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请围绕“HowdoyoupreferyourEnglishclassestobetaught?
InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese?
”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。
授课形式一:
只用英语
优点:
有助于提高听说能力等
缺憾:
不易听懂等
结论:
……
授课形式二:
英语、汉语兼用
易于理解等
缺憾:
英语氛围不浓等
注意:
1.词数100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
2.参考词汇:
atmosphere氛围
满分文
(一)
IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinese,whoseadvantageisthatitiseasyforustounderstandwhattheteachertalksabout.TheteacherfirstteachestheclassinEnglish,andthensheexplainsthosethatarehardtounderstandtoussothatwegetabetterknowingofthepassage.Thatwillbegoodforus.
However,teachingtheclassintwolanguageswillmaketheEnglishatmospherenotsostrong.SomestudentswhowishtobetaughtinEnglishwillbedisappointed.
Exceptforthedisadvantage,Ithinkitisreallygoodtoheartwolanguagesinclasses.Itcanmakeusmorefamiliarwiththeforeignculture.
名师指导:
审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。
无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。
本文运用多种复杂句式,整体看来是不错的。
文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。
其他出彩短语的使用也很地道,可以参看好句中的分析。
背诵内容:
1.advantagen.优点
2.befamiliarwith,对某人熟悉
3.atmospheren.气氛
满分文
(二)
IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglishbecauseitishelpfulforustoimprovetheabilityofspeakingandlisteninginaveryshorttime.IhavestronginterestinEnglishstudyandforeignculture,soI’dliketobetotallyimmersedintheatmosphereofEnglishsothatIcanquicklymakeprogress.That’swhyIprefertotalEnglish.However,sinceweareallEnglishbeginners,it’sreallyhardtounderstandallthattheteachersays.SometimesweneedChineseexplanation.SomyviewpointisthatwearetaughtnotonlyinEnglishbutalsousingChineseasaminorwaytoexplainthingsthatarehardtounderstand.
本文写作十分成功。
语言和句式是本文最大的特点。
好词中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而准确,从而映衬了词汇的重要性;
其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。
应背好词:
1.immersev.沉浸
2.explanationn.解释
3.makeprogress取得进步
2.图表作文:
今年寒假,你参加了社会实践活动,去某旅行社当业余导游。
请根据该旅行社提供的数据和你的所见所闻,用英语写一篇短文,作为寒假作业交给你的英语老师。
NumberofpeopleinCityXtravelling
abroadin1996,2001and2006
要求:
1.简析表格,说明产生这种现象的原因;
2.结合漫画,谈谈境外旅游出现的问题;
3.针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法(至少两点);
4.词数120左右;
5.参考词汇:
吐痰
spit
v.
Whenpeople’slifeisgettingbetterandbetter,moreandmorepeoplechoosetospendtheirholidaysabroad.Theyear2006seesasharpincreaseinthenumberofoverseastravelerscomparedwiththeyear2001,whenthenumberwasalreadymuchlargerthanthatoftheyear1996.It’sagoodthingthatChinesetourismisdevelopingveryfast.However,reportsaboutpeople’sbadmannersfloodin.SomeareevenaskedifallChinesespitandlittereverywhere.ThepoorbehaviorhasdonegreatharmtotheimageofChina,whichisreallyshameful.
Chinahaslongbeenregardedasacountrywithgoodmanners.Everybodyshouldkeepsomedo’sanddon’tsintheirmindtoguidetheirbehaviorinpublic,homeandabroad.Winrespectforyourselfandourcountry!
内容要点
1.简析表格内容;
2.出境旅游人数快速增长的原因,如:
生活水平的提高(学生需自己发挥)
3.漫画中的问题:
随地吐痰,乱扔垃圾
4.个人的看法,指出这些行为是不文明的;
要提倡社会公德(学生需自己发挥至少两点)
该篇文章完全完成了试题规定的任务。
准确、清楚地表达了图表、漫画和要求中的内容,要点无遗漏,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,达到了预期的写作目的。
属于很不错的高分范文!
3.图画作文:
根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
1.词数:
100左右
2.生词:
通讯:
communicate
互联网:
theInternet
Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthewayofcommunicationinpeople’slife.
Inthepast,peoplekeptintouchwitheachothermainlybywritinglettersorusingthepublictelephone.Butnowalmosteveryonehashisownmobilephone.Peoplecancommunicatewitheachotheralmostatanyplaceandatanytime.What’smore,peoplehaveeasyaccesstotheInternet,whichenablesthemtosendandreceivee-mailswhenevertheylike.Withthesechanges,people’spaceoflifehasbeenquickenedandpeople’sworkhasbeenmademoreefficient.Itusedtotakeseveraldaystohearfromeachother,butnowittakesonlyseveralminutes,eveniftheyareintwodifferentcountries.
Inaword,peoplehaveaneasierlifenowadays.
名师点评:
此类文章首先要构思文章结构
开头:
总起即说什么
常用句型:
1.
Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesince…
2.Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…
3.WiththegrowingpopularityofInternetsurfinginChina,thequalityofourlivesisimproving.
4.Therearesomethreemajorvaluesofowningacar,Tobeginwith…Next…last...Thereare,ontheotherhand,morereasonsagainstit.First…,Second…,Finally…
主体:
即怎么说?
可用举例、对比、分析、数字、描写等。
列举过去的情况Take…forexample,inthepastshe…./sheusedtodobesides…,what’smore.
列举现在的情况butnow,notonlydo/canhe…butalsohe…;
besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore…
结尾:
总结inshort;
inaword;
asaresult
4.开放作文:
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(groupdancingcompetition),班长希望大家积极参与。
对此谈谈你的想法。
Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,Ihavesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.
Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityformetorelaxmyself,whichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,IthinkIamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwillbeagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.
Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1)你是否会参加比赛;
2)你做出该决定的具体理由。
所谓开放“作文”,是相对于我们过去一直沿用的“书面表达”这种指导性写作(GuidedWriting)而言的。
它是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制较少的、留给考生自由发挥空间更多的考查学生书面表达能力的一种题型。
开放作文属于命题作文,考生要根据所给命题,独立进行构思,并必须做适当的发挥。
它在一定程度上考查了考生的写作能力,即要求考生根据写作动机选择相应的写作策略,并根据自己已经具备的相应知识完成写作。
以下是开放作文常用句型
描述部分
1.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,aboyisdoing…
Aswecanseeinthepicture,therearetwopeoplestaringataplantgrowinginapot.
Inthepicture,wecanseeabucketmadeofwoodenboardindifferentlength.
2.Therebe…doing
有四只小鸟翱翔在高高的天空上.
Therearefouryoungbirdsflyinghighinthesky.
3.See…doing
我们能看到一只大鸟在巢中休息
Inthepicture,wecanseeabigbirdrestinginanest.
4.…while…(对比)
在风中,大树折断了,而小草则依然挺立.
Inthewind,thetalltreebreaksintotwohalves,whiletheshortgrassremainsstandingstraight.
Intheeyesofthemanontheleft,theplantswillgrowthickandtall,whileintheother’sview,theplantswillbedyingprettysoon.
5.地点状语放句首,主句全部倒装.
地点状语+live/fly/sit/stand/grow/be+名词+非限定性定语从句.
在蜘蛛网的中间,坐着一个小孩,他整日坐在电脑前面和别人聊天和打游戏.
Inthemiddleofthespiderwebsitsachild,whoisoccupiedinchattingwithothersandplayingonlinegamesinfrontofthecomputeralldaylong.
Inthewindstandsabigtree,whichisblowntoonesideandalmostbrokenintotwohalves.
Onthesurfaceofthebigclockaretwopeople,oneofwhomisanoldmanandtheotherayoungboy.
Inthemiddleofthepictureisamandressedinoldfashionedclotheswhoiscuttingthebushesintothesameshape.
6.Itisobviousthat…/obviously(逻辑引领,承上启下)
显而易见,这个孩子已经因为迷上网络而忽略学习.
It’sobviousthatthechildissoaddictedtotheInternetthatheforgetswhatheshoulddo.
解释部分
1.Thispicturesetsusthinkingandwemaygainenlightenmentfromwhatthepicturereallymeans.
2.Whatthepictureconveysgoesfarbeyondonlyapictureitself.Itcarriesdeepermeanings.
3.Myunderstandingofthepictureisthat…
4.Seeingthepicture,Ithinkthat…
5.Wecanoftenseethissimilarphenomenoninourdailylife.
Itisverycommoninoursociety……
Thisphenomenonisnotunusualinoursociety
Thisreflectsacommonphenomenoninoursociety
6.Thepictureremindsmeofthefactthat…
7.Thepicturesetsusthinkingalot.
8.Itisobviousthatthepicturehasaprofound/hidden/ironymeaning.
9.Thepicturearousesourinterestofguessingwhattheartistwantstotellusandatthesametimewecanlearnsomethingfromit.
10.Whilethepicturelooksveryfunny,itreallyhasaprofoundmeaningforustotakeintoconsideration.
11.Thepurposeoftheartistwhodrawsthecartoonpictureisclearandinstructiveaswell.
12.Obviously,wecanlearnalotfromthecartoonpicture.Whatthepicturetriestotellusisthat…
结尾部分
1.Inmyview,nomatterwhereweareworking,weoughttocooperatewithourcolleagueswell.Andonlyinthiswaycanwecreateaharmoniousworkingatmosphereandworkmoreefficiently.
2.Frommyperspective,weakasthegrassis,itcanstandstronglyinthebigwindwhenthebigtreebreaksinhalf.Inotherwords,thegrassappearsweak,butithasastrongmind.Thetreelooksstronger,butitcannotconquerdifficultiesandevengivesuphopeintheend.Sowecanlearnalessonfromthepicture-aperson’sinnerstrengthismuchpowerfulthanphysicalstrength.
3.Weoughttoholdapositiveattitudetowardsourlife.Onlybythismeanscanwelivehappilyandhealthily.
4.Thepicturetellsusthatweoughttohelpsomeoneinourteamtocompletehimself.Onlybythismeanscanourteamworkbetterandachievesuccessintheend.
5.Onlywhenweseeothers’advantagescanwelearnfromthemandmakegreaterprogressdaybyday.
6.Onlybychoosingthemostsuitablemethodsforourstudiescanwegainasmuchaspossibleintheend.
Thepicturearousesourinterestofguessingwhattheartistwantstotellusandat