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一是要求信息点覆盖全面。
至少应当包含：
时间、地点、人物、主要事件（或观点）等。
二是突出了语言的准确性、格式和语域。
下面归纳五大信函写作策略：
1.求职信
开头段：
表明信息来源，说明写作意图（时间、地点）。
主体段：
介绍自己相关的工作经历、学习经历，以此证明你能胜任这个职位（人物）。
次要段：
表明自己申请这个职位的理由（事情）。
结尾段：
等待回音，联系方式。
2.投诉信
说明与收信人的相关性，点明你写作的意图（人物、关系）。
写明投诉的原因，要展开说明，或者讲具体理由，或者谈问题的具体体现方式（事情）。
结束段：
表达你希望上述问题得到尽快解决的强烈愿望，并对有关人员做出的努力表示感谢（时间、地点）。
3.订购信
开篇点出写信的目的，定购你要的东西（事情）。
详细说明你订购货物的规格、大小、颜色、尺寸等（时间、地点）。
表示对方回函以便确认（人物）。
4.咨询信
明确写信的目的，说明写这封信的目的是寻求某信息或帮助（事情）。
询问具体问题，强调所需信息的重要性（时间、地点）。
表达获取信息的强烈愿望，提供联系方式以便收信人与你联系，并对有关人员表示感谢（人物）。
写作建议：
一是，生活中尽量养成使用英文的习惯；
二是，在平时的写作训练中要从严要求；
三是，熟读甚至背诵不同类型的范文。
例文1
DearSir/Madam,ToWhomItMayConcern…Yoursfaithfully
DearMr./Ms/Mrs./Miss（全名/名）,….Yourssincerely/truly
DearTom,…（With）Bestwishes,Yours…
Tommy,…Yours（ever）…
Hai,…Love
第一段
1.问候型Longtimenosee.
2.Ihaven’twrittentoyouforagesbecauseI’vebeensobusyoverthelastyearandIneverseemtohaveaminutetomyself.
3.Longdistanceseparatesnobosomfriends.
4.Thoughwehaveneverseeneachother,yetIhavelongheardofyou.
5.Howniceitwastohearfromyouatlast!
6.告知型Youwillbeverygladtohearthat…
7.WithgreatdelightIlearnedthat…
8.Totellapieceofgoodnews,Ihave/amdoing…
9.Iamwritingthislettertotell/informyouthat…
10.Ihavejustreceivedyourkindletterregarding…
第三段
1.客套型Thanksforyourprecioustime.
2.Thanksagainforyourkindhelp/assistance.
3.Thankyouinadvance.
4.展望型Iamlookingforwardtoseeing/meetingyouhereinShanghaiChina.
5.寄语型Yourtimelyreplytothisletterishighlyappreciatedbyallthepeopleconcerned.
6.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucontactmeassoonaspossible.
7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyousoon.
8.Writetomea.s.a.p.
9.Remember:
Ishallalwaysmyfingerscrossedforyouatanyrate.
10.Shallyoucomeacrossanyproblem,pleasedonothesitatetoletmeknow.
11.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpyouanyfurther.
12.Ihopethisinformationwillhelpyou.
13.Pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation/furtherconfirmation.
14.Itrustthesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.
泛读
P20N23
押题
求职信，投诉信，感谢信，介绍信，临别信，定购信，咨询信。
[原创]六级写作之——第二课（ver.6502）
第二课——对立观点
例文
十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——Some
无数的numerous/myriad（amyriadof）
大量的Agreat/large/huge/（in）considerable/significant/noticeablenumber/amount/quantity/portionof
对半的almost/nearly/some/closeto/approximatelyhalfof
大多的the（vast/overwhelming）majorityof
一些/另一些（抽象意义）：
some–others,majority–minority
十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——people
公众thepublic
各行各业peoplefromallwalksoflife/thecircle/community/walkofeducation
学生examinees/testees/students
特殊人群readers/drivers
支持/反对者followers–objectors,dissenters–consenters
参与者participants/candidates/interviewees
十大闪光点之三——“一些人认为”——think
认为assume/argue/hold（theopinion）/claim/suggest/declare/say/assert/state/believe/insist/maintain/doubt/suspectthat
支持give/express/show/demonstrateone’ssupportfor
赞成/反对vote/ballotfor/against
castone’svote/ballot
for/against
sidewith/standonthesideof
接受taketheadvise/followthesuggestion
/
accepttheopinion/ideathat
意见是one’sviewpointisthat/bewiththeviewthat
十大闪光点之一——提问法
A.直接提问法B.间接提问法C.连续提问法
十大闪光点之二——总结法
1.玫瑰Allroseshavethorns.
2.花园Nogardeniswithoutweeds.
3.金币Everycoinhas2sides.
4.利剑Everyswordhas2edges.
5.利弊Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantages.
6.众口It’shardtopleaseall.
7.仁智Somanypeople,somanyminds.
8.伟人Greatmindsthinkalike.
9.毒肉Oneman’smeatisanotherman’spoison.
10.过及Throwthebabyoutwiththebathwater.
第一段：
1.背景法Alongwiththeadventof…
2.AsChinesesocietydevelops,greaterimportanceisattachedto…
3.Goneisthedays/years/age/period/era/timesinwhich/whenpeopleregard/take/consider/thinkof/takesth.asanew/strange/radical
blessing
curse
phenomenon
/concept/notion/creation/invention
4.提问法Isitablessingoracurse?
5.总结法Admittedly,therearemeritstobothsidesoftheargument.
6.Allroseshavethorns.
7.Nogardeniswithoutweeds.
8.Answersshallfindithardtopleaseall,astheoldsaygoes.
9.Astheproverbgoes:
“Everycoinhasitstwosides”,___isnoexception.
10.Astowhetheritisablessingoracurse,however,peopletakedifferentattitudes.
11.Atpresent,somepeoplethink____,whileothersclaim____.
Bothsideshavetheirmeritsanddrawbacks.
12.Consensushasneverbeenreachedonthisissue.
13.Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantages.
14.组合句型Astheproverbgoes:
"
Somanypeople,somanyminds."
itisquiteunderstandablethatpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsputdifferentinterpretationsonthesameissueofsth.
第二段
1.Ontheonehand/Foronething…
2.Supportersfirmlysuggestthat…
3.Themajorityisinfavoroftheidea/pointoutthefactthatsth.isbeneficialto…
4.Thesepeopleholdtheviewthat…
5.Thunderousapplausecouldbeheardtomaintaintheideathat…
6.因果法Theyalsoarguethatsthishelpfulto…
7.数据法Accordingtoarecentsurvey,…
1.Onetheothersideofthecoin/Ontheotherhand/Foranother
2.Adversecriticismcomplainsthat…
3.Criticismcouldalsobenoticedtoshowpeople’sconcernover…
4.Discommenders/Antiscouldnotconcurwiththeformerbyinsisting…
5.因果法Theminority,however,standsonadifferentground.
Theycomplainthatitdoesharmtosth.
6.Moreover,theysuggest,sth.mightexertnegativeeffectson…
7.举例法Acaseinpoint,…
第四段
1.单刀式Allthingsconsidered,aunshakableconclusioncouldbesafelydrawnthat…
2.Asismentionedabove,…
3.Balancingtheadvantagesanddisadvantages/negativeeffectsandpositiveeffectsof…Iintendtostandonthesidethat…
4.Basedontheevidencebeforeme,Iamboundtoaccepttheviewpointthat…
5.Giventhefactorslistedbefore…
6.Iamwiththeviewthat/Iaminclinedtostandonthesidethat/Iwouldliketovotefortheformer/latterideathat/Iprefertheformer/latterviewpointthat…
7.对比式Inotetheadvantage/negativeeffect/influence/drawbackofsth,butthisalonecouldnotsubstantialoutweighthepositiveeffect/influence/merit/disadvantageofitasawhole.
8.展望式Lookingahead,wecansaywithfullconfidencethatChinawillraiseitseconomicandsocialdevelopmenttoanewleveldespiteofthecurrentdifficulties.
P11N2,4,7,8,25
电脑，电子辞典，留学，汽车，压力
[原创]六级写作之——第三课（ver.6502）
第三课——单一观点
十大闪光点之四——从句（主语，宾语，表语，定语，状语，同位语）
宾语从句——引出观点
定语从句——引出人事物
十大闪光点之五——并列句
1.简单连词：
and,or,but,if,because
2.关联连词：
both…and…,notonly…butalso…
3.短语连词：
asif,aslongas,inorderthat
4.分词连词：
supposing,considering,provided
2十大闪光点之六——理由段公式
1.序列词：
the序数词/firstandforemost/lastbutnotleast
theother/another
athird
oneof
2.+n.：
point/thing/fact/factor
merit/demerit/positiveinfluence/advantage
rule/principle
3.+VP：
toremember/tobekeptinmind/oughttobetakenintoconsiderationshallbeborne/keptinmind/couldnotbeforgot/neglected/ignored
worthmentioning
ofgreatimportance/significance
holdingthebalance
Iwouldliketomention/thattalks/thatholdswater
4.+isthat
5.+从句
十大闪光点之七——理由词汇
工作学习
1.昂贵：
costly,expensive,lavish,extravagant
2.帮助：
helpful,useful,beneficial,think/speak/praisehighlyofsth.,assist,free…from,makecontributionto,doone’sbitto
3.便利：
efficiency,convenience,easy,handy,simple,comfortable,ready-to-use,friendlyinterface
4.节省：
save/waste
time/money/space/energy,time-consuming,“Livenow,paylater.”
5.节约：
economical,thrifty/thrift,frugal/frugality
6.经验：
socialexperience,enterthesociety,accumulate,inexperienced,green-hand,stepbystep
7.提高：
improve,enhance,develop,upgrade,better,perfect,upgrade,advance,makemuchprogress/improvementin…（field）
8.重视：
payattentionto,attachimportanceto,lay/giveemphasison,giveemphasisto,liststh.onthetopofagenda,rankthefirst,sth.comesfirst
9.重要：
important,indispensable,essential,crucial,decisive,vital,fundamental,decisive,critical,inseparable,beoflessimportance,becomeone’sutmostconcern
10.信任：
credit,decentbackground,world-renowned,trustworthy,respect,honor
性格态度
1.独立：
independence,individuality,byoneself,standonone’sownfeet
2.目标：
ambition,strategicgoal,aim,realize,dreamscometrue,target
3.能力：
competition,capability,ability,proficiency,creativity,tolerance,perseverance,capacity
4.缺点：
overbearing傲慢的,arrogant,selfish,dependent,conservative保守的,isolated,self-centered,indifferent,neglect,paynoattentionto,turnablindeyeto,turnacoldshouldertosb.,turnadeafearto
5.团结：
cooperate,teamspirit,teamplayer,considerate,thoughtful,sociable,worktogether,jointeffort
6.信心：
（self）confidence,convince
十大闪光点之七——理由词汇
环境卫生
1.肮脏：
dirty,filthy,messy,atsixesandsevens
2.环境：
environment,surroundings,workingcondition
3.卫生：
publichealth,hygiene
4.污染：
pollute,pollutant,poisonous,harmful,contaminate,contaminant
安全健康
1.安全：
insafe,free…from
2.疾病：
disease,illness,attack,seriousthreat,spread
3.健康：
mental/physicalhealth,physicalwell-being,strong,energetic,keepfit,figure,buildup,lose
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