’swhoteachesusEnglishreadingthiswinter.
⏹定语从句；
Beijing,whichislocatedinthenorthofChina,ishis
hometown.
⏹同位语从句；
Thenewsthatheisjustover25yearsoldandhasbeenmarriedreallysurprisesallofus.
⏹宾语从句；
Buthetoldusthatitwasnottrue.
⏹状语从句；
Wheneverweaskedhisactualage,healwayssmiledwith
kindness.
⏹感叹句
Whatalovelyteacherheis!
Howlovelyheis!
5.多代词V.S.多名词
⏹人称代词，替换前文出现的人名
⏹物主代词my,his,her,mine等
⏹指示代词this,that,these,those等
⏹疑问代词what,when,which,where等
Assimpleasthequestionmayseem,itrepresentsthedoubtofmostpeoplehere.
⏹关系代词，引导定语从句
⏹反身代词
⏹不定代词
Heisverybrave.（rather?
Quite?
）---Nothingcouldmakehimfeelscared.
6.多被动V.S.多主动
1）不清楚动作的执行者
Thewindowwasbrokenandabroomwasleftonthefloor.
2）强调客观发生的事实，淡化句子的主语
Newton’stheorieshadbeenreplacedwithEinstein’sandourunderstandingoftheuniversehadbeenchanged.
3）出于修辞的原因，更好地安排句子结构
Iwenttothepartyyesterday,andwasaskedbymyfriendtosingafewsongs.
还有其他常用的被动语态句型（录音里没有说，可以作为补充材料提供）
⏹Itissaidthat...据说……
⏹Itisbelievedthat...据认为……
⏹Itisreported/estimated/suggestedthat...据报道,估计,有人建议……
⏹Itisagreedthat...人们同意……
⏹Itmustbepointedoutthat...必须指出……
⏹itmustbeadmittedthat...必须承认……
⏹Itmustberealizedthat...必须认识到……
⏹Itwillbeseenfromthisthat...由此可知……
⏹Itis（generally）consideredthat...大家（普遍）认为……
写作技巧之如何用词
1.应用高级词汇
Ultimately,awesome,terrific等
例子JohnsonwillcometoChinaaround28th,October.---JohnsonisexpectedtocometoChinaaround28th,China.
Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.---Thequestionisreallyconfusing.
Hehadtofaceallthepotentialdifficulties.---Hehadtocopewithallthepotentialdifficulties.
练习Ourschoolliesinthesuburbofthecity.（belocatedin）
Evenifdinnerlooksalittlebitterrible,itdoesn’tmeanitwilltastethatway.（looksdisgusting）
Ican’tfindanywaytosolvetheproblem.（solutions）
Nomatterhowmuchyoulearn,thereisalwayssomethingyoudon’tknow.（somestuff）
2.同义词的使用
例子Itisveryinteresting.---amusing;
Itisgreatfun.
Lastsummer,IvisitedNewYorkwithmyparent.---paidavisitto/toured
练习Thatisagoodidea.---great/brilliant
Heisakindfriend.---Heiskindtous.
3.使用短语代替单词
例子SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.---cameupwith/thoughtof
Takeamomenttoseewhatishappeningaroundyou.---takingplace/goingon
Everyoneshoulddohisorherbest.---doone’sutmost/makeeveryeffort
练习Heisafamousteacher.---Heiswell-knownasadancer.
Totwelve-year-oldHannah,thisanswerwastoodifficulttounderstand.---notmakesenseatall
（请忽视这句话录音，谢谢）Generally,ourfriendshipremainedwithinfourclassroomwalls.---
Whatyoudowillbeveryimportant.---Whatyoudowillmakeadifference.
如何表达“喜欢”
词语like,love,enjoy,prefer,sthisawesome/wonderful
短语beinterestedin,takeaninterestin,befondof,bekeenon,bepleasedwith,carefor,takealikingfor
句型I’dliketodo;
sthiswhatI’mfondof;
sthismyfavorite;
I’dfeellikedoing.
第二课
了解简单句、并列句和复合句
简单句
定义：
只包含一个主谓结构的句子叫做简单句,句子成分是由词或短语来充当的
Iusedtocookmyownfoodinthepast.
Cook:
EverymorningIgotupveryearlyatabout6o’clock.Iwashedmyfaceandbrushedmyteeth,andafterthat,Icookedmyfather,mymotherandmyself.Icookedthemeveryday.
Cookforsb./cookbreakfast
Itbecomesnearlyimpossibletocatchupwithher,theNo.1studentinourclass.
并列句
包含两个或多个互不依从的主谓结构，通常由一个或多个并列连词来连接的句子叫做并列句。
CometotheEnglishcorner,andyou’llhavegreatfunhere.
并列连词和分号是并列句的标志，是区别简单句与并列句的根本。
1.联合关系的并列句由and,or,neither…nor和notonly…butalso/aswell等连接
Henotonlycleanstheroom,butalsowashestheclothes.
2.转折结果关系的并列句由but,however,while,yet,so,therefore,for等连接
复合句
包含两个或多个主谓结构，并且，其中一个主谓结构充当主句，另一个或多个主谓结构为从句，充当该主句的主语、表语、宾语、定语或状语，这样的句子叫做复合句。
简单句五大基本句型
主谓句型
--Doyou______take______tobeyourlawfulwife/husband,tohaveandtoholdfromthisdayforward,forbetterorforworse,forricherorforpoorer,insicknessandinhealth,toloveandtocherish,tilldeathdoyoupart？
--Ido.
⏹该句型延伸形式为：
主＋不及物＋状语Thedooropenssuddenly.
There+不及物＋主语Therecomesatallguy.（区别gay）
主+不及物＋不定式Hewantstoseethegirl.
主系表句型
Helookshandsome/Youlookbeautiful.
look,seem,touch,sound,feel,smell
常见的“It…”句式也是属于第二基本句型
1．It+be+adj./n.+tov…（不定式）
例：
Itissurprisingtoseehimatthewedding.
Itismydutytotakecareofyou,mydear.
2．It+be+adj.+for+sb.+toV…
Itisdifficultforustobetogether.
Itisverysweetofyoutosendmethegreetingcard.
主谓宾句型
Iloveyou.
该句型谓语必须为及物动词吗？
Helooksatthegirlsilently.
主谓宾宾
Hegivesthegirlaring.
Shereturnshimakiss.
call,give,send,sell,lend,teach,write,show,return,bring,pass,offer,hand.
有些动词接for:
buy,sing,make,do,play（弹奏，播放）
主谓宾宾补
引导这种句型的动词有let,make,have,see,watch,hear,notice.
补语一般由名词，形容词，副词，动词不定式，分词结构充当。
Youmakemylifecomplete.
Theweddingmakesthegroomsad.
Thehusbandseesthemantakeawayhisbride.
常见的Ithinkit+adj.forsb.todo
Ithinkitimportanttohaveyouinmylife.
如何写记叙文（叙事篇）
以写事为主的记叙文，注意：
1）交待六要素（时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果），
2）描写先后顺序以及记事的相对完整，
3）把握好事情的开始、发展、高潮及结局。
内容：
六要素----When,where,who,what,whyandhow
顺序：
时间顺序或逻辑发展顺序
人称：
第一或第三人称
要求：
语句通顺且连贯，内容表达一致。
⏹…thedooropenssuddenly.
⏹Therecomesayoungman.
⏹Hewantstoseethegirl.
⏹Helookshandsome.
⏹It’ssurprisingtoseehimatthewedding.
⏹It’shisdutytotakecareofher.
⏹It’sdifficultforthemtobetogether.
⏹Iloveyou.
⏹Helooksathersilently.
⏹Hegivesheragoldenring.
⏹Shereturnshimagentlekiss.
⏹Youmakemylifecomplete.
⏹Thismakesthegroomveryangry.
Heseesthemantakeawayhisbride.
三篇学生习作
⏹Suddenly,thedooropened.Therecameagood-lookingyoungman,whowantedtoseethebride.“Iloveyou!
”hesaidtoher.Shefeltsurprisedtomeethimatthewedding.Butitwasdifficultforthemtobetogether.Itseemedtoolate.However,themanslowlyshowedagoldenringtoher,whoreturnedhimagentlekiss.Thismadethegroommad,andfinallyhesawthemantakeawayhisbride.
⏹Whenthedooropenedsuddenly,ahandsomeyoungmancamein.Hewantedtoseethebride.Itwastoosurprising.Thoughitseemeddifficultforthemtobetogether,theystilllovedeachother.Themanhandedslowlyabeautifulringtothegirl,andshereturnedhimakiss.Atthattime,thegroomgotquiteangry.However,hecouldonlyquietlyseethemantakeawayhisbride.Thiswastoobad.
⏹Ahandsomeyoungmanenteredthechurchjustatthattime.Herushedtothebride,whichfrightenedeveryonepresent.Nooneknewwhohewasandwhyhecamehere,exceptthegirl.Hetookoutaglitteringgoldenringandgentlygaveittoher.Tooursurprise,shekissedhimontheforehead.Webegantoknowwhatreallyhappened.Iguess,thegroommusthavebeenratherangryanddisappointed.Itwashisbadday.
第三课
如何写记叙文第二部分（写人篇）
记叙文是以写人、记事、状物为主要内容，以叙述和描写为表达方式的文章。
以写人为主的记叙文，应该注意肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，考生应根据写作的要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。
记叙文要求：
主题明确，内容充实完整；
层次分明，有条有理；
主次分明，详略得当。
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