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如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
举例如下：
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。
（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper;
approaches替换ways;
implement替换carryout;
sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）。
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very；
（个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩）
thrilling替换exciting；
sth.exertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth；
google替换search；
anarmyof替换alotof。
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular；
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…；
Advancement替换development；
Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto；
Current（currently）替换now；
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.；
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople；
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的。
（itgoeswithoutexaggerationthat更好）
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith；
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法；
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动；
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides；
Deliver替换send。
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型；
其次however作为插入语；
再次，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto。
Emerging替换appearing（fading替换disappearing）；
Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词。
（直接用netizen更好）
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'
lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides；
Computersdoplay，使用do表示强调；
Positive替换important/good等；
Asliceof替换apartof；
Unfavorable替换bad；
Impacts替换effects/influences；
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语；
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues）替换advantage（defects替换disadvantage）
；
Facet替换aspect。
以下是45个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:
1.individuals,characters,folks替换people,persons.
2.positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good.
3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad（如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换。
）
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost替换many.
注：
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5.asliceof,quietafew替换some.
6.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat替换think（因为是书面语，所以要加that）。
7.affair,business,matter替换thing.
8.shared代common.
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits.
10.formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion.
11.Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.）
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything或littleornothing替换hardly.
13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful.
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser替换customer.
15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very.
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable.
17.indispensable替换necessary
18.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin.
19.captureone'
sattention替换attractone'
sattention.
20.facet,demension,sphere代aspect.
21.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear.
22.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
23.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth.
24.desire替换want.
25.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto.
26.bearinmindthat替换remember.
27.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）。
28.interaction替换communication.
29.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth.
30.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance.
31.nextto/virtuallyimpossible替换nearly/almostimpossible.
32.regarding/concerning替换about.
33.crucial/paramount替换important.
34.第一（inthefirstplace/thefirstandforemost）;
第二（thereisonemorepoint,Ishouldtouchon,that….）;
第三（thelastbutnottheleast）.
35.assiduous替换hard-working
36.arduous替换difficult
37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged替换poor（因为poor通常含有贬义）
38.demonstrate/manifest替换show
39.invariably替换always
40.perilous/hazardous替换dangerous（写社会类作文时常用，说什么社会现象是不好的，有害的）
41.formidable替换difficult
42.quintessential替换typical（举例时常用，例如：
aquintessentialexampleshouldbecitedthat=forexample;
forinstance）
43.distinguished替换famous
44.feasible替换possible
45.consequently,accordingly替换so
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'
smore,moreover,inaddition,first（second,etc.）,
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first（second,etc.）,next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude：
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
（e.g.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.）.
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone，regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或：
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1）Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或：
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2）Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslong
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