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四种常见的十句作文模式及其句型
四种常见的十句作文模式及其句型
一、原因模式
[说明]
这个模式主要用于：
题目是给出一个图表，或提出一种社会现象，要求说明解释这个图表或现象。
其结构如下：
点题，即概括所要求评论的问题或现象。
具体（如用数据）描写这个问题或现象。
论点句，即对这一问题或现象的基本看法。
造成这一问题或现象的第一个原因。
具体说明第一个原因。
造成这一问题或现象的第二个原因。
具体说明第二个原因。
造成这一问题或现象的第三个原因。
具体说明第三个原因。
结尾。
S1Topic：
S2Problem：
S3Thesis：
S4CauseI：
S5Details：
S6CauseII：
S7Details：
S8CauseIII：
S9Details：
S10Conclusion：
[句型]
S1
Inthelastfewyears,
Inrecentyears,
therehasbeen
Chinahas
experienced
a
a
an
dramaticincrease
growingtendency
upwardtrend
in
retailfoodprice
thecrimerate
thedivorcerate
.
S2
Accordingto
thechart/graph/table,
arecentreport/study
in1997the
number
percentage
rate
of
studentswho...
teenagesmoking
divorce
almostdoubled/tripled
nearlyincreased/jumped
decreased/dropped
has
by10percent
anaverageof10percent
comparedwith
lastyear
10yearsago
.
S3
Thereare
several
anumber
three
of
reasons
causes
forthis
significantincrease
markeddecline
dramaticchange
.
S4
First,
Foronething,
Onereasonis...
S5
S7
S8
Perhapsthe
primary
fundamental
mostimportant
reason
cause
is…
S9
S10Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafely/reasonably
reach
draw
cometo
theconclusionthat…
RisingDivorceRatesinChina
InrecentyearsChinahasexperiencedadramaticincreaseinthedivorcerate.Accordingtothechart,duringthelastdecade,thedivorcerateinbigcitieshasincreasedasmuchasithadinthepreviousthirtyyears.
TheupwardtrendindivorceseemstobeamirrorofsomeimportantchangesinChinesesociety.First,legalchangeshavesimplifieddivorceprocedures,andremovedbarrierstodivorce.Moreandmorepeople,bothyoungandold,arenowbenefitingfrom,eventakingadvantageofthenewlawwhichforthefirsttimeinhistoryallowsacoupletogetdivorcedmerelyforlove'ssake.Second,therehasbeenasignificantchangeinsocialattitudetowardsthedivorcedpersons.Theactofdivorceisnolongerconsideredasocialstigma.Finally,thechangeinpersonaleconomicactivitiesalsofacilitatesdivorce.Theunprecedentedsocialmobilityinthelastl0yearsbothwithinthecountryandacrossthelandhasplacedseverestrainsonmarriedcouples,notonlyintermsofgeographicseparation,butalsopsychologicalchange.
Whateverchangesleadingtotheriseindivorcerates,thefactandthestatisticsalonereflectthechangeinpeople'straditionalviewofmarriageandfamilylife.
[范文2]
TheWorldisGettingSmallerandSmaller
（1）Mostofusmayhavesuchexperiences:
whenyougotosomeplacefarawayfromthecitywhereyouliveandthinkyouknownobodythere,youaresurprisedtofindthatyourunintooneofyouroldclassmatesonthestreets.
（2）Perhapsbothofyouwouldcryout,"Whatasmallworld!
"
（3）Whyisthereafeelingthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmaller?
（4）First,fasterandsafermeansoftransporthavegreatlyreduceddistance.（5）InthepastittookpeopletwomonthstocrossthePacificOcean,butnowanairjourneyfromShanghaitoNewYorkCitytakesonlytwentyhours.（6）Second,theadvanceincommunicationstechnologymakesitpossibleforustoknoweverythinghappeningintheworldwithoutleavingourhomes.（7）Justpickupyourtelephoneorpressthekeysofyourcomputer,youcantalktoanyonewithinafewseconds.（8）Finally,politicalandbusinessactivitieshavebroughtpeopleintofrequentcontactwitheachother.（9）Forexample,anAmericancongressmantalkswiththeJapanesePrimeministerinthemorning,attendsaconferenceinAustraliaintheafternoon,andappearsinadinnerpartyinShanghaiatnight.
（10）Obviously,themoreadvancedtechnologyandoursociety,thesmallertheworldwillbe.
[说明]
S1Topic:
点题，即点明所要求说明的问题或现象。
S2Problem:
具体（如用数据）描写这个问题或现象。
S3Thesis:
论点句，即对这一问题或现象的基本看法。
S4CauseI:
造成这一问题或现象的第一个原因或间接原因。
S5Detail1:
具体说明第一个原因。
S6Detail2:
具体说明第一个原因。
S7CauseII:
造成这一问题或现象的第二个原因或直接原因。
S8Detaill:
具体说明第二个原因。
S9Detail2:
具体说明第二个原因。
S10Conclusion:
结尾。
如果解释的原因仅有两个，而不是三个，也可以用下面的结构。
第一、二、十句可和原因模式第一个结构的第一、二、十句互换。
[句型]
S1Recentlythe
phenomenon
problem
of…has
aroused
drawn
publicconcern
generalattention
.
S2
Thechart/graph/table
Theofficialstatistics/report
shows/indicatesthat
lessthan10percentof
morethanone-quarters
oneoutoffour
collegegraduates
teenagers
TVviewers
…
asagainst
comparedwith
since
1996.
S3
Anumberof
Several
factors
causes
could
contributeto
leadto
theproblem.
S4
Oneofmost
commonfactors
primarycauses
isthat…
S5
S6
S7
Another
important
contributing
factor
cause
isthat…
S8
S9
S10
It
mightbetime
quitenecessary
thatsome
attentionshouldbepaid
effortsshouldbemade
stepsshouldbetaken
to
[范文3]
ChangeinPeople'sDiet
（1）Inthelast20years,amarkedchangehastakenplaceonthefamilydiningtable.
（2）Accordingtothegraph,rice,thestaplefoodofmostChinese,isnowplayingalessimportantroleintheirdiet,whiletheconsumptionofhighqualityfoodsuchasmeat,fish,milkandfruithasgreatlyincreased.
（3）Twofactorsmaycontributetothechange.（4）Oneimportantfactoristhatpeoplenowenjoyahigherstandardoflivingthaneverbefore.（5）Intheolddaysfewpeoplecouldaffordmeatandmilkeveryday,whichoftenmeantabigchunkofthefamilyincome.（6）Butnowpeoplehaveenoughmoneytotastearichvarietyoffood.（7）Anotherfactoristhatpeopleoftodaypaymoreattentiontonutrition.（8）Theyarenotmerelycontenttofillthestomach.（9）Theyareseekingthemostreasonabledietwhichwilldogoodtotheirhealth.（10）Inshort,withpeople'sstandardoflivinggettinghigherandhigher,changesintheirdietwillbemoreobviousandgreater.
二、比较模式
[说明]
这个模式主要用于：
题目要求通过比较提出的两个事物，来说明作者的观点，如喜欢哪个，反对哪个。
其结构如下：
S1Topic:
引出要比较的两个事物
S2Thesis:
作者的基本看法
S3Concession:
承认某一事物（A）的优点
S4A'sDisadvantages:
但它的缺点是……
S5DetailI:
具体说明其缺点
S6DetailII:
具体说明其缺点
S7B'sAdvantages:
另一事物（B）的优点
S8DetailI:
具体说明其优点
S9DetailII:
具体说明其优点
S10Conclusion:
结论，表明作者的观点
[句型]
S1
Formostofustoday
Inrecentfewyears
…
S2While/Although…,Ibelieve/prefer…
S3
Itistruethat
Tobesure,
Thebiggestadvantageto…isthat
…
S4
But,therearealsosome
problems
advantages
sideeffects
.
S5Justthink…
S6
Italso
limits
affects
hampers
…
S7
Incontrast
Ontheotherhand
…
S8Althoughitcannotexcelin…,it…
S9Besides…
S10Theadvantageismorethan…,
[范文4]
Forty-oneCats
（1）RecentlyIvisitedaprimaryschoolandwatchedaclassoffortyyoungchildrenlearntodrawacat.
（2）Theclassteacherdrewabigcircleontheblackboardandfortychildrencopieditontheirpapers;theteacherdrewasmallercircleonthetopofthefirstandthechildrendrewinthesameway,alessoncontinuinguntiltherewereforth-oneidenticalcatsintheclassroom.
（3）Tobesure,thisteachingmethodhelpsstudentslearnquicklyandmuchmore.（4）Yetitsadvantageisthatstudentshavefewopportunitiestothinkforthemselves.（5）Thereisnotmuchdiscussion:
theteacherlecturesandthestudentslisten.（6）Theyspendmuchtimerecitingtextsandmemorizingrules,butforgetmostofthemrightafteranexam.（7）Onthecontrary,intheclassroomofWesterncountries,say,America,studentsdon'tmemorizeinformation.（8）Instead,theyworkindividuallyandlearntoformtheirownideasandopinions.（9）Thereisoftendiscussionintheclassroomandalotofreadingafterclass,fromwhichstudentsfindanswersthemselves.
（10）Obviouslythisteachingmethodwillproducearoomfullofuniquecats,eachcompletelydifferentfromothers—amethodwhichcontributesgreatlytothedevelopmentofstudents'personalityandtheircapabilitytosolveapracticalproblem.
[说明]
但是如果所讨论的两个事物既有优点又有缺点，不能绝对赞成哪个，反对哪个，这时可用下面结构：
S1Topic：
引出要讨论的两个事物
S2Thesis
作者的基本看法
S3A'sAdvantages：
A事物的优点，好处
S4DetailI：
具体说明
S5DetailII:
具体说明
S6A'sDisadvantages:
A事物的缺点
S7B'sAdvantages:
B事物的优点、好处
S8Detail:
具体说明
S9B’sDisadvantages:
B事物的缺点
S10Conclusion:
结论，平衡看法
[句型]
S1
…arethetwo
basicwaysinwhich…
commonmethodsto…
S2
Thereareadvantagesanddisadvantagestobothways/methods.
Thetwoways/methodhavetheirdisadvantagesaswellasdistinctadvantages.
S3Thebiggestadvantage/benefit/characteristicis…
S4Forexample,
S5
Anotheradditional
Another
advantage/benefit/characteristicis
S6
Butthe
disadvantage
problem
is…
S7
Bycomparison
Bycontrast
…
S8Itcan…
S9Thereisagainadisadvantage:
S10Inmyopinion,
abalanceofthetwoways/methods
ahybridmethod
…
[范文5]
CollegeExtracurricularActivities
（1）Groupactivitiesandsolitarypursuitsarethetwocommonwaysinwhichourcollegestudentsengageinextracurricularactivities.
（2）Thetwokindsofpastimesservebothasastimulanttomentalrelaxationandatemporaryescapefromthepressureofdailystudies.（3）Groupactivitiesaffordustheopportunitiestomakemanynewfriends.（4）Byplayingaballgame,goingtoadance,orhavingaholidayouting,wecansharewitheachotherknowledge,skillsaswellashappiness.（5）Suchexperiencescontributetoriseinoursociability.（6）Butthedisadvantageisthatourpersonalschedulehastobesubjecttothearrangementsofgroupactivities,andthusfreedomislimited.（7）Bycontrast,solitarypursuitscantakeplaceanytime;youcanreadagoodbookatmidnight,listentoafavoriterecordbetwe
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