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1．Hewenttohisneighbour’shouseasfastashecould.（郭诗琪）

2．Hephoned“119”asfastashecould.（梁雁仙）

3．Theneighbourandthefire-fighterswereverythankfultoJack.（恩裕）

4．Jackfeltreallyhappybecausehecouldhelpedotherswhoneedshelp.（煜华）

5．ThoughJackandhisneighbourwereverytired,theydidn’tgiveupputtingoutthefireanddideverythingtheycouldtohelpthefirefighters.（婉颖）

6．（Withoutthinkinganything）,herushedtothetelephoneatonceandcalled“119”forhelp.（梓宇）

7．Henearlyjumpedoutofhisskin.（国华/笑华）

8．WhatabraveboyJackis!

（霍俊杰）

改正错误：

host—ownerstrongfire

1．Thefirefighterssaid“whatahelpfulboyJackis!

”

2．Jackcalledthefirefighterbyphoneatonce

3．Whenthefirefighterarrivedthehousewhichwasonfire,thefirehasbeenputout.afterthis,thehost……

4．Heranandcallforhelptothefirefighterswithphone.

5．Itwasalotofthickfirecomingoutofthehouse…..

6．Hegotupatonceandphonecallthefirefightertocallforhelp.

7．Jack’sneighbourwasthankshealot.

8．Hisneighboursaythankyoutohim.

9．Jackwasatoncephonethefirefightertoaskforhelp.

10．Thefirefighterweresaidtohim“Howkindofyou”

11．“Howgoodaboy!

12．“Whatabravepeople!

”

13．Thefirewasburningseriously

14．Intheend,thefirewasputout.BensaidtoJack“Thankyouforhelpmealot”thefirefightersaid“youaresuchacleverboy!

”ButJackthought“Notsaythanks,whatanunforgettabledayitis!