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15年考研英语大作文范文
PartB
52.Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressayyoushould
1)describethedrawingbriefly
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and
3)giveyourcomments
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET.(20points)
1.推导图画寓意
手机的出现给生活带来了巨大的变化,对人际交往的负面作用逐渐呈现,如何抵制这样的影响是现代人需要关注的问题。
2.罗列关键词
tablen.餐桌dishn.菜
seatv.坐playwithphones玩手机
smartphone智能手机
face-to-facecommunication面对面交流
contactinreallife真实生活中的交流
3.优秀范文赏析
手机时代的聚会
【参考范文】
Fourfriendsgettogethertohaveadinner.What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.
Thepicturerevealsatypicalsceneformodernpeople.Wheneverpeoplehaveachancetorelax,theywillfishoutphonestoplayforawhile.Thewarmface-to-facecommunicationwhichwastakenforgrantedhasbeenviolentlyruinedbysmartphonesandbecomesaluxury.Itischallengingorevenimpossibleformanypeopletokeepconcentrationonface-to-facecommunication.Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.Unfortunately,itisonlyatheoreticalopinion.Fewpeopleapplyit.
Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.Rationalattitudeshouldbepaidtothemobilephone.Weshouldnotsquanderonalifelessmachinethelimitedandprecioustimewithfriendsandrelatives.Dueimportanceshouldbeattachedtothecontactinreallife.
批判词汇:
weird,indulgein,
beviolentlyruinedby,impossible,
sufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,
unfortunately,controversial,problematicaddiction,
interpersonalisolation,
squandertimeon...,
takearationalattitudeto,
holdarationalattitudetoward,
attachdueimportancetosth.
[精彩句式]
1.What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.
句子成形步骤:
1)写出简单句
Thefourseemnottoknowabouteachother.
Theydon’ttalkwithothers.
Theyonlyplaywithsmartphones.
Itisweird.
2)整合简单句
Itisweirdthatthefourseemnottoknowabouteachother,becausetheydon’ttalkwithothersandonlyplaywithsmartphones.
3)增加表达精确性和美感
What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.
2.Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.
句子成形步骤:
1)Thequalityofcommunicationdeclines.
Peoplearewithfriendsorrelatives.
Peopleshouldshutdownmobilephones.
Moreandmorepeopleagreeaboutit.
2)整合简单句
Asthequalityofcommunicationdeclines,moreandmorepeopleagreethatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhentheyarewithfriendsorrelatives.
3)增加表达精确性和美感
Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.
3.Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.
句子成形步骤:
1)写出简单句
Thesmartphoneiscontroversial.
Thesmartphonecanmakepeoplerelaxed.
Thesmartphonebringsconvenience.
Thesmartphonewillmakepeopleaddicttothephone.
Theaddictiontothephonecausesinterpersonalisolation.
2)整合简单句
Thesmartphoneiscontroversial,whichcanmakepeoplerelaxed,bringconveniencebutwillmakepeopleaddicttothephone,whichcausesinterpersonalisolation.
3)增加表达精确性和美感
Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.
consequentadj.随之发生的;作为结果的必然的
抵挡作文进阶演练
低档作文(7分)
修改范例(15分)
Thepictureabovedepiction1thattwogirlandtwoboy2sit3nearatablehaving4adinnertogether.However,allthem5looking6masseges7intheirmobiles8insteadofeatandtalk9.Howhorribleitis!
Thepictureabovedepicts1thattwogirlsandboys2aresitting3nearatabletohave4adinnertogether.However,allofthem5arechecking6messages7intheirmobilephones8insteadofeatingdishesandtalkingtoeachother9.Howhorribleitis!
Thepicturereflect8whathappening9morefreqently10innowsociety11.It1send2aprofoundmassege3thatyoung4areaddict5tophone6forgetsometimeforrealperson7.They12rather13talkingorplaying14withstranges15ontheinternetthantalkingorplaying16withfriendsorfamilies17.Thisisthehightechnologycanbeadoublesword.18Ononehand,itgivegreatconvenientfor19lifeandwork,butontheotherhand,itgetpeoplefurtherandfurtheraway20.
Thepicture1conveys2aprofoundmessage3thatyoungpeople4areaddicted5tophones6andforgettosparesometimetocommunicatewithrealpersons7.Whatthepicturereflects8happens9morefrequently10intoday’ssociety11.Youngpeople12wouldrather13talkorplaywith14strangers15ontheinternetthando16withfriendsorfamilymembers17.Themobilephonereallyisadouble-edgedsword.18Ononehand,itbringsgreatconvenienceto19lifeandwork,butontheotherhand,itmakespeopledistantfromeachother20.
Ithinkitbestifweuse1ourphone2properandwise3.Whatscreendisply4neverreplace5thefeel6amonghuman7.
Ithinkweshoulduse1ourphones2properlyandwisely3.Whatisdisplayedonthescreen4canneverreplace5thewarmcommunication6amongpeople7.
Unfoldedintheelaboratelypaintedcartoonisathought-provokingscene:
fouryoungstersaresittingtogethertohavetheirgatheringfeast.However,muchoftheirattentionhasbeenattachedtotheirmobilecellphones,totallyforgettingwhattheyaregatheringfor.Justasisputinthecaptionofthiscartoon,itistypicallya“Dinnerpartyinmobileera.”
Thispictureisnaturallyassociatedwithawide-spreadingphenomenonincontemporarysociety—toomuchaddictiontothemobilephones.Indeed,wehaveallsteppedintoaneraofgettingandstayingintouchwithothersthroughtelecommunication.Eachofusseemsclosetoanotherunderthiscircumstance,butwehavetolookattheside-effectofthetechnology:
thehigh-techelectronicproductsalsocutofftheface-to-facecommunication.Tobespecific,inourdailylife,it’snotuncommonthatonbusesorsubways,orwalkingontheroad,weareallplayingwithphonesorpadsforrecreation,suchasreadingnovels,watchingvideosormovies,surfingtheInternet,andsoon,eventhoughwetravelwithourfriends,parentsorlovedone.
Evidently,weshouldtakearationalattitudetowardsthisissue,buthow?
Themediashouldpromotetheawarenessofhealthylifestyleamongthepublic,especiallytheyoung.Meanwhile,socialactivities,eitherincommunitiesoroncampuses,shouldbelaunchedsothatpeoplecangetbacktotherealworld.