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Yours,
Lihua
Muchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto
ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefulloccupiedby
whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswithyour
____.ThereforeIamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour
____.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?
Ihopetoseeyousoon.
IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.
必备词语短语;
apologize
v.
道歉forgive
原谅inconvenience
n.
不便
appointment
n.约定muchtoone’sregret非常遗憾
apologizetosb.forsth./makeanapologytosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉
saysorryto向……说对不起acceptmyapology接受我的道歉
forgivesb.forsth.为某事原谅某人makeupfor弥补;
赔偿
havenointentiontodosth.并非故意做某事
causeyoumuchtrouble给你带来许多麻烦
acceptsb.’ssincereapology接受某人真诚的道歉
misstheopportunity错过机会
fixanothertimefor安排另外一个时间
considermysituation考虑我的情况
必备句型
【闪亮篇首句】
1.Iamwritingtoapologizefor…/Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…
我写这封信是因为……向你道歉。
2.Iwouldliketogiveyoumyapologyfor…
对于……我向你道歉。
3.Iexpressmyregretatbeingunabletodo…
对于未能做……,我表示遗憾。
4.MuchtomyregretthatIamunableto…
让我感到极为遗憾的是自己不能……
5.IoweyouanapologyforthedamageIhavedonetotheflat.
我为损坏房子这件事而向您道歉。
6.IamindeedverysorryforwhatIsaid/did,butbelieveIhadnointentionto…
对于我说的/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。
但请相信,我并非故意要……
7.I’mterriblysorryIcouldn’treplytoyouremailintime.
十分抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。
8.Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.
我十分抱歉没有及时回信。
9.ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechancetogettogether.
错过了在一起的机会,我感到很遗憾。
【出彩中篇句】
1.Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
2.Pleaseacceptmyapologiesformyoversight.
请原谅我的疏忽。
3.Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.
为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。
4.IsincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandthatIoffendedyouunintentionally.
我真心希望你能理解,我并非有意冒犯。
5.AndsoImissedtheappointedtime.
因此我错过了约定的时间。
6.I’mawfullysorryforthesuddenchangeofplanandfeelitagreatpitytomisstheopportunity.
对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉,对错过这个机会感到很可惜。
7.Anyhow,Isincerelyhopethatwecanfixanothertimefor...
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……
【精彩篇尾句】
1.Iwilltrymybesttoavoidthesameaccidenthappeningagaininthefuture.
我将接近全力避免将来再发生同样的事故。
2.Iwilltrytomakeupformyfault.
我将尽力弥补我的过错。
3.Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.
真诚希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
4.Ihopethatyouwillunderstandandforgiveme.
我希望您可以理解并原谅我。
I’msorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethe
changewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.
ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?
Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:
30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
LiHua
DearBob,
Howareyoudoing?
WeplannedtogotothebookstorethisSaturday.Unfortunately,Ican’tmakeit.So,Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyou.
HowIwishIcouldgowithyou!
However,IamchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetitionwithanAmericahighschool,which,youknow,isofgreatimportancetome,forIhavealwaysbeendreamingtohaveachancelikethistoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Asaresult,Ihavenochoicebuttosaysorrytoyou.
HowaboutgoingtothebookshopthisSunday?
ThenbothofuswillbeavailableandIcansharemyexperienceofthecompetitionwithyou.Please.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
2013山东卷
【真题再现】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。
请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
【经典套路】
第一段:
问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:
“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:
“假期安排”部分
第四段:
补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
DearTom,
(问候)Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacation.
(写信背景)
IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay.
(写信目的)
HowIwishIwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.However,Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime,whichisvitalforme.Asaresult,Ihadnochoicebuttocompletelyfocusonmystudy.Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.
(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
Bytheway,Ihaveabusyscheduleformysummervacation.
(主题句)Firstandforemost,Iwoulddoaparttimejob,sothatmyinterpersonalskillswouldbeimproved.
(拓展句1)Additionally,IwilltakeashorttriptoBeijingtotakeasummercourseintheNewOrientalSchool.
(拓展句2)Lastbutnotleast,maybeIwillworkasavolunteerfortheschoolasateachingassistant.(拓展句3)
Thesearemyplanforthesummervacation.What’syours?
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
Bestwishes!
【满分佳作】
①I’mterriblysorryIcouldn’treplytoyouremailwhichyousentmeaweekagoimmediately.②Iwassooccupiedwiththefinalexams.
Asforthecomingsummerholiday,Iwillfirstdoaparttimejobinafast-foodrestaurant.③NotonlywillIearnsomemoneybutIwillalsogainsomesocialexperiencethroughit.④AndthenIwillgoonatriptoSichuan,wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Finally,I’llgotoYa’antoworkasavolunteer.⑤Thereisnodoubtthatchildrentherearebadlyinneedofhelp.⑥IhopewhatIwilldowillmakeagreatdifferencetothem.
Doyouhaveanythingforthesummer?
Pleasewritetomeandletmeknow.
Bestwishes.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【满分赏析】
①先用I’mterriblysorry…对未能及时回信道歉,terribly加强了道歉的语气。
②接着简单讲明原因;
beoccupiedwithsth./doingsth.(忙于某事/做某事)的运用体现了作者的语言功底,不是用简单的词汇busy,可给评卷老师留下好印象。
③Notonly…butalso…连接并列句,属于本书在“写作基础”部分训练的句型。
注意:
notonly在句首,谓语动词要用倒装形式;
gainsomesocialexperience的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。
④运用了where引导的定语从句修饰地点,使句式避免简单化;
placesofinterest(名胜古迹)也运用得当。
考生需注意积累,否则只能生造出中式英语。
⑤运用了Thereisnodoubtthat…(……毫无疑问)这样的万能句型;
bebadlyinneedofhelp(急需帮助)这一短语也使评卷老师眼前一亮。
⑥makeadifference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。
本篇句句高级、词词地道,怎能不拿满分?
【模拟题1】
假设你是李华,前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。
你本答应要参加她的生日聚会,但你当时正忙着准备期末考试,忘了赴约。
请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救的方法。
【参考范文】
DearAnne,
IamindeedverysorrythatIdidn'
tattendyourbirthdaypartythedaybeforeyesterday.
Itwasniceofyoutoinvitemetoyourbirthdayparty.Ishouldhavecomeandcelebratethepreciousmomentwithyou.Butthefinalexaminationsarearoundthecorner,soIwassobusypreparingfortheexamsthatIforgottheappointment.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingaftertheexaminations?
ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechancetogettogether.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.
Yourstruly,
【模拟题2】
假如你是李华,好朋友Sarah邀请你去参加他的生日聚会,但由于弟弟突然生病,医生说需要住院5天左右,请写信给Sarah表达未能和老朋友一起给他庆祝生日的歉意,并请Sarah帮忙转达对朋友们的问候。
【优秀满分范文】
DearSarah,
IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletoattendyourbirthdaypartynextThursdayevening.Thatisowingto(因为)thefactthat(同位语从句)myyoungerbrothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentoahospitalthismorning.Ihavetogothereimmediatelyandtakecareofhim.Astoldbythedoctorincharge,itwilltakearoundfivedaysforhimtorecoverandIhaveaskedmybossforaleave.
IreallyregretthatIcannotgotocelebrateyourbirthdaypersonallyandwouldmisstheperfectchanceofenjoyingmyselfwithallouroldfriends.Ihavechosenasmallgiftforyouandwillsendittoyoutomorrowtoshowmybestwishes.Besides,pleasegivemyregardstoourfriendswhenyoumeetthemattheparty.
Cordially,(sincerely)
【模拟题3】
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现,手机被收走。
请用英语给外教写一封道歉信,内容应包括以下要点:
1.表示歉意;
2.解释上课使用手机的原因;
3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。
DearMr.Jackson,
I’mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.
Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidnotusethemobilephonefornoreason.Iwastryingtofindapart-timejoblastweekendthatday,Igotajobofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.
Anyway,usingamobilephoneintheclassroomisnotacceptabletoanyteacher.Iswearitwillnothappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktokeepintouchwithothers.
Willyoubesokindtogiveitbacktome?
Thanksamillion!
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国同学Jim写一封电子邮件,告知周末你不能参加他的生日聚会,希望他谅解。
邮件的内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明理由;
3.告知已准备了生日礼物。
DearJim,
I’mterriblysorrythatIcan’tgotoyourbirthdaypartythisSaturday.MyunclewillcometoBeijingfromAmericaonSaturdayafternoon.Myparentswantmetogototheairportwiththemtopickhimup.Soit’sapitythatIcan’thavefunwithyouthen.
Iwishyouahappybirthdayandhopeeverythingwillgowell.Bytheway,IhaveboughtthelatestCDofJayChouforyouasabirth