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Jun10,2009

RE:

HAZMAT-D-09-00655

DearEditor，

Wewouldliketothanktheeditorforgivingusachancetoresubmitthepaper,andalsothankthereviewersforgivingusconstructivesuggestionswhichwouldhelpusbothinEnglishandindepthtoimprovethequalityofthepaper.Herewesubmitanewversionofourmanuscriptwiththetitle“………………………”,whichhasbeenmodifiedaccordingtothereviewers’suggestions.EffortswerealsomadetocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheEnglishofthemanuscript.Wemarkallthechangesinredintherevisedmanuscript.

Sincerelyyours,

………………..,Ph.D.Professor

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Thefollowingisapoint-to-pointresponsetothetworeviewers’comments.

Reviewer#1:

General 

comments:

ThepaperpresentsaninterestingexperimentalinvestigationtoassessthephotocatalyticdegradationofpolyethyleneplasticwithgoethiteunderUVirradiation.Theresearchworkisclearlypresentedbuttheconclusions,theintroductionandotherpartsofthepaperrelatetheresultsobtainedwithunjustifiedclaimsabouttheimpactofthework.Inaddition,thebackgroundinformationprovidedintheintroductionpartneedssignificantenrichment.Inparticular:

Answer:

Thankyouforthecommentsonthepaper.WehaverevisedthemanuscriptassuggestedsinceweconsiderthatsomesentencesordescriptionsintheConclusionpartarenotsoaccuratebasedontheresults. 

Page3,line46:

recyclingisnotavailable…

Eventhoughalargeamountofagriculturalplasticwasteinburntorburiedinthefields,somequantitiesofspecificcategoriesofgoodqualityagriculturalplasticwastearerecycledinseveralcountrieswhileresearcheffortsandprojectsareinprogresstoimprovethecorrespondingpercentage.Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature.

Yes.Youropinionsinspiredusandwerevisedthemanuscriptaccordingly.Intherevisedpaper,thesentence“Recyclingisnotavailableforeconomy,”waschangedto“Inordertoreducecosts,thethicknessofapplicationagriculturefilmsinsomeregionsinChinaislessthan0.005mmresultindiffculttorecycle,Andbecausetheprocessofrecyclingisexpensiveandtime-consuming,onlyasmallpercentageoftheagriculturalplasticwasteiscurrentlyrecycledattheendofcultivationinChina[4]”（Page3line49-52）.

Page3,line76:

biodegradableandphotodegradable….

Therearedevelopmentsintheareaofbiodegradablematerialsthatindicatetheopposite.Concerningphotodegradablematerials,theyarenotconsideredtorepresentasolutionastheyhavenotbeenproventobebiodegradable.Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature. 

Thankyouforremindingustheimproperdescriptiononthestudy.Wehavetheimproperpartsrevisedaccordinglyandhopethatthisnewmanuscriptwillbeconvincing（Page3line52-55）.

Page4,line65:

findaneco-friendly….

Thebesteco-friendlydisposalforagriculturalplasticwasteisrecyclingandfornon-recyclablematerials,energyrecovery.Degradingmaterialsproducedfromfossilsourcesisnotaneco-friendlydisposal!

Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature.

Thankthereviewerforthecomments.We’verecognizedthatsomeofthedescriptionsinthepreviouscopywerereallynotsoaccurateandalittlebitarbitraryduetoourpoorEnglishlevelandthestudyonrecentliterature.Afterconsultingmorereferences,wethereforerevisedpapertobemorereasonableandconvincing.

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tocarbondioxideandwater….

Conversionoffossiloilbasedmaterialsintocarbondioxideandwaterismuchworsethanconvertingrenewable-basedmaterialsintocarbondioxideandwater 

Thankthereviewerforthecomments.We’verecognizedthatthisdescriptioninthepreviouscopywerenotaccurate,duetoourpoorstudyonrecentliterature.Thesentence“itisveryimportanttofindaneco-friendlydisposalofplasticwastewheretheydegradetocarbondioxideandwaterunderthesunlightirradiationwithoutproducingtoxicbyproducts.”hasbeendeleted.

Page6,line112:

volatileproducts….

Definetheproducts.

WehavedefinedthevolatileproductsinPage6line124-125.

Page9,line185:

eco-friendlydisposal….

Theclaimsoftheauthorsthatthistechniqueisaneco-friendlyonearenotjustified.Theconclusionsandotherpartsofthepaperneedtoberewrittenandlimitthescopeofthepresentedresearchworktothetechnicalobjectiveswithoutderivingunjustifiedgeneralconclusionsandclaimsabouttheimpactofthiswork.

Thankthereviewerforthecomments.We’verecognizedthatthisdescriptioninthepreviouscopywerenotaccurate.Thesentence“Thedevelopmentofthiskindofcompositepolymercanleadtoaneco-friendlydisposalofpolymerwastes.”waschangedto“Thepresentpaperintendstostudygoethiteasphotocatalytstfordegradatingplastic.Furtherattentioncouldbefocusedontheapplicationofthetechnique.”（Page9line192-194）.

Reviewer#3:

1.TitleandabstractshouldindicatethattheworkhasbeendonewithPE-Goethitecompositefilm.

Yoursuggestionisgreatlyappreciated.Weagreeandthereforechangethetitleto:

Solid-phasephotocatalyticdegradationofpolyethylene–goethitecompositefilmunderUV-lightirradiation.

2.Pleaserevisethefirstparagraphof'

Introduction'

. 

Itisdifficulttounderstand. 

Ingeneral,thelanguageofthepapershouldberevisited.

TheIntroductionparthasbeenrewrittenbothincontentsandinEnglish.Weparticularlyrevisedsomesentencessincetheyarenotcorrectorsoconfusing.

3.Materialsandmethods-Detailsofthechemicalstobefurnished

Thereviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandthedetailsofthechemicalshasbeenshowninPage4line79-83.

4.CharacterizationarerequiredforPE（Molecularweight,grade）andGoethiteprepared（particlesize,BETsurfacearea,SEM-EDSandXRD）

Thereviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandthecharacterizationforPEhasbeenshowninPage4line79.TheGoethiteprepared（particlesize,BETsurfacearea,SEMandXRD）hasbeenreportedbyLiaoetal.（2007）,WeclarifythatintherevisedmanuscriptinPage5line91-93.

5.Aschematicdiagramoftheexperimentalsetuptobegiven

Thereviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandaschematicdiagramoftheexperimentalhasbeengiveninFig.1inthepresentpaper.TheoriginalFig.1.waschangedtoFig.2andFig.3.

6.Results-Arateequationshouldbeproposedfromthetime-weightdata

Thereviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandtherateequationaschematicdiagramoftheexperimentalhasbeengiveninTable.1inthepresentpaper.

7.Afewdataarerequiredtoshowtheinfluenceofprocessparameterssuchasgoethiteloading,intensityofUVradiation.

Reviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandtheinfluenceofgoethiteloadinghasbeenshowninFig.2inthepresentpaper.AndtheinfluenceofintensityofUVradiationhasbeenshowninFig.3inthepresentpaper.TheoriginalFig.2waschangedtoFig.4andTheoriginalFig.3waschangedtoFig.5inthepresentpaper.

8.Untilotherintermediatesareisolated,uptoEqn.（7）（line162）issufficient.

Reviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandWechangedtheEqnsasrecommended.Eqs.（8）-（12）aredeletedandEqn.（7）waschangeto“–（CH2CH2）–+.OH→degradationproducts”（Page9line184）.

9.Figure3and4:

3pairsarerequired,namely（i）OnlyPEfilmbeforeandafterirradiation,（ii）PE-Goethitefilm（0.4wt%）-beforeandafterirradiation（iii）PE-Goethitefilm（1.0wt%）-beforeandafterirradiation.

Reviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandtheoriginalFig.3and4waschangedtoFig.5inthepresentpaper.

10.Point3aboveisalsoapplicableforSEMphotographs.PleaserearrangeandclearlymarkthedifferencebetweenthefilmsbeforeandafterirradiationforbothSEMandFTIRresults.

Thankthereviewerandeditor’sforthecomments.Duringtherevisionofthepaper,wedidasupplementaryexperimentgotsomenewSEMphotographs,whichhasbeenshowninFig.4inthepresentpaper.AndTheFTIRresultshasbeenrearrangedinFig.5inthepresentpaper,respectively.

11.Itshouldbeclearlymentionedintheconclusionthatthedegradationwasmorewhengoethiteloadingandintensityoflightbothweremore

Thereviewerandeditor’ssuggestionshavebeenadoptedandtheconclusionshasbeenchangedinPage9line192-198.

1. 

DearProf.XXXX, 

ThankyouverymuchforyourletterandthecommentsfromtherefereesaboutourpapersubmittedtoXXXX（MSNumberXXXX）. 

Wehavecheckedthemanuscriptandreviseditaccordingtothecomments.Wesubmitheretherevisedmanuscriptaswellasalistofchanges. 

Ifyouhaveanyquestionaboutthispaper,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow. 

Sincerelyyours, 

Dr.XXXX 

Resp*****etoReviewer1:

Thanksforyourcommentsonourpaper.Wehaverevisedourpaperaccordingtoyourcomments:

1.XXXXXXX 

2.XXXXXXX 

2. 

DearProfessor***, 

Re:

An***RotatingRigid-flexibleCoupledSystem（No.:

JSV-D-06-***） 

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Manythanksforyouremailof24Jun2006,regardingtherevisionandadviceoftheabovepaperinJSV.Overallthecommentshavebeenf