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学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫,所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。
【范文】
NoPains,NoGains
Peopleattemptingataskmaybediscouragedinfrontofdifficulties.Theystartwithagreatinterestandpassion.Whentheyfindthatthetaskwilltakemuchmoreeffortthantheythought,theirinterestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes.Atthattime,theyarelikelytohavetheideaofreapingagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor.Theoldsaying“Nopains,nogains”comesasawordofcheertothesediscouragedpersons.Notaskthatisreallyworthdoingcanbedoneeithereasilyorquickly.Nomasteryofanyknowledgeorskillcanbegainedwithoutpainstakingefforts.
Westudentsshoulderthetaskoflearningknowledgethatcallsforexertion.Toimproveourgradesiswhateverystudentwants.Wemayenvythosewhohaveachievedexcellence,andwonderwhatmakesthemsucceed.Infact,theirsecretofsuccessisnosecret.Itdependslargelyontheirefforts.Goodgradesonlybelongtohardworkingstudents.
Manythanksforthefavoryoudidforme!
【评语】
该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述,层次清楚,语言流畅易懂。
“interestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes”中词语搭配讲究,“reapingagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor”用另一个习惯表达法点出了“NoPains,NoGains”的含义,同时又避免了重复。
文章句式灵活,长短搭配得当,使文章朗朗上口,虽然是议论文,但却没有枯燥之感。
根据下面的提示写一篇短文,内容须包括下面几个要点。
没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。
事业成功须非凡的干劲。
有些人害怕困难,则一事无成。
WherethereisaWill,ThereisaWay
Nomancanwinsuccesswithoutstrongwill.Wehearsomemenhavegotgoodresults,buthardlyrealizethatthegreatmenhadbeenmakingmoreeffortsbeforetheyachievedsuccess.
Successrequiresanunusualamountofenergytoovercomedifficulties.Soitisimportantforustohavegreatresolution.
Somementendtobeafraidofdifficulties.Iftheymeetwithsomedifficulties,theywillgivein.Sotheygetnothingeventually.
Solet&
#39;
smakeupourminds,sticktoitandsurelywinsuccessinourcareer.
Focusonthemostimportantthingstodotohelpyourorganizationbesuccessful.Don&
tfocusontheeasiestthings.
对这种提纲式作文,一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容,但又无须拘泥于提纲,更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。
对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力,大胆地创作扩展。
很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就,但不是所有人都能取得胜利。
成功需要顽强的意志,锲而不舍的努力,勤奋学习的精神。
请你以此为主要内容,准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。
Thewaytosuccess
Everyonetriestoachievesuccessinhis/hercareer.Butsomefinallyattaintheiraimswhileothersfail.Why?
Somecontinuetheircausetotheendthroughlongperiodofhardstruggles,butothersareeasilydisappointedandstophalfway.
Strongwill,perseveranceanddiligencearethethreeessentialsofsuccess.Amanofstrongwillandperseverancealwayshasaninflexiblespirit.Hestickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.Lifeisshortandwehavetoomuchtodo.Withoutdiligencenoonecanachieveanything.
Ibelievethatwherethereisawillthereisaway,andthatsuccessbelongstothosewhocanmakeconstantefforts.
Don&
tbeafraidoflife.Believethatlifeisworthliving,andyourbeliefwillhelpcreatethefact.
这是一篇议论文,作者首先提出问题,再提出自己观点:
意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋,是成功的三大要素。
作者在结尾,巧妙地运用了谚语“wherethereisawillthereisaway”,使文章增色不少。
坚强的意志(Man&
sStrongWill)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。
Strongwillisuniversallyregardedasaverypraisablequality.
Therehavebeenmanyexamplesthatsuccesscanbeachievedbystrongwill.
Itisnoteasytocultivateastrongwill.
Man&
sStrongWill
Strongwillisuniversallyregardedasaverypraisablequality.Itisneithergeniusnorextraordinaryabilitythatgivesuspowertodealwithandovercomewhateverhardshipthatbefalls.Itisstrongwillthatenablesustoendurethetryingsituationandtoattainourgoals.Strongwillgivesuslightwhenweareinthedark,andencouragementwhenwearefrustrated.Withthismeritoriousquality,noenemycanoverwhelmus,andnoobstaclescanstandinourway.Asthesayinggoes,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.
Allpainhelpstomakeusrise,how-evermuchwemayhateitatthetime.
Therehavebeenmanyexamplesthatsuccesscanbeachievedbystrongwill.DuringtheLongMarch,theRedArmysoldiersmetwiththegreatesthardshipmenhaveeverexperienced.Theyhadnothingtoeatbutgrassrootsandbarksoftrees.Itwastheirstrongwillthatmadethemdefeatthehardship.HelenKeller,astrongwilledAmericanblindwoman,masteredtheEnglishlanguageandbecameawell-knowneducator.Suchinstancesabound,andsufficeitjusttoenumeratethetwo.
Developa
hightoleranceforambiguity----you&
llbemoresatisfied.
Itisnoteasytocultivateastrongwill.Firstofall,wemustsetupafirmfaithinourcause,namely,thecause
ofcommunism,andbereadytodevoteourlivestoit.Secondly,wemustlearnfromstrong-willedpersons,especially,fromrevolutionarymartyrswhofoughtforcommunismtothelastdropofblood.Finally,weshouldboldlygothroughtrialsandhardshipstotrainourwillsoastogetridoftheweakpointsofourmoralcharacter.
本文为议论文。
首段的“neither?
nor?
”“Itisstrongwillthat?
”,和“noenemy?
noobstacles?
”的运用,加强了文章的语气,突出了坚强意志的重要价值。
段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。
第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦?
凯勒这两个例子,有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。
末段谈如何培养坚强的意志,层次清晰,观点正确,具有说服力。
以“Don&
tStopHalfway”为题写一篇议论文。
论证具体结构完整字数100—150
tStopHalfway
Whenamanisdoingsomework,hedesiressomebenefitfromit.Inordertogetthisbenefit,themustdothetasktotheendandcompletelyfinishit.
Tofinishatask,whetherhardornotrequirespatienceandfirmness.Thereforewhenyouhavesomeworktodo,youmustdoitfaithfully,irrespectiveofthedifficulty.Difficultiesandobstaclesareunavoidable;
ifyouturnyourbackonmeetingthem,youwillsucceedinnothing,butifyoucanovercomethem,youwillaccomplishsomething.
Tostophalfwayisverybad.Supposethatapreciousstoneisatagreatdistancefromyouandyouwanttoobtainit;
youmustreachforit;
youmustnotstophalfway.Ifyoustophalfway,youwillnotonlygetnothing,butalsolosesomething,becauseyourtimeandstrengthwillbewasted.
Itisagoodthingforonetodoonethingatatime,andneverstophalfway.
Cultivateareputationforbeingreliableandhardworking,evenifitmeansbuckingpeerpressure.
作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力,告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间、精力。
段落安排逐层深入,循循善诱。
全文整体结构完整、自然。
题目:
Failure(失败)是一个人经常遇到的。
失败不是好事,因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。
但是,失败也是好事,它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。
试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。
Failure
Nearlyeverybodyregardsfailureasabadthing.Theeffortswehavemadeseemtobeofnouseandwefeelverydisappointed.Somepeopleevenlosethecouragetostartagainorloseinterestinlifewhenthefailureisaverygreatone.
Butfailurecanalsobenefitus.Itcanteachusagoodlessonandmakeusexperienced.Also,wecanrealizeourownshortcomingsandgetabetterknowledgeofourselves.Sowhenwestartagain,wecansucceedmoreeasily.
Therefore,failurenotonlydisappointsusbutalsobenefitsus.Whenwefail,weshouldmakefulluseofourfailureandlearnfromourexperience.Then,wemaysucceedinthefuture.
Lifeismadeupofambiguousvictoriesandnebulousdefeats----claimthemallasvictories!
本文最大的优点是正反对照,条理清楚。
高考作文时间很短,所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。
本文脉络清楚,浅显易懂,应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。
此外,本篇行文简练,显得干净利落。
要求】
每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历,失败对于我们来说,到底意味着什么?
请你按如下提纲写一篇文章,谈谈你对失败的理解。
失败是生活中的常事。
人们对失败的态度各不相同。
就我而言,我认为失败?
IsFailureaBadThing
Failureisquiteacommonthinginourlife.Aslongaswedothingswewillsurelyencounterdifficulties.Ofcourseweshouldtryourbesttogetoverthem,butinmanycases,itisnotsoeasy,orevenimpossible.Thenhowshouldwefacefailure?
Differentpeopletakedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.Whenfacedwithfailure,somepeoplebecomefrustratedandlosetheirselfconfidence.Theyrefusetomakeanyfurtherefforts.Thesepeoplewillprobablyneveramounttoanythinginlife.Somepeoplejustdon&
tfearfailure.Theyfirmlybelievethatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Asaresult,notonlycanfailurestopthem,buttheydrawusefullessonsfromitandtryevenharder.Suchpeoplearesuretosucceedsomeday.
Asforme,Idon&
tthinkfailureisabadthing.Failurecanneverdiscouragemebutonlyeichmyexperienceandsteelmywill.Withthispositiveattitudeinmind,IwilltryhardinanythingI&
mdeterminedtoaccomplishandattainsuccessintheend.
本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。
首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的,末句用了一句设问,起到了承上启下的作用。
第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度,先写错误观点进行铺垫,而后再写正确观点。
这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度,同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。
末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。
全文层次清楚,段落间衔接紧密而自然,主题突出,语言流畅,用词准确。
失败,是人人都不愿体验的结果。
有人说失败使人消沉,有人说失败是成功之母。
你对失败的态度怎样?
写一篇短文。
字数150—200字,题目自拟。
IsFailureaBadThing?
Failureisacommonthinginourdailylives.Asstudents,Wesometimesfailtogethighscoresonourexaminations.Whenweplaygame,wesometimescan&
tavoidlosingtoothers.Andtherearetimeswhenwefailtodosatisfactorywork.Allthesefailureshappennaturallyandalmosteveryoneofushashadsuchexperiences.
However,therearedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.Somepeopleloseheartinfailure,theythinktheworldhascometoanend.Somepeopledon&
ttakefailureseriouslyandjustignoreit,whilesomeotherslearnmuchfromit.
Inmyopinion,whatreallycountsisnotfailureitself,butwhatwethinkoffailureanddoafterfailure.Aslongaswebelieveinourselvesanddon&
tgiveup,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromourfailure,We&
llcertainlybesuccessfulintheend.SoI&
mneverafraidoffailure,forIbelievethatfailureisnotabadthing,butthemotherofsuccess.
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